SEMIFINALS - ill nik-A/Bags vs. Aero/Dominate - AERO/DOM WIN

[PancakeBrah]

Due Date: Monday, 9/23, Midnight.
Line Limit: 16 Mininum/24 Max.
Extensions by Request

@ill nik-A
@Ole Dirty Bagstard
@Aero
@Dominate

[ill nik-A]

Welcome!

[StarFaggot]

Nika & Bags come with it.

24.

[Ghost1]

Originally Posted by Aero

Every race has its group of people who act in certain negative ways. All my black friends are middle class and up and forward thinkers.

Originally Posted by Aero

Just because you're a field nigga and ur body's become accustomed to the outdoors doesn't mean u should take issue with house niggas.

Smh.

Oh my. How u gon be racist yet SO blind?
up an foward thinker? A free spirit? HOW? Ur still a slave in ur OWN mind.
Slaves!? He never worked a day w/out paymnt, bros.
Cmon fam save it yo. this black retards just another stereotype.....RADIO
B its just tragic, u gon take over Wall St speakin all ratchet?
Them cheap plans u got in stockbroker then ur delusions of bein one faggit
An u half white!! But dom as a teacher is unforgivable tho...
This faggit Molding the minds of our future... w/the clay spindle from Ghost
Talm bout my boo meringue? She cook an bang me so well
His boomerang? Well.. its a frisbee for faggits who like to play w/themselves.
These lame dudes weaker. what a strange pool featured...
R we really battlin a mullato daytrader & an australian gradeschool teacher!?!
The goat teamed up with Dom cuz his shit’s weak with nonsense
Aero’s so desperate he had to go to the land down under to dig up some decent concepts
u swear u into the stock exchange but I can trick clowns & ditch
u have no idea what a low ball offer is… so I secretly teabagged the shit out ur bitch
& now Dom’s poor displays is supposed to help a friend in fear?
u aint showing signs of hope… u just went from will work for food to the end is near
some live vicariously through others & Aero needs a lotta help to gloat
ur only accomplishment is a site diss I inspired… now I know why u call urself the goat
u tell & hope Dom doesnt drink cuz ur black dad did a smash & through
if Foster’s Australian for Beer… in America it’s an adoption center when ur white side abandons u
think u have a strong relationship & we don’t have what it takes to beat
But mediocre is all we have to ‘be, see’… since that’s the only thing that comes between A&D

[StarFaggot]

*ahem*

ayo Bags aka Jim Blaze,


I took photos of your girl w/ her dildo, shit got embarrassing quick
way she used rabbit ears behind your back it made for hilarious pics
Hoe was eaaager to slob nuts, Unzipped my pants & removed my buckle
She had a ball out before her knee was down, that shit was ruled a fumble
& dawg, ya partner’s nonsense. Vet his bars ‘fore it thwarts ya prospects
Fuck a surname.. I wanna see Anthony Colavito on Nika's retarded concepts
That kid was a BITCH in the Elements after Cake left his wack lines slumped
Soon as ppl started voting for Pansy ran to discussion to sway shit & act like one
Plus I bodied ‘em in SC, & him being a salty faggot had me quite enthralled
Nik got a chip on his shoulder & not just the tracking device his wife installed
And faggot you're not a citizen you don't have to fake or pretend
I mean... your idea of civic duty's piling into one with eight of your friends
& ur house is worth nothing. You've been in a shitheap the longest son
If that Padded Cell for any srs money it’d be to someone who belongs in one
You're too old so just lie down and die now. This shit’s a wipe out, ether
Firing shots that'll leave ur life on the rocks like retiring lighthouse keepers
& Bags you aint no gym rat. Maybe yoga class & a couple of tame squats
Hardest Resistance Training u ever did was slapping urself for having gay thoughts
U’d get Muscle Aches from 1 pound weights. I bet you favour pilates more
We can trade punches or u can lift those^, either way DOMS will leave ya body sore
As admin you made mistakes like clockwork, waaayyy too easy to heckle
If we want to see Jim Gaffigan we don’t have to watch the comedian's special
No relieving the pressure, easiest effort while you two could use the practice
What's worse?
That you battle each other in Elements tourney or that it's in the Loser's bracket?

ouch.

[StarFaggot]

Up.

[ill nik-A]

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[Sn00p]

Oh my. How u gon be racist yet SO blind?
up an foward thinker? A free spirit? HOW? Ur still a slave in ur OWN mind.
^dece
Slaves!? He never worked a day w/out paymnt, bros.
Cmon fam save it yo. this black retards just another stereotype.....RADIO
^kinda nice, kinda corny. dece
B its just tragic, u gon take over Wall St speakin all ratchet?
Them cheap plans u got in stockbroker then ur delusions of bein one faggit
^aite
An u half white!! But dom as a teacher is unforgivable tho...
This faggit Molding the minds of our future... w/the clay spindle from Ghost
^eh
Talm bout my boo meringue? She cook an bang me so well
His boomerang? Well.. its a frisbee for faggits who like to play w/themselves.
^nice
These lame dudes weaker. what a strange pool featured...
R we really battlin a mullato daytrader & an australian gradeschool teacher!?!
^too simple
The goat teamed up with Dom cuz his shit’s weak with nonsense
Aero’s so desperate he had to go to the land down under to dig up some decent concepts
^dece
u swear u into the stock exchange but I can trick clowns & ditch
u have no idea what a low ball offer is… so I secretly teabagged the shit out ur bitch
^nice
& now Dom’s poor displays is supposed to help a friend in fear?
u aint showing signs of hope… u just went from will work for food to the end is near
^dope, lotb
some live vicariously through others & Aero needs a lotta help to gloat
ur only accomplishment is a site diss I inspired… now I know why u call urself the goat
^aite
u tell & hope Dom doesnt drink cuz ur black dad did a smash & through
if Foster’s Australian for Beer… in America it’s an adoption center when ur white side abandons u
^aite, not bad
think u have a strong relationship & we don’t have what it takes to beat
But mediocre is all we have to ‘be, see’… since that’s the only thing that comes between A&D
^kinda clever, but not too hard-hitting

vs.

I took photos of your girl w/ her dildo, shit got embarrassing quick
way she used rabbit ears behind your back it made for hilarious pics
^aite
Hoe was eaaager to slob nuts, Unzipped my pants & removed my buckle
She had a ball out before her knee was down, that shit was ruled a fumble
^nice
& dawg, ya partner’s nonsense. Vet his bars ‘fore it thwarts ya prospects
Fuck a surname.. I wanna see Anthony Colavito on Nika's retarded concepts
^not bad
That kid was a BITCH in the Elements after Cake left his wack lines slumped
Soon as ppl started voting for Pansy ran to discussion to sway shit & act like one
^yup
Plus I bodied ‘em in SC, & him being a salty faggot had me quite enthralled
Nik got a chip on his shoulder & not just the tracking device his wife installed
^dece
And faggot you're not a citizen you don't have to fake or pretend
I mean... your idea of civic duty's piling into one with eight of your friends
^dece
& ur house is worth nothing. You've been in a shitheap the longest son
If that Padded Cell for any srs money it’d be to someone who belongs in one
^aite
You're too old so just lie down and die now. This shit’s a wipe out, ether
Firing shots that'll leave ur life on the rocks like retiring lighthouse keepers
^cool
& Bags you aint no gym rat. Maybe yoga class & a couple of tame squats
Hardest Resistance Training u ever did was slapping urself for having gay thoughts
^lol okay
U’d get Muscle Aches from 1 pound weights. I bet you favour pilates more
We can trade punches or u can lift those^, either way DOMS will leave ya body sore
^self-nameplay, but wasn't bad
As admin you made mistakes like clockwork, waaayyy too easy to heckle
If we want to see Jim Gaffigan we don’t have to watch the comedian's special
^wording coulda been a tad better, concept was dope
No relieving the pressure, easiest effort while you two could use the practice
What's worse?
That you battle each other in Elements tourney or that it's in the Loser's bracket?
^solid closer.

so bags & nik had the lotb and 2 other very good lines. they also had some misses tho. aero & dom 3 standouts too, but theirs weren't as good as nik & bag's. but they had fewer misses. they were more consistent. and that's why i gotta give it to them. i def can see ppl voting for nik & bags tho. this is a really close battle & in the end, it comes down to preference. and i favor consistency here. but props to both. this was well worth the read. nice battle.
v/aero&dom

[Hush]

Opener was fire from nik bags


Radio line was ok
Cool smack style filler

That signs of hope line was bananas tho
Line of the verse


Rest was regrettably forgettable
Didn't dig the angles
Focused too much on the stock broker shit


Low ball was a good concept tho


Vs


Ok
This verse just started really boring
Fumble line was a almost
Civic duty was funny

Light house line was dope tho


Dead at resistance training



Omg at u guys phrasing lines as questions
Ugh


Both did it wrong



Close battle tho

Rereadable in the sense it's hard to tell who won



Aerdom by a slim margin

[StarFaggot]

Thanks for taking time out to vote Vic and Snoop.

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[Frank Metts]

Nik bags open was real good radio line was mentionable .. the pause thing still happens? ghost line made me laugh tea bag was another laugher will work for food was tight foster line was vicious

Vs

I literally lol at fumbled line pansy was cool life on rocks was cool and fresh good concept and execution gays thoughts was another laugher doms was aight but I can see it going over heads .. gaffigan could of been hella dope but the execution was off so it lost steam .. ending was a question .. I don't like most punches that end in questions

Damn shit is close imma have to reread .. I think both did their thing .. foster has to be lotb shit was sid viscious for me light house has to be close 2nd will work for food 3rd fumble was the funniest but tea bag had me bout to laugh too ... tough call but ill say i hate to have to choose but nik bags had a slim margin on non quotables so ill go

Nik bags

[StarFaggot]

Thanks Metts.

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[King Karaoke]

Hi...

Oh my. How u gon be racist yet SO blind?
up an foward thinker? A free spirit? HOW? Ur still a slave in ur OWN mind.
The goat teamed up with Dom cuz his shit’s weak with nonsense
Aero’s so desperate he had to go to the land down under to dig up some decent concepts
u swear u into the stock exchange but I can trick clowns & ditch
u have no idea what a low ball offer is… so I secretly teabagged the shit out ur bitch
& now Dom’s poor displays is supposed to help a friend in fear?
u aint showing signs of hope… u just went from will work for food to the end is near
u tell & hope Dom doesnt drink cuz ur black dad did a smash... & through
if Foster’s Australian for Beer… in America it’s an adoption center when ur white side abandons u

cool verse but had some bad misses...
opener was the best line surprisingly...


I took photos of your girl w/ her dildo, shit got embarrassing quick
way she used rabbit ears behind your back it made for hilarious pics
Hoe was eaaager to slob nuts, Unzipped my pants & removed my buckle
She had a ball out before her knee was down, that shit was ruled a fumble
& dawg, ya partner’s nonsense. Vet his bars ‘fore it thwarts ya prospects
Fuck a surname.. I wanna see Anthony Colavito on Nika's retarded concepts
That kid was a BITCH in the Elements after Cake left his wack lines slumped
Soon as ppl started voting for Pansy ran to discussion to sway shit & act like one
And faggot you're not a citizen you don't have to fake or pretend
I mean... your idea of civic duty's piling into one with eight of your friends
You're too old so just lie down and die now. This shit’s a wipe out, ether
Firing shots that'll leave ur life on the rocks like retiring lighthouse keepers
& Bags you aint no gym rat. Maybe yoga class & a couple of tame squats
Hardest Resistance Training u ever did was slapping urself for having gay thoughts
As admin you made mistakes like clockwork, waaayyy too easy to heckle
If we want to see Jim Gaffigan we don’t have to watch the comedian's special

Dope verse...
opener, colavito, padded cell and a few other lines hit hard...
The first four lines won this for you guys...

Aero/Dom got this based off of consistency and less misses...

vote- Aero/Dom...

Bye...

[StarFaggot]

Hi...

Thanks for voting sir.

Bye...

[StarFaggot]

^^

[Allen Knight]

An u half white!! But dom as a teacher is unforgivable tho...
This faggit Molding the minds of our future... w/the clay spindle from Ghost
These lame dudes weaker. what a strange pool featured...
R we really battlin a mullato daytrader & an australian gradeschool teacher!?!
The goat teamed up with Dom cuz his shit’s weak with nonsense
Aero’s so desperate he had to go to the land down under to dig up some decent concepts
u swear u into the stock exchange but I can trick clowns & ditch
u have no idea what a low ball offer is… so I secretly teabagged the shit out ur bitch
& now Dom’s poor displays is supposed to help a friend in fear?
u aint showing signs of hope… u just went from will work for food to the end is near
some live vicariously through others & Aero needs a lotta help to gloat
ur only accomplishment is a site diss I inspired… now I know why u call urself the goat

vs

Hoe was eaaager to slob nuts, Unzipped my pants & removed my buckle
She had a ball out before her knee was down, that shit was ruled a fumble
& dawg, ya partner’s nonsense. Vet his bars ‘fore it thwarts ya prospects
Fuck a surname.. I wanna see Anthony Colavito on Nika's retarded concepts
That kid was a BITCH in the Elements after Cake left his wack lines slumped
Soon as ppl started voting for Pansy ran to discussion to sway shit & act like one
Plus I bodied ‘em in SC, & him being a salty faggot had me quite enthralled
Nik got a chip on his shoulder & not just the tracking device his wife installed
And faggot you're not a citizen you don't have to fake or pretend
I mean... your idea of civic duty's piling into one with eight of your friends
& ur house is worth nothing. You've been in a shitheap the longest son
If that Padded Cell for any srs money it’d be to someone who belongs in one
You're too old so just lie down and die now. This shit’s a wipe out, ether
Firing shots that'll leave ur life on the rocks like retiring lighthouse keepers
& Bags you aint no gym rat. Maybe yoga class & a couple of tame squats
Hardest Resistance Training u ever did was slapping urself for having gay thoughts

V/dom&aero, damn this battle was fire, both had some sick shit tbh, but dom n ar edged this one out by acouple more quotes but i wouldnt be suprised if bags an nik got votes cuz this shit is close an def best battle of the torney props to both dope battle.

[StarFaggot]

Thanks for voting Knight..

[Ghost1]

Thanks for thanking the voters aero

[Dominate]

Thanks for thanking aero for thanking the voters Bags

[Ghost1]

Lol