09-03-2015, 07:28 AM | #1 |
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Hush vs. JShazo - OPEN FOR VOTES
FINALLY it’s here – the INTERSITE INVASION begins! A true Netcees first, this card is stacked with some of the illest textcees still actively participating in the game today… and Veritas vs Prelec. LULZ! You’ve all seen how hotly anticipated these matchups are, you’ve read the magazine and seen the battler profiles of everyone involved, you’ve watched the Lars video magazine which set the new fucking standard for anything similar that proceeds it. The time is now. It’s official, we’ve an entire card full of classics in the making and this shit is about to go DOWNNNN!!! Line limits: 14 lines (Unless otherwise agreed by both opponents prior to the battle) Video battle: 3.00 (3 MINS IN LENGTH, DATSHITCRAY!) CHECK IN’S DUE: 12 NOON TUESDAY 8TH SEPTEMBER (UK TIME) VERSES DUE: SATURDAY 12TH SEPTEMBER (UK TIME) Voting will only remain open for a further WEEK ONLY once battles are up and the final vote count will be tallied between both websites, ready for individual and team winners to be declared SO GET YOUR VOTES IN QUICKLY WHEN BATTLES ARE UP! Voting links etc will not be made mandatory, but is of course highly appreciated and everyone will be repped personally by President Lars! If you’ve any questions, feel free to @sraL me on the tag. Best of luck to both sides of competitors, keep it legit, I’ve got immense love for both you guys. That’s real talk. LET’S FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! @Hush @Victor. @JShazo
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09-03-2015, 07:32 AM | #2 |
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checking in, and who is Victor
EDIT: VICTOR IS ANOTHER HUSH ACCOUNT, THAT'S ALL - Lars Last edited by sral; 09-03-2015 at 07:38 AM. |
09-03-2015, 01:24 PM | #4 |
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i'm cool with 20.. leggo
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09-11-2015, 09:29 AM | #5 |
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He's ran through the boards, consider this a change of pace, I am beyond your element
That legend talk irrelevant, these punches'll have Hush changing face like Tommy Elliot These guns Brobdingnagian in range, one shot'll leave an amnion display See you fucked, when these arms up and the straps around Victor,its not a championship exchange See where we differ,I throw punches that'll result in a niggas facial features leaking You throw punches and insults,staring at another niggas facial features..critiquing Like "lets post nice photos, we can write about em" that to me is quite homo Fuck the personals the wrong thing said'll have me draw on this fruit like the NC site logo Bars, punchlines we both got em, but I'm relentless wit mine that's what sets us apart His driving record "high as fuck" this a DUI, you came in my lane just to receive a negative mark This is either gonna be classic or classified as a murder in the first Got shells ready to disperse, so when I move the hammer to Hush I'm not bringing order to a court I'll have ya chick spread out after she swallow the nine like a pitiful slut That's not a sexual reference I meant after I empty the clip in her gut Feel like I aint been on my shit lately, so I've been fiending to catch a cold homi Catch em on a stroll probably, its bang,bang,bang when that 40 pops hush like dont tell nooobody They wanna play em as street, cool I'll be in the cut wit the heat We'll see how this goof acts when i catch em wit the max like he P.J Pete This imagery like having a Sig light point blank at his head, result of the view is sloppy But for yall this situation like a tic bite, I just put the lime through a body. @Hush |
09-11-2015, 10:55 AM | #6 |
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ThAt 30/30 take ya lid off. Leave a njgga in fractions
Then close ya other 3 lids.. Two over ya eyes and one on ya casket even if u stole lines ud still be a wack fuckin pansy put u in a bag cuz u suck with every bite, thats gushers candy It's not a apple watch when I let it ring from my wrist So when this Mac in my lap let out a round it's not a air book ejecting a disk 1shot, gun won't "say it again" when I bust mines No subtitles no slow it downs. When I shoot I make sure u get it the first time !! skinny but my 40 cal big, I wasnt meant to fight spark ya porch up at the slightest motion, the red beam a sensor light knife work, type of nigga to poke til u bleed or get holy if I pop at ya chest, rounds on ya neck aint rosary beads Since a kid I turned to the gun. That's megatron 2 nines.. they go off when they around each other like they cant get along Big chopper. Run up in ya suburbs and merk ya block I got a machine to talk to you nerds, thats not urkel bot buck 50 to ya grill.. battling me like getting ya jaw shanked fronting like he brave when these lines in his face, thats indian warpaint this aint MK or street fighter, bitch nigga get hit with a semi this line got ur name on it, clip like ur life bar Im leaving it empty
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09-11-2015, 11:07 AM | #7 |
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09-11-2015, 03:33 PM | #8 |
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These guns Brobdingnagian in range, one shot'll leave an amnion display
See you fucked, when these arms up and the straps around Victor,its not a championship exchange Like "lets post nice photos, we can write about em" that to me is quite homo Fuck the personals the wrong thing said'll have me draw on this fruit like the NC site logo Bars, punchlines we both got em, but I'm relentless wit mine that's what sets us apart His driving record "high as fuck" this a DUI, you came in my lane just to receive a negative mark I'll have ya chick spread out after she swallow the nine like a pitiful slut That's not a sexual reference I meant after I empty the clip in her gut Feel like I aint been on my shit lately, so I've been fiending to catch a cold homi Catch em on a stroll probably, its bang,bang,bang when that 40 pops hush like dont tell nooobody Vs. ThAt 30/30 take ya lid off. Leave a njgga in fractions Then close ya other 3 lids.. Two over ya eyes and one on ya casket even if u stole lines ud still be a wack fuckin pansy put u in a bag cuz u suck with every bite, thats gushers candy It's not a apple watch when I let it ring from my wrist So when this Mac in my lap let out a round it's not a air book ejecting a disk skinny but my 40 cal big, I wasnt meant to fight spark ya porch up at the slightest motion, the red beam a sensor light Since a kid I turned to the gun. That's megatron 2 nines.. they go off when they around each other like they cant get along buck 50 to ya grill.. battling me like getting ya jaw shanked fronting like he brave when these lines in his face, thats indian warpaint that make sure u get it the first time & urkel bot lines from hush were bitten from url battles or other live battles tbh the 40 pop hush line from shazo was LOTB, but i got it quoted 6-5 bars in favor of hush V-hush |
09-11-2015, 04:43 PM | #9 |
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Real shit, No bias. i gotta go with Shaz. simply put his bars hit more with me. Hush was dope. Real dope. This was actually a pretty good match up in my opinion. Close but i got shaz winnnig by a hair.
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09-11-2015, 05:46 PM | #10 |
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Battle is also up at RMBVA for votes too!
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09-11-2015, 08:40 PM | #11 |
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He's ran through the boards, consider this a change of pace, I am beyond your element
That legend talk irrelevant, these punches'll have Hush changing face like Tommy Elliot Like "lets post nice photos, we can write about em" that to me is quite homo Fuck the personals the wrong thing said'll have me draw on this fruit like the NC site logo This imagery like having a Sig light point blank at his head, result of the view is sloppy But for yall this situation like a tic bite, I just put the lime through a body. this was cool thAt 30/30 take ya lid off. Leave a njgga in fractions Then close ya other 3 lids.. Two over ya eyes and one on ya casket It's not a apple watch when I let it ring from my wrist So when this Mac in my lap let out a round it's not a air book ejecting a disk 1shot, gun won't "say it again" when I bust mines No subtitles no slow it downs. When I shoot I make sure u get it the first time !! skinny but my 40 cal big, I wasnt meant to fight spark ya porch up at the slightest motion, the red beam a sensor light well yall were quit redundant in gun plays. I guess it was to be more on equal grounds cus each site has diff tastes. But shazo ur one bar had court and first that didn't rhyme..and ur critiquing bar sounded like u weren't done writing it like the punch was missing something. Hush I wish u would've went a bit more personal. This was close I can see either winning but for me, hush had better flow, and wording. v/hush |
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MVGT J Shazo
Classic battle, 2 guys here set the example, dropping first, could be the best battle of the entire first round out the gate. J shazo, don't know you are, but you brought it to Hush, who I ultimately consider one, if not the top head honcho of the NCG battle culture here at Netcees. J Shazo - saw you signed into the AOWL, kinda glad you did after your show here, stick around. Hush - New york nonchalant nigga, semi directed at you flow semi directed at me flow, look at me flow - braggadocio - short bar? Effective, Clean, To the point. J Shazo - long bar? Grimier, more animated, drawn out. Clear distinctions - Here at Netcees they favor the short bar over the long bar - thanks to cats like Hush who have influenced the culture here. J Shazo is from another site thought. Another realm though. That's why this whole shit could get interesting. Ultimately this site vs site shit is going to come down to long bar vs short bar. NC logo line did it. Hush had the war paint line, but nothing too original other than that casket line. J Shazo came with some shit that Only Hush could feel. Hush's verse coulda been about any random person. Hush's shit was too universal - he was on his mayweather shit - too much on the defense while J Shazo had something to prove like a younger Hush, came with the gusto. I got J shazo here in an upset. True story
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He's ran through the boards, consider this a change of pace, I am beyond your element
That legend talk irrelevant, these punches'll have Hush changing face like Tommy Elliot Okay These guns Brobdingnagian in range, one shot'll leave an amnion display See you fucked, when these arms up and the straps around Victor,its not a championship exchange Well. See where we differ,I throw punches that'll result in a niggas facial features leaking You throw punches and insults,staring at another niggas facial features..critiquing Lol Like "lets post nice photos, we can write about em" that to me is quite homo Fuck the personals the wrong thing said'll have me draw on this fruit like the NC site logo Solid Bars, punchlines we both got em, but I'm relentless wit mine that's what sets us apart His driving record "high as fuck" this a DUI, you came in my lane just to receive a negative mark Okay This is either gonna be classic or classified as a murder in the first Got shells ready to disperse, so when I move the hammer to Hush I'm not bringing order to a court Solid I'll have ya chick spread out after she swallow the nine like a pitiful slut That's not a sexual reference I meant after I empty the clip in her gut Cool Feel like I aint been on my shit lately, so I've been fiending to catch a cold homi Catch em on a stroll probably, its bang,bang,bang when that 40 pops hush likedont tell nooobody Sickkk They wanna play em as street, cool I'll be in the cut wit the heat We'll see how this goof acts when i catch em wit the max like he P.J Pete Okay This imagery like having a Sig light point blank at his head, result of the view is sloppy But for yall this situation like a tic bite, I just put the lime through a body. Solid ThAt 30/30 take ya lid off. Leave a njgga in fractions Then close ya other 3 lids.. Two over ya eyes and one on ya casket Solid even if u stole lines ud still be a wack fuckin pansy put u in a bag cuz u suck with every bite, thats gushers candy Okay It's not a apple watch when I let it ring from my wrist So when this Mac in my lap let out a round it's not a air book ejecting a disk Solid 1shot, gun won't "say it again" when I bust mines No subtitles no slow it downs. When I shoot I make sure u get it the first time !! Eh skinny but my 40 cal big, I wasnt meant to fight spark ya porch up at the slightest motion, the red beam a sensor light Cool knife work, type of nigga to poke til u bleed or get holy if I pop at ya chest, rounds on ya neck aint rosary beads Okay Since a kid I turned to the gun. That's megatron 2 nines.. they go off when they around each other like they cant get along Eh Big chopper. Run up in ya suburbs and merk ya block I got a machine to talk to you nerds, thats not urkel bot Heh okay buck 50 to ya grill.. battling me like getting ya jaw shanked fronting like he brave when these lines in his face, thats indian warpaint Cool this aint MK or street fighter, bitch nigga get hit with a semi this line got ur name on it, clip like ur life bar Im leaving it empty Eh V j shazo Ima say i think hush still recovering from that allen knight battle. Nigga used all his life force. Died from that pops line tho gs |
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I gotta go with the consensus here guys, Jshazo really surprised me as I never had heard of him before and had read hush before. The point is that Jshazo took out hush in his own style and had the two hardest bars in this battle, and the hammer to hush line was freaking really smart and well done. and the lime body line was an expert diss. Hush was adequate, but nothing really stood out. Well done. This is a classic.
MVGT J Shazo
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