08-11-2015, 07:16 PM | #1 |
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Reserve Battle: Greed vs Mr. J - GREED WINS
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08-17-2015, 07:39 PM | #3 |
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I'll post later tonight....10?
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08-18-2015, 01:18 AM | #4 |
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Fuck this puppet, this faggot ain't speakin' on shit let him clench his lips harder
"It's over" before it started, if he could order a rimjob. he'd want the 2000 Vince Carter all I'm thinkin' is how many times he gon' flip that avatar I sense the simplicity in you one punch you'll get 8, puttin' you on your back quicker than an infinity symbol.. 'Greed" tryna make it sound like you makin' money off text, that fame is rare.. but I understand why you stand by that logic, you really don't have change to spare you couldn't spend a quarter on a gumball machine without it weighing your conscience that makes me question how you chopping up rocks with the razors you found while staying at your moms crib either way I forget this battle happening so like your girl on my lap I'm bout to ounce you winning here is classic, but it's always going to be reasonable without the doubt @Greed
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08-18-2015, 02:09 AM | #5 |
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I call the shots, if u dont think its fair, draw
Everyone already knows u Mistah J.. AIR BALL Lol. Whining about dead man but ima split yo neck sideways U such a baby joker u gon be considered knocked the fuck out by next friday Sipping cosmos outta two straws, ur lifestyle fuckin wrong Bf slips u that date rape the only time ur man poem something strong As far as writing prestige this faggots is fucking low Calling yourself the clown prince wont ever raise your status as a juggalo U are the joke. It seems you dont understand the issue Theres a big difference between the world laughing at you and with you _ Last edited by Greed; 08-18-2015 at 02:15 AM. |
08-19-2015, 06:37 PM | #6 | ||
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Greed also had a decent verse, i liked the opener and closer in particular, but ive probably seen better verses from you, cause those were still a lil light. the rest of the bars werent bad, just nothing that stood out as special. Leaning towards greed with the stronger bars and fewer misses. Vote: Greed |
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08-20-2015, 09:43 PM | #7 |
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all I'm thinkin' is how many times he gon' flip that avatar I sense the simplicity in you
one punch you'll get 8, puttin' you on your back quicker than an infinity symbol.. 'Greed" tryna make it sound like you makin' money off text, that fame is rare.. but I understand why you stand by that logic, you really don't have change to spare Vs Lol. Whining about dead man but ima split yo neck sideways U such a baby joker u gon be considered knocked the fuck out by next friday Sipping cosmos outta two straws, ur lifestyle fuckin wrong Bf slips u that date rape the only time ur man poem something strong U are the joke. It seems you dont understand the issue Theres a big difference between the world laughing at you and with you V/Greed, pretty cool battle here. J had acouple of good lines that hit nice, but i felt he had misses that were off & it hurt him here. Greed's opener coulda been fire worded diff but i thought the baby joker bar was good, overall he was a lil more consistent then j w/ one more quote. Props to both. |
08-21-2015, 03:38 AM | #8 |
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Fuck this puppet, this faggot ain't speakin' on shit let him clench his lips harder
"It's over" before it started, if he could order a rimjob. he'd want the 2000 Vince Carter damn next level shit... wording was off man but the concept is crazy, I fuck wit it all I'm thinkin' is how many times he gon' flip that avatar I sense the simplicity in you one punch you'll get 8, puttin' you on your back quicker than an infinity symbol.. this somethin I seen before... real predictable 'Greed" tryna make it sound like you makin' money off text, that fame is rare.. but I understand why you stand by that logic, you really don't have change to spare cool idea, not bad. the executions not there to me though you couldn't spend a quarter on a gumball machine without it weighing your conscience that makes me question how you chopping up rocks with the razors you found while staying at your moms crib ha ... long, but not bad either way I forget this battle happening so like your girl on my lap I'm bout to ounce you winning here is classic, but it's always going to be reasonable without the doubt saw what u tryna go for but didn't tie it together right... wording hurt u a lot homie vs. I call the shots, if u dont think its fair, draw Everyone already knows u Mistah J.. AIR BALL this was fresh... unorthodox wording but hit nice Lol. Whining about dead man but ima split yo neck sideways U such a baby joker u gon be considered knocked the fuck out by next friday haha yo I like this too Sipping cosmos outta two straws, ur lifestyle fuckin wrong Bf slips u that date rape the only time ur man poem something strong creative shit... nothin wild but solid As far as writing prestige this faggots is fucking low Calling yourself the clown prince wont ever raise your status as a juggalo okay... coulda been executed better U are the joke. It seems you dont understand the issue Theres a big difference between the world laughing at you and with you tired concept to me, but works a little better for the personal aspect first off props to both for puttin on in Reserves cuz this was quality shit I don't think no one got Mr J first reference but the rimjob / Carter dunk idea dope as hell Aside from that he had a couple others I liked but wording was KILLIN em throughout Even on the opener I think that's why people missin it..... but the concepts were solid 8 infinity didn't work for me though, just seen the play before. & closer too sloppy Opener nameplay from Greed was smooth... one a them 'so simple but works perfect' to me Baby joker heat, good reference. Poem was a creative play... fell of a little bit after... But overall a nice verse from Greed & a little more consistent throughout, so got this one. good shit V/ Greed |
08-22-2015, 01:56 AM | #9 |
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Fuck this puppet, this faggot ain't speakin' on shit let him clench his lips harder
"It's over" before it started, if he could order a rimjob. he'd want the 2000 Vince Carter vs Lol. Whining about dead man but ima split yo neck sideways U such a baby joker u gon be considered knocked the fuck out by next friday Sipping cosmos outta two straws, ur lifestyle fuckin wrong Bf slips u that date rape the only time ur man poem something strong Decent read here alot of lines that feel flat in comparison of where u couldve both took them but the winner got this 2 Quotes to 1.. v/Greed
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08-22-2015, 05:32 AM | #10 |
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I got Mr J's opener vs greeds first two which I thought were solid
I got greed here
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