ill nik-A vs Destroyer - ill nik-A WINS

[Cred]

THE OG BATTLE

NBL Season 10
Week 1

Due FRIDAY 11/18/16

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@ill nik-A @Destroyer

[Destroyer]

Greetings!

[ill nik-A]

Welcome!
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[Destroyer]

Originally Posted by Super Cred

I honestly think both can get the dub here but I'm leaning nik-A by a slim margin.

dude writes fake text, all u do is sit, eat & await death
^ That quote's the ONLY time "nik-A" and "slim" were mentioned in the same breath
I'll take a stand now, I read ur bars & never see a solid 10 dude
so when I say I'm putting my foot down, I mean onto ur oxygen tube
get a GED, sign up online, go to class at night, man
this dude thinks coke zero is the name for his life plan
we both old as fuck & that's just the truth bruh
difference is in two months, I won't be deported back to Cuba
I'm coming to gat ya faggot, heard u gobble up balls like pac-man
But when I pop these cans, u lose weight quick, I call it the ultra slim fast plan
U a snitch too, grab the gasoline & let it pour before I torch u
& I'll leave a crisp rat that won't be starring in Jurassic World 2

[ill nik-A]

My aim is nasty & crazy
& Once u feel the bite from the skunk... it's shots to your stomach like vaccines for rabies
Nigga we laugh at ur talents
When I stop u on ur first week... u'd swear ur whole NBL run Is a Mannequin challenge
& lmao at ur cell selling labor
u can't afford to go up against my heat cuz ur green light... I call that water in the radiator
I'll easily serve this bitch
& that's not up for discussion... since u in there sneak-beggin bags to come back to help word ur shit
ur girl a freak, a bukake slut
That flat chested bitch is in gangbangs bringin her A-game... but it doesn't take much to fill up her party cup
We some old whining fucks!
but I'm much more clever for sure
IRL u only buy Jordan's cuz of me... which makes my I got robbed threads much better than urs

[Aero]

Des

1 - aight, kinda corny
2 - cool concept, setup needed to be crisper
3 - Coke Zero nah
4 - deported to Cuba was lulz
5 - pop cans slim fast was nice
6 - haven't seen the reference but ok


Nika

1 - never heard a gun referred to as skunk but maybe that's just me. Worded well.
2 - I like this concept, feel like it could've been better
3 - dope concept, execution light
4 - personal bar & true, nice
5- too wordy, a miss
6 - ehhhh ok



This will end up being a close battle in the votes. On first read I had Destroyer Bc I enjoyed that Cubs bar but Nika was just a little better here.

Vote - Tie. But Nika wins Bc better concepts. Vote Nika.

[Suthaveli]

Des-
1) this read smooth. Didn't rly care for it's concept tho.
2) this was a nah. In limbo w.the old jokes unless flipped dope.
3) I did a 'heh' in my head at coke zero.
4) ah jokes. One of your strengths.
5) Didn't work. Came off corny
6) no.

1) nasty wording yeesh. But, wtf is a skunk?
2) this had a lot of potential wording wise. I still liked it a lot tho.
3) meh.
4) cool personal.
5) this could've been soo dope. Syl took away from it. Still ok tho.
6) green to this. But it's self explanatory. Meh.bar.

I felt ill-nika verse more. Des came off as a key. Ill came off more polished

V- illnika

[Cred]

Props to both of yall for making this the first battle open and a good one too.


get a GED, sign up online, go to class at night, man
this dude thinks coke zero is the name for his life plan
Im fuckin wit it
we both old as fuck & that's just the truth bruh
difference is in two months, I won't be deported back to Cuba
Lol I liked this
vs

Nigga we laugh at ur talents
When I stop u on ur first week... u'd swear ur whole NBL run Is a Mannequin challenge
I'll easily serve this bitch
Good current event punch
& that's not up for discussion... since u in there sneak-beggin bags to come back to help word ur shit
Dope personal


Both had 2 nice hits a piece here making it a bit hard of pick, but after re-reading both verses nik had the better wording n had a borderline quote wit his closer. Tough call, both did there thang but..

Vote - ill nik-A

[Useless]

dude writes fake text, all u do is sit, eat & await death
^ That quote's the ONLY time "nik-A" and "slim" were mentioned in the same breath
get a GED, sign up online, go to class at night, man
this dude thinks coke zero is the name for his life plan
we both old as fuck & that's just the truth bruh
difference is in two months, I won't be deported back to Cuba
U a snitch too, grab the gasoline & let it pour before I torch u
& I'll leave a crisp rat that won't be starring in Jurassic World 2


Vs


My aim is nasty & crazy
& Once u feel the bite from the skunk... it's shots to your stomach like vaccines for rabies
Nigga we laugh at ur talents
When I stop u on ur first week... u'd swear ur whole NBL run Is a Mannequin challenge
I'll easily serve this bitch
& that's not up for discussion... since u in there sneak-beggin bags to come back to help word ur shit
We some old whining fucks!
but I'm much more clever for sure
IRL u only buy Jordan's cuz of me... which makes my I got robbed threads much better than urs



Close battle. Both had some good shit. I'm kinda leaning towards des tho cuz niks bags and Jordan lines both were good but not that hard hitting, whereas I thought des Chris Pratt line was fire. Idk tho I like how nik-A worded his shit this is tough but I'm gping with des.



V. Des

[Alphabet]

dude writes fake text, all u do is sit, eat & await death
^ That quote's the ONLY time "nik-A" and "slim" were mentioned in the same breath

vs

My aim is nasty & crazy
& Once u feel the bite from the skunk... it's shots to your stomach like vaccines for rabies
Nigga we laugh at ur talents
When I stop u on ur first week... u'd swear ur whole NBL run Is a Mannequin challenge

mannequin challenge was pre dope imo, could've been worded better but good showing.

v/nik

[Legion Of Cocks in my mouth]

Des - opener, Coke Zero, Cuba

Nika - shots to your stomach, mannequin challenge, up for discussion

Nika got it. Cleaner verse. Better wording.

[Mr. J]

this was a GREAT battle, I enjoyed both verses from start to finish
both had some memorable lines as well, after solid 10 in Des verse it picked up.
the punches really started rolling in after that, I thought the opener was cool
almost closing with the same line kind of hurt you in the end though

Ill dropped some dope concepts though & kept each punch hard hitting
really liked the Mannequin line & everything afterwards was nicely done.
a very memorable battle to be honest but I gotta give it Ill due to consistency
both delivered though and made reading these battles worthwhile. dope shit
v/Ill