Chick outta Ohio..check me out..Im kind of a problem :))

[MystyEyez]

cut off my hair last year. guess it made a statement.
mom said it said lesbian... & thats still being debated.
cuz i c dick goes in pussy but got inclinations.
yet and still that wasnt the reason i got my hair faded.
it was symbolic. freed myself from bondage.
bonding glue got bitches tellin u to call em pocahontas.
but id rather just b honest and tell u im kin to kunta
my hairs kinky like egyptian goddess. or buddha
or jesus whomever ur god is,
then bat my eyelids cuz when pussy get licked niggas catch furballs regardless

cut my hair to get dreads something like a rastafarian
u come up wit theories in ya head like darwin. when evolvin.
heard of the great wall of china?
well i got four of the best replicas inside of my vagina.
do i suck dick?? kinda.
but i do know bitches that put ice cubes on anaconda for a lifetime supply of Benihana.
guess asians the best persuasion. lo mein over lasagna
and maybe hyundai over honda. presuming thats the logic behind head trauma,
and logic or dilemma thats their drama maybe your problem
mine is being more punctual cuz i need more commas. period.

[Vapeo]

mom said it said lesbian... & thats still being debated.
cuz i c dick goes in pussy but got inclinations.

(what inclinations? why is this important?)

yet and still that wasnt the reason i got my hair faded.
it was symbolic. freed myself from bondage.

(ok.)

bonding glue got bitches tellin u to call em pocahontas.
but id rather just b honest and tell u im kin to kunta
my hairs kinky like egyptian goddess. or buddha
or jesus whomever ur god is,
then bat my eyelids cuz when pussy get licked niggas catch furballs regardless

(a lot of unrelated shit but it sounds good. I liked the furball line alot tho)

cut my hair to get dreads something like a rastafarian
u come up wit theories in ya head like darwin. when evolvin.
heard of the great wall of china?
well i got four of the best replicas inside of my vagina.

(What does this mean?)

do i suck dick?? kinda.

(hahah. I guess ik what it means now)

but i do know bitches that put ice cubes on anaconda for a lifetime supply of Benihana.
guess asians the best persuasion. lo mein over lasagna (i like this line)

and maybe hyundai over honda. presuming thats the logic behind head trauma, (non sequitur)

and logic or dilemma thats their drama maybe your problem
mine is being more punctual cuz i need more commas. period.

(Overall not bad. It sounded good and generally made sense, but alot was unrelated except by rhyme.)

^^^ thats me trying to be critical. Honestly its fire. Keep rapping.

[Vapeo]

@Split Eight

should I keep tagging you in every thing I do?

[dead man]

Yikes

[Vapeo]

who are you talkin to bro

[Mr. J]

I dont really know how to take this piece at first.
this is like going to down to an underground open mic to me.
you know all the cool people do it though with their pabst & menthol cigarettes
you sit down & your like this could be an interesting thing
next thing you see Eve on stage & she starts by saying...

MY HAIRCUT MAKES ME LESBIAN
MY GIRLFRIEND MAKES ME LESBIAN
i want to be cool someone....lets be friends

Im not saying that this is bad but this is an odd introduction.
thank you for exposing yourself to me & making the read worth my while.