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Mr. J · 09-23-2015, 12:04 AM

this is a compost heap, am I on those streets...
twisted in a rhythm as I continue onward, down, I'm beat.
I'm a renaissance man burning in my chariot
with my thoughts on blast, my determination will bury it..
carry it to heights that only a giraffe can grasp
back to back, soldiers rode out in golden Cadillac's
a swift snap to the chin a the pace a camera claps
I'm getting heated by the rain and the scene after that
play like mice on that drum roll with the rat a ta...
this is dedicated to the change that I gambled back
this is big bills, dice rolled, fuck yo' hotels where the mansions at?
I'm a cross breed, demons lost seed, longliving kamikaze
look now the buddah got me when living in the hot seat
carbon copied declaration living in wonder & mild concentration
modernized sensations wrapped in complicated condensation?
the fuck is that...I don't know but this is pretty weird huh
well since I'm a little cheered up, let me get an AOWL verse geared up...

Maximus · 09-24-2015, 02:59 AM

Shit was dope, my only issue with this is that it was short lol. I was just enjoying the flow and all before I suddenly reached the last line.. Cool ish bro

Frank · 09-24-2015, 05:26 PM

Squiggly

Mr. J · 09-24-2015, 10:58 PM

What's frosty breh

Pharaohs Army · 09-26-2015, 04:02 AM

writers

09-23-2015, 12:04 AM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	56 Minutes remaining this is a compost heap, am I on those streets... twisted in a rhythm as I continue onward, down, I'm beat. I'm a renaissance man burning in my chariot with my thoughts on blast, my determination will bury it.. carry it to heights that only a giraffe can grasp back to back, soldiers rode out in golden Cadillac's a swift snap to the chin a the pace a camera claps I'm getting heated by the rain and the scene after that play like mice on that drum roll with the rat a ta... this is dedicated to the change that I gambled back this is big bills, dice rolled, fuck yo' hotels where the mansions at? I'm a cross breed, demons lost seed, longliving kamikaze look now the buddah got me when living in the hot seat carbon copied declaration living in wonder & mild concentration modernized sensations wrapped in complicated condensation? the fuck is that...I don't know but this is pretty weird huh well since I'm a little cheered up, let me get an AOWL verse geared up... __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

09-24-2015, 05:26 PM	#3
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Squiggly __________________ *VETWORK*

09-24-2015, 10:58 PM	#4
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	What's frosty breh __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

09-26-2015, 04:02 AM	#5
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	writers Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 10-23-2016 at 08:35 PM.

09-24-2015, 02:59 AM	#2
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169472	Shit was dope, my only issue with this is that it was short lol. I was just enjoying the flow and all before I suddenly reached the last line.. Cool ish bro