Week 7 Contendership Match: Frank vs. 2tripple0 (FRANK WINS 11-1))

[asylum]

Season 6

Verses are due SUNDAY 4/17 11:59 PST

Voting ends TUESDAY 4/19 11:59 PST

Verses May Not Exceed 48 Lines

Voting on four battles is required. If you win and don't vote the requirement you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote the requirement, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your four votes in the voting thread.

Topic: Trampled Under Foot


Good luck to both participants.
@Frank (5-1) @2tripple0 (5-1)

[2tripple0]

So yeah I'm not interested in this freestyle thing anymore
Cuz just like Jim my whole background is behind closed doors
Gonna rip this even though I don't care
It's like a coin toss call it in the air
Anyhow you force ya lines and ya lyrics are whack
I'm going to hang you upside down as if you were a bat
There ain't nothing to it
I'm smashing brickso like foundations stolen from ancient ruins
You bout as useless as a cucumber
Why so somber did ya structure forget to finish its supper
Gotta put this battle to a rest
Like c a coffin it's something that needs to be blessed

[Frank]

The ritzy night club dropped a 100 grand on candles
The stripper pole illuminates with the glitz, the glam - spectacular - Grand piano
Lazer show - in the shadows.
Retinal scanner banister view
Dollar bills rammed in her derriere
Jackson handfuls, grants in stackfuls
Backstage in the dressing room -
Two pretty bimbo bitches blabber and tattled
While the accused freshens up her mascara
Ran to the bathroom -
If looks could kill - the eyes the girls
gave each other were traveling shrapnel
Whispering and gossiping - half naked -
side conversations about a scandalous scandal
The strippers cocker spaniel sits as the
grown woman act like animals
Tackling damsels in distress - fabolous mammals
Ravenous hair pull - classlessness - flammable ramble
Clawing each other like terodactylus with manicured grapples
Financial battle, money badly mishandled
Splitting headache like a landing anvil - bashful
the girl beats her slamming her sandle
Stomping the other girl into a substantial shamble
While strip club goers gambled their money
a tramps being trampled

[Mr. J]

2tripp, I have no idea what your take on the topic was
maybe being in the contenders match left you lost in a buzz?
normally you come a lot stronger then you have portrayed
but there isnt much to say here, thanks for showing up mayne

Frank, you could have wrote about elephants in Africa
you could have written about herds down in Australia.
you could have done anything and still taken the W
but you wrote about a night in the club & its lovable...
I didnt finish it because I know you had the advantage here
you could have wrote 10 lines & the win would be clear
good job?

v/Frank I dont think much explanation is needed here
if you read both verses youd see how the scene appears
I havent seen Frank drop so short in most recent years
but he does it & snatches the W & defeats his peer...
cool story bro

[timeless]

2trip, you picked a hell of a time to drop some weird shit you prolly call magic. All good though I guess everyone hits the wall from time to time. You read books at all?

Frank, cocker spaniel line was dope had me dying at the same time. Classic Frank verse even though I'm sure you hate it. Great approach.

V. Frank for um, the better read.

[Just Write]

Well this was a dissapointment,

2trip, thought you would have taken this more serious being a contender match and all, idk man. Just feel like you could have tried a bit harder. Slightly chuckled at the hang himself like a bat line. I feel like your involvement in the NBL has somehow made everything you write as of late into battle form lol


Franklin, not the best I've read from you but still enough to easily take this, very short for your usual m.o. , it did have its bright parts to it though.... bring it next week partner.

Mvgt= frank

[Inno]

Looks like 2 trip just didn't give a shit. Lol

I was looking forward to seeing his verse tbh. Dude always shows up with tones
Of effort. Didn't expect that from him I guess is what I'm trying to say. Seems like
You had a grip of something dope but you just didn't give a fuck enough to see it through?

Frank.

Outstanding pen this time around. Always enjoy reading your epics. Even though this isn't long enough to be considered an epic. I feel like your style of writing leans towards that.
Heavy stories and plots mixed with slick wording precise skill. Dope ish man, to bad you didn't get the comp this verse deserved

Vote franklin

[Adonis]

Goddamn it Franks

V/2K though

In all honesty. His thought process was on point and coherent. A non stop flurry of thought that rhymed swell. 2K at his best / all

Good shits Frankers'

[Pharaohs Army]

V/ Frank

Triple0 this sucked man... you spend more time&effort on cypher keys and you know it.

I've seen some good shit from you, so I don't know what the hell you were trying to do here, other than make a statement about how you're too cool for school.

Franklin,
Occasionally you're uber-rhyming works against you,
like in this1, as this got towards the end.
flammable ramble
Stop.
You're better.

Meh, kinda cool verse... But tbh if you faced anything really good you probly would have lost.
I'm guessing you were saving some energy for the next round?

I'm not being negative just to be negative guys.
Just the way it is.

Anyway Frank, nice imagery and descriptions, some cool phrases &rhymes. Tramp got trampled so I think u hit the topic

[Artifice]

classic.

v/ Frank

[sral]

Frank wins.

Boring bullshit.

[breathless]

Tripple - cucumber

Frank - scandalous scandal

Vote - Frank

[NYCSPITZ]

trips verse was like a rushed battle verse, Frank at least had some flow on his and a bit of a meandering story with random nice rhymes to grasp attention a bit there

v/ frank

[symetrik]

2k, what. I know what the other voters felt like on our last battle.
Frank, weakish but obviously just putting the needed effort to take the w

mvgt Frank

[asylum]

MVGT Frank because he actually wrote to his topic. you let us all down, 2k. Really.