Dope track from an old contest

Lyriscologist · 01-27-2018, 12:23 PM

https://soundcloud.com/jay-lyriscolo...gist-damn-barz

rhymeschemes are crazy..

KennyCerealBowl · 02-01-2018, 07:56 PM

Good flow work on them beats and delivery

Lyriscologist · 02-05-2018, 11:36 AM

good looks

Geno · 02-18-2018, 03:35 AM

Dope man.
Id sau the same. Work on a harder delicery. More conviction behind your words and i think youd have something pretty nasty man. Flow is on point. Nailing the beat well. Just needs that extra oomph behind it.if that makes sense. Idk it prolly doesnt. To ke it does. To you it migjt not. All depends on how you hear yourself i guess. If your happy with it then its good enough. But ya. Dope shit

01-27-2018, 12:23 PM	#1
Lyriscologist Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 101 Rep Power: 95181	Dope track from an old contest https://soundcloud.com/jay-lyriscolo...gist-damn-barz rhymeschemes are crazy..

02-01-2018, 07:56 PM	#2
KennyCerealBowl Do what is right. Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 769 Rep Power: 954121	Good flow work on them beats and delivery __________________

02-18-2018, 03:35 AM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Dope man. Id sau the same. Work on a harder delicery. More conviction behind your words and i think youd have something pretty nasty man. Flow is on point. Nailing the beat well. Just needs that extra oomph behind it.if that makes sense. Idk it prolly doesnt. To ke it does. To you it migjt not. All depends on how you hear yourself i guess. If your happy with it then its good enough. But ya. Dope shit __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est* Last edited by Geno; 02-18-2018 at 03:37 AM.

02-05-2018, 11:36 AM	#3
Lyriscologist Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 101 Rep Power: 95181	good looks