01-22-2018, 02:47 PM | #1 |
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Pinot Grij vs. Swerve - SWERVE WINS
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC @Pinot Grij @Swerve |
01-22-2018, 03:18 PM | #2 |
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01-25-2018, 08:00 PM | #3 |
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@Swerve 10
This ho’s shitty, I hate when Canadians act like they so gritty Don’t make me raise my voice,,, and start an avalanche that buries your whole city Ur known for never voting, dude just boogies once he drops This ain't a voting booth,, but it will be curtains after I put you in a box This dude desperately wants to be sexually harrassed by a guy You heard about Larry Nassar, then decided to give gymnastics a try If you think my whole crew ain't fucked ur girl, then keep dreaming We gangin’ up on Love behind closed doors like the Cavs team meeting You wrestle with ur concepts, s’why you’ll never be truly great You do a couple cool flips that we quickly forget.. Swerve’s a cruiserweight
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01-26-2018, 12:34 PM | #4 |
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Welcome to your funeral bud, here you wane and decline,
So when I leave Pinot Grij in oak….trust I’m not aging and flavoring wine Your girl loves my pipe, you cant do the job, you passive homo, When its in her jaws, she clawing my balls till they look like the Raptors logo. Did swag and flow against Orc, now punches leave you faded as well, I kill in the ring, so you may be zack morris, but you won’t be saved by the bell. Read that verse and boy you’ve fallen off, no longer living the dream, You’ve become such a faint pulse...your career should be pronounced dead at the scene And when you do try to fuck, you don’t slay…you sure aint killin em, Girls go through your legs without hitting anything…they feel like Marcus Williams.
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01-26-2018, 01:07 PM | #5 |
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This ho’s shitty, I hate when Canadians act like they so gritty
Don’t make me raise my voice,,, and start an avalanche that buries your whole city ...Nah Ur known for never voting, dude just boogies once he drops This ain't a voting booth,, but it will be curtains after I put you in a box ...Niice This dude desperately wants to be sexually harrassed by a guy You heard about Larry Nassar, then decided to give gymnastics a try ...Lold If you think my whole crew ain't fucked ur girl, then keep dreaming We gangin’ up on Love behind closed doors like the Cavs team meeting ...Ok You wrestle with ur concepts, s’why you’ll never be truly great You do a couple cool flips that we quickly forget.. Swerve’s a cruiserweight ...Not effective Vs. Welcome to your funeral bud, here you wane and decline, So when I leave Pinot Grij in oak….trust I’m not aging and flavoring wine ...Ok Your girl loves my pipe, you cant do the job, you passive homo, When its in her jaws, she clawing my balls till they look like the Raptors logo. ...Cool Did swag and flow against Orc, now punches leave you faded as well, I kill in the ring, so you may be zack morris, but you won’t be saved by the bell. ...Nah Read that verse and boy you’ve fallen off, no longer living the dream, You’ve become such a faint pulse...your career should be pronounced dead at the scene ...Cool And when you do try to fuck, you don’t slay…you sure aint killin em, Girls go through your legs without hitting anything…they feel like Marcus Williams. ...Ok All in all this was close, prolly closer than it shoulda been. I think Swerves rusty. Overall he had a more consistent verse & he barely takes it imo. Pinot had a cpl bars I liked but his misses hurt him here. Neither had anything that wowd me, that's for sure. Cool lil battle. Vote- Swerve |
01-26-2018, 05:31 PM | #6 |
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This ho’s shitty, I hate when Canadians act like they so gritty
Don’t make me raise my voice,,, and start an avalanche that buries your whole city lol ok Ur known for never voting, dude just boogies once he drops This ain't a voting booth,, but it will be curtains after I put you in a box nice This dude desperately wants to be sexually harrassed by a guy You heard about Larry Nassar, then decided to give gymnastics a try decent If you think my whole crew ain't fucked ur girl, then keep dreaming We gangin’ up on Love behind closed doors like the Cavs team meeting thoughtt this was fire You wrestle with ur concepts, s’why you’ll never be truly great You do a couple cool flips that we quickly forget.. Swerve’s a cruiserweight wasnt feelin this Vs Welcome to your funeral bud, here you wane and decline, So when I leave Pinot Grij in oak….trust I’m not aging and flavoring wine ok Your girl loves my pipe, you cant do the job, you passive homo, When its in her jaws, she clawing my balls till they look like the Raptors logo. cool concept. I liked this Did swag and flow against Orc, now punches leave you faded as well, I kill in the ring, so you may be zack morris, but you won’t be saved by the bell. good one here Read that verse and boy you’ve fallen off, no longer living the dream, You’ve become such a faint pulse...your career should be pronounced dead at the scene good again And when you do try to fuck, you don’t slay…you sure aint killin em, Girls go through your legs without hitting anything…they feel like Marcus Williams. decent Wow this was a really close battle. Surprised at how this turned out tbh. Both had dope verses and only 1 miss in the entire battle, which came from Pinot. I thought Pinot would catch a body here and after reading his verse I thought to myself no way can swerve top that, but nope swerve came correct for damn sure and had a combo of fresh concepts with nice execution. Good shit. Good job both of you but swerve gets it here. Vote Swerve |
01-27-2018, 01:25 PM | #7 |
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I dunno man I expected more from Pinot but he came short tbh, voting booth line didn't work for me, only felt the team meeting bar. for Swerve he was consistent, all his bars did hit to me so he gets my vote
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01-27-2018, 06:30 PM | #8 |
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This ho’s shitty, I hate when Canadians act like they so gritty
Don’t make me raise my voice,,, and start an avalanche that buries your whole city like, i can vision where you were going w.this line but i felt it was incomplete or missing a few key components on the way i envision it hittin. Ur known for never voting, dude just boogies once he drops This ain't a voting booth,, but it will be curtains after I put you in a box This was nice. This dude desperately wants to be sexually harrassed by a guy You heard about Larry Nassar, then decided to give gymnastics a try Nah, this didn't work for me bruh. If you think my whole crew ain't fucked ur girl, then keep dreaming We gangin’ up on Love behind closed doors like the Cavs team meeting lol, i actually like this. Been seeing alot of Cav punches. You wrestle with ur concepts, s’why you’ll never be truly great You do a couple cool flips that we quickly forget.. Swerve’s a cruiserweight meh. vs Welcome to your funeral bud, here you wane and decline, So when I leave Pinot Grij in oak….trust I’m not aging and flavoring wine twas ok. a bit expected against him. Your girl loves my pipe, you cant do the job, you passive homo, When its in her jaws, she clawing my balls till they look like the Raptors logo. decent Did swag and flow against Orc, now punches leave you faded as well, I kill in the ring, so you may be zack morris, but you won’t be saved by the bell. sorry bro, this was too old for me. i like that it did reflect a current event tho. Read that verse and boy you’ve fallen off, no longer living the dream, You’ve become such a faint pulse...your career should be pronounced dead at the scene vry old against him, but i did like the line. And when you do try to fuck, you don’t slay…you sure aint killin em, Girls go through your legs without hitting anything…they feel like Marcus Williams. fair. ok, i actually read this twice. Pulse quoted lines were much stronger, but the the non quotes weren't too great. While swerve came a bit more consistent but the strength in his lines weren't there for me. but tbh swerve rly didn't hv a bad line just played ideas. Mvgt-@Swerve |
01-28-2018, 03:14 AM | #9 | |
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Welcome to your funeral bud, here you wane and decline, So when I leave Pinot Grij in oak….trust I’m not aging and flavoring wine Not to say its played cause i would never read a pinot battle, but sheesh this is as vanilla as a line gets Your girl loves my pipe, you cant do the job, you passive homo, When its in her jaws, she clawing my balls till they look like the Raptors logo. Nah dumb Did swag and flow against Orc, now punches leave you faded as well, I kill in the ring, so you may be zack morris, but you won’t be saved by the bell. Light asf Read that verse and boy you’ve fallen off, no longer living the dream, You’ve become such a faint pulse...your career should be pronounced dead at the scene This is good And when you do try to fuck, you don’t slay…you sure aint killin em, Girls go through your legs without hitting anything…they feel like Marcus Williams. Nah V draw But if i had to pick i guess voting booth and cavs outweigh faint pulse V pinot |
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01-28-2018, 08:11 AM | #10 |
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Pinot has voting booth and Love
Swerve had raptors logo, saved by the bell and pulse Decent battle, I got the Canadian with one more quotable V:swerve |
01-28-2018, 09:11 AM | #11 |
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This ho’s shitty, I hate when Canadians act like they so gritty Don’t make me raise my voice,,, and start an avalanche that buries your whole city Ur known for never voting, dude just boogies once he drops This ain't a voting booth,, but it will be curtains after I put you in a box those lines were fire but the rest of your verse wasnt as good. Welcome to your funeral bud, here you wane and decline, So when I leave Pinot Grij in oak….trust I’m not aging and flavoring wine Your girl loves my pipe, you cant do the job, you passive homo, When its in her jaws, she clawing my balls till they look like the Raptors logo. Read that verse and boy you’ve fallen off, no longer living the dream, You’ve become such a faint pulse...your career should be pronounced dead at the scene dope verse. Only the closer was a complete miss for me. This is probably your best verse since youve been back. Vote- Swerve. he was more consistent. Bye...
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01-28-2018, 04:57 PM | #12 |
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That voting booth & Cavs line from Pinot was pretty well done, but I couldn't ride with that opener that seemed kind of off to me.
Swerve had the opener, Raptors logo, and the Marcus Williams closer. After peeping the gymnastics flip I think it's pretty close. I guess it comes down to preference. And I think Swerve had the fresher flips. Gotta give it to him.
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01-28-2018, 11:23 PM | #13 |
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Swerve Wins 7-1
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