05-26-2020, 04:54 PM | #1 |
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Round 1: FGR Vs. Mac - FGR WINS 6-0
8-Man Show N' Prove Mini Tourney Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due Saturday by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more lines @FGR @Mac |
05-26-2020, 04:55 PM | #2 |
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miracle! good luck. 10?
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05-30-2020, 07:32 PM | #3 |
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Cool.. I'll write up tonight
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05-30-2020, 10:14 PM | #4 |
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@Mac
. . . Notice you never got an answer? Your weak writtens won't go far QUIT & listen when I tell you...NOT EVEN HE WANTS TO SEE YOU WRITE A BAR I'll kill you with my bare hands. It's lights out if I strangle this queer When I grab his throat, Macklemore likely fade away like that dudes rap career I'm fire with the punches pussy.. whatever you got I'll ghost it You'll get torrefy try, and the irony is your actually getting roasted I can't stand a rat or tattletale.. to me they're a bunch of dead pricks They say snitches get stitches but versus him your the one that needs medics Try writing better shit....cuz beating you in a battle is easy bro The week B4 this... Enbombz shut you down faster than Paula Deens tv show
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05-30-2020, 10:45 PM | #5 |
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waddup amigo
your shits wack man, we don't understand none of what u meant have a label all over your verses and STILL wouldnt make any cents i'm not asking consent, put this bitch under a guillotine after I cut off both ur ears it wont be van gogh painting this death scene even if gunbars arent the fashion now, I stand to be a threat cuz how my RPG will meet FGR.. and it wont be spelling the alphabet you can't make me sweat, dont fuck with this torque i see you go against all odds.. who loses a pic battle vs. an Orc?? ur sex life's gone.. we know u cant come thru my Mornings chats like "go, daddy...".. his are "GoDaddy, how can I serve you?" |
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05-31-2020, 08:32 AM | #7 |
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bar line was bad
macklemore is ok torrefy was more like it, best one so far snitches nahhhh paula deen/n bomb was hilarious vs sense is olldddd man van goh coulda been nasty, wording was off rpg concept is there but again not a solid execution wasnt feelin the last two lines torrefy and paula deen took it, mac needs to clean up his wording and he’d be 10x better v fgr
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05-31-2020, 01:24 PM | #8 |
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This was kinda close, actually. Neither stood out all that much.. Mac’s was pretty simplistic (sense/cents, etc) and the wording was really basic. FGR tried too hard to force wordplay/pun punches (Macklemore isn’t pronounced “Mack’ll more), which is a style I personally can’t stand, and it made it fairly awkward to read. But, at the end of the day, FGR had a handful of better concepts. He won this.
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05-31-2020, 05:43 PM | #9 |
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Notice you never got an answer? Your weak writtens won't go far
QUIT & listen when I tell you...NOT EVEN HE WANTS TO SEE YOU WRITE A BAR didn't like this I'll kill you with my bare hands. It's lights out if I strangle this queer When I grab his throat, Macklemore likely fade away like that dudes rap career nice wordplay I'm fire with the punches pussy.. whatever you got I'll ghost it You'll get torrefy try, and the irony is your actually getting roasted nice again I can't stand a rat or tattletale.. to me they're a bunch of dead pricks They say snitches get stitches but versus him your the one that needs medics decent but could've been worded harder I think Try writing better shit....cuz beating you in a battle is easy bro The week B4 this... Enbombz shut you down faster than Paula Deens tv show nice strong finish here your shits wack man, we don't understand none of what u meant have a label all over your verses and STILL wouldnt make any cents this is a played wordplay and I cant see any original spin on it i'm not asking consent, put this bitch under a guillotine after I cut off both ur ears it wont be van gogh painting this death scene better but still basic even if gunbars arent the fashion now, I stand to be a threat cuz how my RPG will meet FGR.. and it wont be spelling the alphabet could've been done better, but decent idea you can't make me sweat, dont fuck with this torque i see you go against all odds.. who loses a pic battle vs. an Orc?? average ur sex life's gone.. we know u cant come thru my Mornings chats like "go, daddy...".. his are "GoDaddy, how can I serve you?" don't even get this tbh vote - FGR had the more advanced style and stronger hits especially closer and macklemore |
05-31-2020, 06:11 PM | #10 | |
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I'm fire with the punches pussy.. whatever you got I'll ghost it
You'll get torrefy try, and the irony is your actually getting roasted Try writing better shit....cuz beating you in a battle is easy bro The week B4 this... Enbombz shut you down faster than Paula Deens tv show ^ The two bars were dope to me. Torrefy was LOTB and very polished in wording. vs. you can't make me sweat, dont fuck with this torque i see you go against all odds.. who loses a pic battle vs. an Orc?? ^ This bar had me laughing for some reason, and I think it may have been your best, although, it wasn't necessarily quotable. v - FGR. Based off of his two bars that I quoted, and the fact that he was trying to attempt fresher things, it seemed to give him the win. He had some cool wordplays and for the punches that didn't land, it was just about remaining consistent throughout. For Mac, I'd work on wording and bringing newer ideas to the table, because that was one thing that separated you two talent wise. All the punches really lacked intensity or aggression to combat the opponent
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05-31-2020, 07:46 PM | #11 |
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Notice you never got an answer? Your weak writtens won't go far
QUIT & listen when I tell you...NOT EVEN HE WANTS TO SEE YOU WRITE A BAR nah not feeling this opener, barc/bar flips get done a lot and this wasnt too unique of an angle I'll kill you with my bare hands. It's lights out if I strangle this queer When I grab his throat, Macklemore likely fade away like that dudes rap career Pretty sure someone did a macklemore bar against him in the nbl like 1 week ago, but this is ok I'm fire with the punches pussy.. whatever you got I'll ghost it You'll get torrefy try, and the irony is your actually getting roasted ok, you always find random ass obscure words that nobody uses for your wps but this works phonetically I can't stand a rat or tattletale.. to me they're a bunch of dead pricks They say snitches get stitches but versus him your the one that needs medics not the most fresh concept but i thought this was executed well Try writing better shit....cuz beating you in a battle is easy bro The week B4 this... Enbombz shut you down faster than Paula Deens tv show cool closer your shits wack man, we don't understand none of what u meant have a label all over your verses and STILL wouldnt make any cents cents/sense is one of those concepts that got called played out in like 2005, so that hasnt changed i'm not asking consent, put this bitch under a guillotine after I cut off both ur ears it wont be van gogh painting this death scene eh, I can point out a few issues with this but overall this seems too simple even if gunbars arent the fashion now, I stand to be a threat cuz how my RPG will meet FGR.. and it wont be spelling the alphabet I dont really know what you're trying to do here tbh because there is no sequential order in the alphabet where this makes sense you can't make me sweat, dont fuck with this torque i see you go against all odds.. who loses a pic battle vs. an Orc?? kinda funny but also a bit too simple ur sex life's gone.. we know u cant come thru my Mornings chats like "go, daddy...".. his are "GoDaddy, how can I serve you?" ok closer, probably your best in the verse overall I think FGR just had better execution and incorporated more punches into his verse. v/ FGR |
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