Strange vs Unfukwitable - STRANGE WINS

[Orc]

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[King]

word

[Unfukwitable]

KAB00M!

[King]

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[Unfukwitable]

Ridin coattails of RB's worst reaps no benefits, where are u now?,
he's Shia LaBeouf in "Holes", Bout to get a Plot dug for followin 0's around.
U promote music with high hopes, but ya sound is Idle;
People scrap ya .WAV quicker than Kanye did for an Album title.
He's on a decline & got better chances prayin for daamn rain
even in this here "moment, umm!" that's somethin u can't gain.
When 11 leak his brain, shit'll never be the same;
Once his yolk bacon on his muffin top, it'll put Eggs Benedict recipes to shame.
No one cares about this faggot, listen mate;
if It's a platform for a Strange, fruit - Billie Holiday's gettin paid.
I'm lurkin in ya shadow boy, now it's Panic season;
U can rock a Kevlar all u want, that Vessel get the Titanic treatment.
U don't Punch like the Master Bruce, U just produce weak lines;
tryna develop a style like Leisure just wasting ya free time.

[Orc]

Originally Posted by Unfukwitable AKA Noquear

Created a Sniper sight from scratch, It ain't a joke when I aim the scope;
&these Cross-hairs 4 his scalp'll have Iverson's old Braid stylist takin notes.

His day consists of jerkin off, theres nothin else that this dork accomplished.
Damn, 'UMASS debate' enough to be the face for disputes ina Boston College.

Sooo...

I musta passed out in the hot tub smokin pounds of piff
Cuz I see Frac, Res, crosshair n masturbate plays...shit must be 2006
Predicting a close one? Nah I'm makin this win resound clear
Going over his head like a dunk contest, but aint no 50/50 round here
See he starved for pussy cuz these dimes scorn fakes
Only time u seen a fine bitch Un fucked was rewinding porn tapes
Ur homies, domed. Ya girl n family get strangled w/ no fight
I'll come outta thin air, kill u n anyone ur close to...this a drone strike
Noquear = KO en espanol? LOL Dudes used, battered n bruised.
If I wanna see a Spanish Knockout I'll google nudes of Penelope Cruz
n King is violent. Leave em bleeding, dying w/o even trying
He couldn't be saved if DMXs paramedics showed up with Jesus driving
His girl said she wanna see Un dead n started suckin my balls dry
So I gave her a shot in the eye that left the bitch lookin like Carl Grimes
U had 2 hits; u hit mid tier then a ceiling, cuz u spit w/ no balls
If u can't see what I'm saying then its 'about-face' time, no video calls


fuck outta here

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by Unfukwitable

Ridin coattails of RB's worst reaps no benefits, where are u now?,
he's Shia LaBeouf in "Holes", Bout to get a Plot dug for followin 0's around.
Ehh... Think I like it but might be missing something
U promote music with high hopes, but ya sound is Idle;
People scrap ya .WAV quicker than Kanye did for an Album title.
Stretch but not terrible
He's on a decline & got better chances prayin for daamn rain
even in this here "moment, umm!" that's somethin u can't gain.
What?
When 11 leak his brain, shit'll never be the same;
Once his yolk bacon on his muffin top, it'll put Eggs Benedict recipes to shame.
No?
No one cares about this faggot, listen mate;
if It's a platform for a Strange, fruit - Billie Holiday's gettin paid.
Not quite hitting
I'm lurkin in ya shadow boy, now it's Panic season;
U can rock a Kevlar all u want, that Vessel get the Titanic treatment.
Ok
U don't Punch like the Master Bruce, U just produce weak lines;
tryna develop a style like Leisure just wasting ya free time.
aight I guess

Originally Posted by Orc

Sooo...

I musta passed out in the hot tub smokin pounds of piff
Cuz I see Frac, Res, crosshair n masturbate plays...shit must be 2006
Ok opener
Predicting a close one? Nah I'm makin this win resound clear
Going over his head like a dunk contest, but aint no 50/50 round here
Cool
See he starved for pussy cuz these dimes scorn fakes
Only time u seen a fine bitch Un fucked was rewinding porn tapes
nice. Hilarious
Ur homies, domed. Ya girl n family get strangled w/ no fight
I'll come outta thin air, kill u n anyone ur close to...this a drone strike
Nah
Noquear = KO en espanol? LOL Dudes used, battered n bruised.
If I wanna see a Spanish Knockout I'll google nudes of Penelope Cruz
Cool
n King is violent. Leave em bleeding, dying w/o even trying
He couldn't be saved if DMXs paramedics showed up with Jesus driving
Not feeling
His girl said she wanna see Un dead n started suckin my balls dry
So I gave her a shot in the eye that left the bitch lookin like Carl Grimes
Meh
U had 2 hits; u hit mid tier then a ceiling, cuz u spit w/ no balls
If u can't see what I'm saying then its 'about-face' time, no video calls
Nah


fuck outta here

Unfuk, I dug where you were coming from with some of your shit but the way you tend to word stuff can throw me off. In my opinion Strange went in. Fell off slightly towards the end but the whole verse was more enjoyable to me

V/strange

[Pinot Grij]

Unfuk
Holes is a bit dated but the punch connected. Good wording.
I don't get the .WAV reference.
"moment, ummm" - the wordplay there isn't that killer.
Eggs Benny had the makings of some cool wordplay, but I don't think it came together that harsh.
Strange fruit - again, cool concept, but the execution was just ok.
Vest and vessel was tough to read. Didn't pick up on it til later.
Leisure is cool.

Unfuk - a bit plagued by tough wording, but I like the creativity. Just needs to be pulled together a bit tighter.

Strange
2006 line is cool
50/50 is dope.
un fucked is LOTB. Nice nameplay.
Drone strike is cool imagery.
Penelope Cruz line is funny af.
Paramedic / Jesus is ok.
Carl Grimes is cool, but definitely a niche reference.
Closer was eh.

I gotta go with Strange. I felt like he connected on more concepts. Rewind porno tapes was hilarious. Overall, very entertaining. Like I said before, Unfuk just suffered a bit too much from undeveloped concepts. Cool battle tho.


Vote - Strange

[Saint]

Cool battle.. never read strange but that un fuk porn line, Spanish ko were nice. 50/50 was solid, some crisp wording.

I thought unfuk would win after reading his verse, tbh. After reading it seemed the execution wasnt quite there, tbh.. I've seen vessle, I liked strange fruit and leisure was ok. Creativity is there tho..

Gotta role w/ strange for more hits

[Hush]

[QUOTE=Unfukwitable;567724]Ridin coattails of RB's worst reaps no benefits, where are u now?,
he's Shia LaBeouf in "Holes", Bout to get a Plot dug for followin 0's around.
I saw the movie and remember this. But the line is still just so so
U promote music with high hopes, but ya sound is Idle;
People scrap ya .WAV quicker than Kanye did for an Album title.
Eh not feeling maybe just opinion and preference here
He's on a decline & got better chances prayin for daamn rain
even in this here "moment, umm!" that's somethin u can't gain.
Nah this a bad wp fam lol
When 11 leak his brain, shit'll never be the same;
Once his yolk bacon on his muffin top, it'll put Eggs Benedict recipes to shame.
This fire
No one cares about this faggot, listen mate;
if It's a platform for a Strange, fruit - Billie Holiday's gettin paid.
Don't know who Billie holiday is so I didn't get this
I'm lurkin in ya shadow boy, now it's Panic season;
U can rock a Kevlar all u want, that Vessel get the Titanic treatment.
Firrre
U don't Punch like the Master Bruce, U just produce weak lines;
tryna develop a style like Leisure just wasting ya free time.
This is a really good wp good shit
[/QUOTE]

Originally Posted by Orc

Sooo...

I musta passed out in the hot tub smokin pounds of piff
Cuz I see Frac, Res, crosshair n masturbate plays...shit must be 2006
Nah
Predicting a close one? Nah I'm makin this win resound clear
Going over his head like a dunk contest, but aint no 50/50 round here
Pretty dope
See he starved for pussy cuz these dimes scorn fakes
Only time u seen a fine bitch Un fucked was rewinding porn tapes
Ehhh I think this is ok but borderline corny to me
Ur homies, domed. Ya girl n family get strangled w/ no fight
I'll come outta thin air, kill u n anyone ur close to...this a drone strike
Nah
Noquear = KO en espanol? LOL Dudes used, battered n bruised.
If I wanna see a Spanish Knockout I'll google nudes of Penelope Cruz
Dope
n King is violent. Leave em bleeding, dying w/o even trying
He couldn't be saved if DMXs paramedics showed up with Jesus driving
Nah
His girl said she wanna see Un dead n started suckin my balls dry
So I gave her a shot in the eye that left the bitch lookin like Carl Grimes
Ok
U had 2 hits; u hit mid tier then a ceiling, cuz u spit w/ no balls
If u can't see what I'm saying then its 'about-face' time, no video calls
Concept was tight but the wording didn't land to me


fuck outta here

This a close ass battle cuz both had dope shit and both had some shit that could of been real dope and both had shit that had me like no. Unfuks momsntum line was almost a auto loss to me but strange had the Jesus in the ambulance line which was just as cringe to me


It came down to my fav line of the battle which was the vest titanic line so I got un by a hair
Strange struggled with his wording style at times and it hurt some concepts



V unfuk

[Allen Knight]

Ridin coattails of RB's worst reaps no benefits, where are u now?,
he's Shia LaBeouf in "Holes", Bout to get a Plot dug for followin 0's around.
^^^Ok opener kinda light
U promote music with high hopes, but ya sound is Idle;
People scrap ya .WAV quicker than Kanye did for an Album title.
^^^niceee
He's on a decline & got better chances prayin for daamn rain
even in this here "moment, umm!" that's somethin u can't gain.
^^^ehh nah
When 11 leak his brain, shit'll never be the same;
Once his yolk bacon on his muffin top, it'll put Eggs Benedict recipes to shame.
^^^firee
No one cares about this faggot, listen mate;
if It's a platform for a Strange, fruit - Billie Holiday's gettin paid.
^^^LOL good
I'm lurkin in ya shadow boy, now it's Panic season;
U can rock a Kevlar all u want, that Vessel get the Titanic treatment.
^^^i did this wordplay recent...dont like this one tbh cuz its almost exact to mine not used different so not fresh to me.
U don't Punch like the Master Bruce, U just produce weak lines;
tryna develop a style like Leisure just wasting ya free time.
^^^ok creative but didnt hit hard

Vs


I musta passed out in the hot tub smokin pounds of piff
Cuz I see Frac, Res, crosshair n masturbate plays...shit must be 2006
^^^not really feeling the use of this qoute ok at best
Predicting a close one? Nah I'm makin this win resound clear
Going over his head like a dunk contest, but aint no 50/50 round here
^^^nah
See he starved for pussy cuz these dimes scorn fakes
Only time u seen a fine bitch Un fucked was rewinding porn tapes
^^^loll nice never seen this
Ur homies, domed. Ya girl n family get strangled w/ no fight
I'll come outta thin air, kill u n anyone ur close to...this a drone strike
^^^dopee
Noquear = KO en espanol? LOL Dudes used, battered n bruised.
If I wanna see a Spanish Knockout I'll google nudes of Penelope Cruz
^^^good
n King is violent. Leave em bleeding, dying w/o even trying
He couldn't be saved if DMXs paramedics showed up with Jesus driving
^^^damn nice
His girl said she wanna see Un dead n started suckin my balls dry
So I gave her a shot in the eye that left the bitch lookin like Carl Grimes
^^^fire Lotb
U had 2 hits; u hit mid tier then a ceiling, cuz u spit w/ no balls
If u can't see what I'm saying then its 'about-face' time, no video calls
^^^nah not feeling this.


V/Strange, This was a cool battle both had some fire enjoyed this read.
def contender for BOTW, but i think king was more consistent here
the dmx & carl grimes bars were fire, un had yolk bar was fire to.
props to both.

[e11even]

Originally Posted by Unfukwitable

Ridin coattails of RB's worst reaps no benefits, where are u now?,
he's Shia LaBeouf in "Holes", Bout to get a Plot dug for followin 0's around.
this was kinda cool, but not that heavy
U promote music with high hopes, but ya sound is Idle;
People scrap ya .WAV quicker than Kanye did for an Album title.
I like this one, not great though
He's on a decline & got better chances prayin for daamn rain
even in this here "moment, umm!" that's somethin u can't gain.
very forced
When 11 leak his brain, shit'll never be the same;
Once his yolk bacon on his muffin top, it'll put Eggs Benedict recipes to shame.
too wordy, but I liked the punch
No one cares about this faggot, listen mate;
if It's a platform for a Strange, fruit - Billie Holiday's gettin paid.
lol
I'm lurkin in ya shadow boy, now it's Panic season;
U can rock a Kevlar all u want, that Vessel get the Titanic treatment.
nice
U don't Punch like the Master Bruce, U just produce weak lines;
tryna develop a style like Leisure just wasting ya free time.
cool.

Originally Posted by Orc

Sooo...

I musta passed out in the hot tub smokin pounds of piff
Cuz I see Frac, Res, crosshair n masturbate plays...shit must be 2006
meh.
Predicting a close one? Nah I'm makin this win resound clear
Going over his head like a dunk contest, but aint no 50/50 round here
this is a stretch, doesn't work
See he starved for pussy cuz these dimes scorn fakes
Only time u seen a fine bitch Un fucked was rewinding porn tapes
on second read: I like it
Ur homies, domed. Ya girl n family get strangled w/ no fight
I'll come outta thin air, kill u n anyone ur close to...this a drone strike
lol. that was greazy
Noquear = KO en espanol? LOL Dudes used, battered n bruised.
If I wanna see a Spanish Knockout I'll google nudes of Penelope Cruz
cool
n King is violent. Leave em bleeding, dying w/o even trying
He couldn't be saved if DMXs paramedics showed up with Jesus driving
sick
His girl said she wanna see Un dead n started suckin my balls dry
So I gave her a shot in the eye that left the bitch lookin like Carl Grimes
lmao
U had 2 hits; u hit mid tier then a ceiling, cuz u spit w/ no balls
If u can't see what I'm saying then its 'about-face' time, no video calls
cool, but not hard as a finisher


fuck outta here

Good Battle. I got Strange by a slim margin. MVGT Strange

[Fracture]

Unfuck wins


Props to both for reminding me of some vintage bboys battle

[ill nik-A]

Unfuk, eggs to titanic were solid, didn't like the first two nor closer

Strange I enjoyed ur verse, other than the ender which was ehhh I had no problem with nothing else, good job

I got strange

[murda sho]

Strange

See he starved for pussy cuz these dimes scorn fakes
Only time u seen a fine bitch Un fucked was rewinding porn tapes

n King is violent. Leave em bleeding, dying w/o even trying
He couldn't be saved if DMXs paramedics showed up with Jesus driving
His girl said she wanna see Un dead n started suckin my balls dry
So I gave her a shot in the eye that left the bitch lookin like Carl Grimes


Unfuk

Ridin coattails of RB's worst reaps no benefits, where are u now?,
he's Shia LaBeouf in "Holes", Bout to get a Plot dug for followin 0's around.
U promote music with high hopes, but ya sound is Idle;
People scrap ya .WAV quicker than Kanye did for an Album title.

I'm lurkin in ya shadow boy, now it's Panic season;
U can rock a Kevlar all u want, that Vessel get the Titanic treatment.
U don't Punch like the Master Bruce, U just produce weak lines;
tryna develop a style like Leisure just wasting ya free time.


This was a dope battle.. could go either way honestly I'm leaning towards unfuk verse slightly though and I think he might have connected with one more shot. This aint a landslide it should be close in votes but I got Unfuk

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Unfukwitable

Opener, strange fruit, kevlar vessel.

Originally Posted by Orc

Opener, 50/50, Unfucked, spanish KO & Carl Grimes.

Overall dope battle, both had some shit, Un w/ his wild wp & Strange w/ his harsh wit, STRANGE gets the vote. Sometimes Un's stuff reads as forced imo.