Suth vs Junto - Junto wins

Orc · 03-15-2016, 06:08 PM

Due Thursday

Junto · 03-16-2016, 12:25 AM

10 piece

Suthaveli · 03-16-2016, 09:16 AM

Sure..

Suthaveli · 03-17-2016, 09:18 PM

Huntin season is but a jump- Just cop me a hunter pump..
When Jun comes, it's poppin off.. & I aint talkin bout the summer month
If netcees had a party, you'd dress as a provocative whore..
The fruit dancin up in the corner. You'z the lime on the top of the board
Look. You're homo, stop. Before I give you that hobo hop..
By pullin the joint out the side of your leg- 80's style, nigga. RoboCop
Jab. Swing. Fierce. Left's The Bruiser that strikes 'em the pain.
Them links'll open ya chest up, followed by the Zelda chime for item obtain
Ryu when I come in strong & hook.. mid-punch w. an alarmin look..
& throw a savage dragon uppercut to cancel you like that comic book

Junto · 03-19-2016, 04:14 AM

Look I'm a vocal supporter...

of usin a range of weapons to go and turn a joke into torture
& if I elect the knife? its got a different plan than Trump, that shit'll open up boarders
Yea that's what it's like, Suth - you ain't actin right? get stabbed tonight
You'll be in a pool... covered in red... like u ain't get a single pick on ya bracket right
If I'm not the best tell me who they rank the greatest, I'll bash their face in
U usin my style can't be slept on. But ur verses are pillow soft. Ur punchlines are blanket statements
We can meet & let the heat off, Lets see if you're as hard as what you sold us
And if u caught a body? the pussy nigga u wit fainted & was falling when I rolled up
Maaan you got a optimistic spirit & I'm glad to hear it bro...
Even see ya hour glass as half full... when it's clear to us that ur time was past yeaarrrs ago

Pinot Grij · 03-19-2016, 12:19 PM

Yo Suth, the lines were all decent. I think your strength comes in the wording. Even if the diss wasn't real fierce, the line would read dope and either the rhyme itself or the flow or the swagger of the writing gave it some impact. Notably, the Robocop line. I think the Zelda line is a standout - shit was funny cuz you hear the sound when you read it. That's cool.

vs.

Junto

Finally a Trump flip that isn't cringey. Well worded and executed.
Dope bracket flip.
The bedtime scheme is funny.
Caught a body is dope.
Closer seems like a throwaway.

I gotta edge this one to Junto. Some inventive concepts. A lot of offense. Just a solid drop. Suth didn't come with that extra layer that Junto did.

Vote -- Junto

Hush · 03-19-2016, 08:19 PM

Robocop and Zelda was crazy dope from Suth

Vs

Blanket statements was a dope ass idea from jil but overworded

V suth

Saint · 03-19-2016, 09:24 PM

Junto got it, more consistent.. I like suth's Robocop & item obtain lines but his first 2 were concepts I seen done too much for me to give em any kinda points..junto was consistently ok or cool to me.

V jun

jilti · 03-19-2016, 10:03 PM

Huntin season is but a jump- Just cop me a hunter pump..
When Jun comes, it's poppin off.. & I aint talkin bout the summer month
^jun/june lines on him are played but the bar itself was clean
If netcees had a party, you'd dress as a provocative whore..
The fruit dancin up in the corner. You'z the lime on the top of the board
^another played line but u do have solid wording
Look. You're homo, stop. Before I give you that hobo hop..
By pullin the joint out the side of your leg- 80's style, nigga. RoboCop
^§ick
Jab. Swing. Fierce. Left's The Bruiser that strikes 'em the pain.
Them links'll open ya chest up, followed by the Zelda chime for item obtain
^dope
Ryu when I come in strong & hook.. mid-punch w. an alarmin look..
& throw a savage dragon uppercut to cancel you like that comic book
^blah

Vs.

of usin a range of weapons to go and turn a joke into torture
& if I elect the knife? its got a different plan than Trump, that shit'll open up boarders
^nice
Yea that's what it's like, Suth - you ain't actin right? get stabbed tonight
You'll be in a pool... covered in red... like u ain't get a single pick on ya bracket right
^nastyyy
If I'm not the best tell me who they rank the greatest, I'll bash their face in
U usin my style can't be slept on. But ur verses are pillow soft. Ur punchlines are blanket statements
^solid
We can meet & let the heat off, Lets see if you're as hard as what you sold us
And if u caught a body? the pussy nigga u wit fainted & was falling when I rolled up
^lol dope
Maaan you got a optimistic spirit & I'm glad to hear it bro...
Even see ya hour glass as half full... when it's clear to us that ur time was past yeaarrrs ago
^no

nice battle

V/ jun tha goon

Useless · 03-20-2016, 02:17 AM

Huntin season is but a jump- Just cop me a hunter pump..
When Jun comes, it's poppin off.. & I aint talkin bout the summer month
--- clean wording but June flips are really played and u didn't do anything original with it........
If netcees had a party, you'd dress as a provocative whore..
The fruit dancin up in the corner. You'z the lime on the top of the board
--- clean wording and angle but again this is played. Seen a lot of these when they first put that lime up there............
Look. You're homo, stop. Before I give you that hobo hop..
By pullin the joint out the side of your leg- 80's style, nigga. RoboCop
--- fire..........
Jab. Swing. Fierce. Left's The Bruiser that strikes 'em the pain.
Them links'll open ya chest up, followed by the Zelda chime for item obtain
--- lol fire. But only cuz of the wording and flip. Tbh the link/chest/Zelda shit is played...........
Ryu when I come in strong & hook.. mid-punch w. an alarmin look..
& throw a savage dragon uppercut to cancel you like that comic book
--- cool concept, lazy flip........

Vs.

of usin a range of weapons to go and turn a joke into torture
& if I elect the knife? its got a different plan than Trump, that shit'll open up boarders
--- this is cool........
Yea that's what it's like, Suth - you ain't actin right? get stabbed tonight
You'll be in a pool... covered in red... like u ain't get a single pick on ya bracket right
--- I like this too.........
If I'm not the best tell me who they rank the greatest, I'll bash their face in
U usin my style can't be slept on. But ur verses are pillow soft. Ur punchlines are blanket statements
--- concept fire but its over worded as hell bro..........
We can meet & let the heat off, Lets see if you're as hard as what you sold us
And if u caught a body? the pussy nigga u wit fainted & was falling when I rolled up
--- this played tho...........
Maaan you got a optimistic spirit & I'm glad to hear it bro...
Even see ya hour glass as half full... when it's clear to us that ur time was past yeaarrrs ago
--- this is nice imo..........

Overall: cool to see suth back, his wording and angles are on point but cuz of his time away he gotta figure out what's played and what's not. Obv the June np was played tho u shoulda known that lol. That RoboCop line was fire tho. And the Zelda line. I gotta go with junto here tho he was consistent and only had one miss.

V. Junto

Destroyer · 03-20-2016, 10:51 AM

not a bad drop from suth, but u can tell he's just getting back into it. all of his lines were decent but the June/lime lines hurt him as they've been done lots
jun had a clean drop, both the trump and bracket lines were probably his best to offer
decent read, hope suth sticks around

v/junto

03-15-2016, 06:08 PM	#1
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03-16-2016, 12:25 AM	#2
Junto The Founder Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 827 Battle Record: 30-11 Accomplishments - Shadow Pic Roast Champed - Key Grand Prix 3 - NBL Season 8 Rep Power: 11766205	10 piece __________________

03-19-2016, 04:14 AM	#5
Junto The Founder Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 827 Battle Record: 30-11 Accomplishments - Shadow Pic Roast Champed - Key Grand Prix 3 - NBL Season 8 Rep Power: 11766205	Look I'm a vocal supporter... of usin a range of weapons to go and turn a joke into torture & if I elect the knife? its got a different plan than Trump, that shit'll open up boarders Yea that's what it's like, Suth - you ain't actin right? get stabbed tonight You'll be in a pool... covered in red... like u ain't get a single pick on ya bracket right If I'm not the best tell me who they rank the greatest, I'll bash their face in U usin my style can't be slept on. But ur verses are pillow soft. Ur punchlines are blanket statements We can meet & let the heat off, Lets see if you're as hard as what you sold us And if u caught a body? the pussy nigga u wit fainted & was falling when I rolled up Maaan you got a optimistic spirit & I'm glad to hear it bro... Even see ya hour glass as half full... when it's clear to us that ur time was past yeaarrrs ago Last edited by Junto; 03-19-2016 at 04:23 AM.

03-19-2016, 12:19 PM	#6
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195060	Yo Suth, the lines were all decent. I think your strength comes in the wording. Even if the diss wasn't real fierce, the line would read dope and either the rhyme itself or the flow or the swagger of the writing gave it some impact. Notably, the Robocop line. I think the Zelda line is a standout - shit was funny cuz you hear the sound when you read it. That's cool. vs. Junto Finally a Trump flip that isn't cringey. Well worded and executed. Dope bracket flip. The bedtime scheme is funny. Caught a body is dope. Closer seems like a throwaway. I gotta edge this one to Junto. Some inventive concepts. A lot of offense. Just a solid drop. Suth didn't come with that extra layer that Junto did. Vote -- Junto __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

03-16-2016, 09:16 AM	#3
Suthaveli Prayers won't help. Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: Baltimore, Md Posts: 851 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 16534019	Sure..

03-17-2016, 09:18 PM	#4
Suthaveli Prayers won't help. Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: Baltimore, Md Posts: 851 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 16534019	Huntin season is but a jump- Just cop me a hunter pump.. When Jun comes, it's poppin off.. & I aint talkin bout the summer month If netcees had a party, you'd dress as a provocative whore.. The fruit dancin up in the corner. You'z the lime on the top of the board Look. You're homo, stop. Before I give you that hobo hop.. By pullin the joint out the side of your leg- 80's style, nigga. RoboCop Jab. Swing. Fierce. Left's The Bruiser that strikes 'em the pain. Them links'll open ya chest up, followed by the Zelda chime for item obtain Ryu when I come in strong & hook.. mid-punch w. an alarmin look.. & throw a savage dragon uppercut to cancel you like that comic book

03-19-2016, 08:19 PM	#7
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	Robocop and Zelda was crazy dope from Suth Vs Blanket statements was a dope ass idea from jil but overworded V suth

03-19-2016, 09:24 PM	#8
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,209 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535865	Junto got it, more consistent.. I like suth's Robocop & item obtain lines but his first 2 were concepts I seen done too much for me to give em any kinda points..junto was consistently ok or cool to me. V jun

03-19-2016, 10:03 PM	#9
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816224	Huntin season is but a jump- Just cop me a hunter pump.. When Jun comes, it's poppin off.. & I aint talkin bout the summer month ^jun/june lines on him are played but the bar itself was clean If netcees had a party, you'd dress as a provocative whore.. The fruit dancin up in the corner. You'z the lime on the top of the board ^another played line but u do have solid wording Look. You're homo, stop. Before I give you that hobo hop.. By pullin the joint out the side of your leg- 80's style, nigga. RoboCop ^§ick Jab. Swing. Fierce. Left's The Bruiser that strikes 'em the pain. Them links'll open ya chest up, followed by the Zelda chime for item obtain ^dope Ryu when I come in strong & hook.. mid-punch w. an alarmin look.. & throw a savage dragon uppercut to cancel you like that comic book ^blah Vs. of usin a range of weapons to go and turn a joke into torture & if I elect the knife? its got a different plan than Trump, that shit'll open up boarders ^nice Yea that's what it's like, Suth - you ain't actin right? get stabbed tonight You'll be in a pool... covered in red... like u ain't get a single pick on ya bracket right ^nastyyy If I'm not the best tell me who they rank the greatest, I'll bash their face in U usin my style can't be slept on. But ur verses are pillow soft. Ur punchlines are blanket statements ^solid We can meet & let the heat off, Lets see if you're as hard as what you sold us And if u caught a body? the pussy nigga u wit fainted & was falling when I rolled up ^lol dope Maaan you got a optimistic spirit & I'm glad to hear it bro... Even see ya hour glass as half full... when it's clear to us that ur time was past yeaarrrs ago ^no nice battle V/ jun tha goon

03-20-2016, 02:17 AM	#10
Useless 100% Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 1,803 Battle Record: 9-12 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 0	Huntin season is but a jump- Just cop me a hunter pump.. When Jun comes, it's poppin off.. & I aint talkin bout the summer month --- clean wording but June flips are really played and u didn't do anything original with it........ If netcees had a party, you'd dress as a provocative whore.. The fruit dancin up in the corner. You'z the lime on the top of the board --- clean wording and angle but again this is played. Seen a lot of these when they first put that lime up there............ Look. You're homo, stop. Before I give you that hobo hop.. By pullin the joint out the side of your leg- 80's style, nigga. RoboCop --- fire.......... Jab. Swing. Fierce. Left's The Bruiser that strikes 'em the pain. Them links'll open ya chest up, followed by the Zelda chime for item obtain --- lol fire. But only cuz of the wording and flip. Tbh the link/chest/Zelda shit is played........... Ryu when I come in strong & hook.. mid-punch w. an alarmin look.. & throw a savage dragon uppercut to cancel you like that comic book --- cool concept, lazy flip........ Vs. of usin a range of weapons to go and turn a joke into torture & if I elect the knife? its got a different plan than Trump, that shit'll open up boarders --- this is cool........ Yea that's what it's like, Suth - you ain't actin right? get stabbed tonight You'll be in a pool... covered in red... like u ain't get a single pick on ya bracket right --- I like this too......... If I'm not the best tell me who they rank the greatest, I'll bash their face in U usin my style can't be slept on. But ur verses are pillow soft. Ur punchlines are blanket statements --- concept fire but its over worded as hell bro.......... We can meet & let the heat off, Lets see if you're as hard as what you sold us And if u caught a body? the pussy nigga u wit fainted & was falling when I rolled up --- this played tho........... Maaan you got a optimistic spirit & I'm glad to hear it bro... Even see ya hour glass as half full... when it's clear to us that ur time was past yeaarrrs ago --- this is nice imo.......... Overall: cool to see suth back, his wording and angles are on point but cuz of his time away he gotta figure out what's played and what's not. Obv the June np was played tho u shoulda known that lol. That RoboCop line was fire tho. And the Zelda line. I gotta go with junto here tho he was consistent and only had one miss. V. Junto