Week 6: Adonis vs. Frank (ADONIS WINS BY NOSHOW)

asylum · 04-06-2016, 05:55 AM

Season 6

Verses are due SUNDAY 4/10 11:59 PST

Voting ends TUESDAY 4/12 11:59 PST

Verses May Not Exceed 48 Lines

Voting on four battles is required. If you win and don't vote the requirement you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote the requirement, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your four votes in the voting thread.

Topic:
“You don’t know about real loss because it only occurs when you’ve loved something more than you love yourself."

Good luck to both participants.
@Adonis (1-2)@Frank (5-0)

Frank · 04-06-2016, 08:15 PM

Fireball

Adonis · 04-06-2016, 11:43 PM

“Welcome Tom” said Dr. Lobe
“What do you have to say about your lack of control?”
Tom was a fidgety mess, sweating profusely
Wiggling about, regretful and brooding
He answered, “My obsession’s to blame
although I love deeply, it’s conception was strange
You see doc, nearly a decade ago my wife left us alone
Raising two kids, I was a complete wreck on my own
I accepted their wishes and stayed away from her stone
But their hatred had grown upon learning what I’d condoned”

Sally and Tom were two peas and a pod
A Jr. High couple whom hit the tee off
Moved miles apart but managed to talk
Old fashioned, wrote letters with postage they’d bought
In their mid thirties they finally made it official
Tying the knot, cause, having a third kid was a fistful
The edgy parents, rarely sober, as loud as a pistol
Often loaded, sedation a bit overly misused
Not hippy but ish, not druggy just issues
Delusional, imagined themselves growing to grizzled
But their best friend, Mary-Jane, who was related to Crystal
Both got stuck within tar and introductions would ensue
Weekend use soon matured to weekdays consumed
Injecting love in a relationship this couple had groomed

“At first, the kids had no clue how she passed
But the autopsy revealed the secret we had
They lost their father and mother, though one would still breathe
They blamed me for enabling, claiming a murderers free
But doc, you must understand, I’m not fully crazy
Just a poor sap in love with the feeling she gave me
I loved Sally, and she I, but I can’t lie
We both loved that euphoric sensation supplied
With every prick, clouds would slowly cave in
engulfing the spirit, tantalizing the skin
Our minds were free, I didn’t murder, but I allowed her to die
She passed peacefully when her dream had arrived
Well I awoke, begrudgingly. For me, reality's what had survived”.

Frank · 04-10-2016, 10:33 PM

I'm also here, I've opted for the extension

04-06-2016, 05:55 AM	#1
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 993 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214208	Week 6: Adonis vs. Frank (ADONIS WINS BY NOSHOW) Season 6 Verses are due SUNDAY 4/10 11:59 PST Voting ends TUESDAY 4/12 11:59 PST Verses May Not Exceed 48 Lines Voting on four battles is required. If you win and don't vote the requirement you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote the requirement, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your four votes in the voting thread. Topic: “You don’t know about real loss because it only occurs when you’ve loved something more than you love yourself." Good luck to both participants. @Adonis (1-2)@Frank (5-0) Last edited by asylum; 04-12-2016 at 03:13 AM.

04-06-2016, 08:15 PM	#2
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	Fireball __________________ *VETWORK*

04-06-2016, 11:43 PM	#3
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	*“Welcome Tom”* said Dr. Lobe “What do you have to say about your lack of control?” Tom was a fidgety mess, sweating profusely Wiggling about, regretful and brooding He answered, “My obsession’s to blame although I love deeply, it’s conception was strange You see doc, nearly a decade ago my wife left us alone Raising two kids, I was a complete wreck on my own I accepted their wishes and stayed away from her stone But their hatred had grown upon learning what I’d condoned” Sally and Tom were two peas and a pod A Jr. High couple whom hit the tee off Moved miles apart but managed to talk Old fashioned, wrote letters with postage they’d bought In their mid thirties they finally made it official Tying the knot, cause, having a third kid was a fistful The edgy parents, rarely sober, as loud as a pistol Often loaded, sedation a bit overly misused Not hippy but ish, not druggy just issues Delusional, imagined themselves growing to grizzled But their best friend, Mary-Jane, who was related to Crystal Both got stuck within tar and introductions would ensue Weekend use soon matured to weekdays consumed Injecting love in a relationship this couple had groomed “At first, the kids had no clue how she passed But the autopsy revealed the secret we had They lost their father and mother, though one would still breathe They blamed me for enabling, claiming a murderers free But doc, you must understand, I’m not fully crazy Just a poor sap in love with the feeling she gave me I loved Sally, and she I, but I can’t lie We both loved that euphoric sensation supplied With every prick, clouds would slowly cave in engulfing the spirit, tantalizing the skin Our minds were free, I didn’t murder, but I allowed her to die She passed peacefully when her dream had arrived Well I awoke, begrudgingly. For me, reality's what had survived”. __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR Last edited by Adonis; 04-12-2016 at 12:20 AM.

04-10-2016, 10:33 PM	#4
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	I'm also here, I've opted for the extension __________________ *VETWORK*