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Old 09-09-2013, 08:42 PM   #1
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Default Swag and Flow vs. Veritas

Only got like 3 votes...want some more feed. Thanks.






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Man, I'm ballin! I'm an anabolic BLAMaholic...I down 15 Animal Paks as a casual snack
This ain't Leave it to Beaver, a demon on ether...See I'm the sequel to Evil Kanevil
Your chick's a ball lover, she gets me off alllll summer...and I'm not even a teacher
I'll claim I'm in love with a bitch who's never left me...let her catch me fucking her sis
Do something explicit, grab a bucket of chicken...scream "THIS IS FUNNY AS SHIT!", while she's cutting her wrists
I'll shoot my own porno on Human Growth Hormone. For YEARS Cash been crazed...
Run up on your dear aunt and spray after taking deer antler spray for near half the day
I claim respect but got tons of people to kill, believe that I will...The haters stretch for pages
I'll take the metal eight and fucking rip...So, my BUCK IT list will NOT contain vacation destinations
I'm coaching the youth...YOUR WIFE'S A SLUT. Oh, and the crew..she blowin' them too
I'm hoping it's cool. The villain got MILLIONS of sperm sliding down Fallopian tubes like they open to pools
I'm probably the sickest. I should leave earth...with each word my balls are getting bigger
Don't try me queer...I'm a pioneer. I'll swallow you for dinner JUST for trynna follow me on Twitter
Blow me, pal. Ya'll can't slow me down. A physicist's wit, the king of this shit...I hold the crown
I was conceived as a quadruplet but ahhhh screw it...the homie wiled and came out as an only child
I'm known to click and then spray...If he get in my way, I'll pop a kid in the face. You KNOW that's true...
I'm so nuts, dude. I shoot Grown Ups 2...without a Sandler or James, the man is insane. YO...FUCK...YOU...
This faggot can't harm shit. I could be armless on piff...I'm smackin' you hard, bitch
I'm fantastic! I'm charming!...Who's fresher, yo? There should be a new scent of soap called Cashius's armpit
All eyes on Cash. My wardrobe's in warmode...yours is prolly past its prime
You try and hang with mine? Why dude...I got more fly suits than all the Iron Mans combined
Women...I'm humpin' their brains out. Orgy's? More, please!...My number's insane
I'm fucking for days. Bend all five of them...Denzel Washington couldn't stop me from running a train
I'm blowing piff and sour until I twitch for hours...I swear it, boss...Veritas? Kid's a coward
Fuck it I'm savage with muscles of granite...my lifting prowess could be used as kitchen counters
I'm a veteran who...can't let go of the pen, my flow is a ten. I'll NEVER be through
You're featherweight. I only went 28....
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Old 09-09-2013, 09:39 PM   #2
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dope as fuck tbh

this shit was packed with the rawness. good work cash, i see why you holding that belt right now
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Old 09-09-2013, 10:09 PM   #3
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I knew you were good, but not this good.....you should give me a rematch lol I will try harder
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Old 09-14-2013, 06:12 PM   #4
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I'll claim I'm in love with a bitch who's never left me...let her catch me fucking her sis
Well that's just rude

I claim respect but got tons of people to kill, believe that I will...The haters stretch for pages
I'll take the metal eight and fucking rip...So, my BUCK IT list will NOT contain vacation destinations
whewwww.. nice

I was conceived as a quadruplet but ahhhh screw it...the homie wiled and came out as an only child
lol dope

Women...I'm humpin' their brains out. Orgy's? More, please!...My number's insane
I'm fucking for days. Bend all five of them...Denzel Washington couldn't stop me from running a train
ZING!

Overall this is nice. Your lines are a little longer than I usually like. I think you can do more with less but that's just my pref. Here the longer lines worked because you filled them with nice inner and outer multis.. flow was good and the swag was def there.
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