Vicodin (0-0) vs. Joe Boston (0-0) JOE WINS

Vicodin · 01-28-2013, 07:00 PM

10 lines
due w/e
first to 5 votes wins

Joe Boston · 01-28-2013, 07:29 PM

Check gl @Vicodin

Vicodin · 01-28-2013, 07:32 PM

u2, check

Joe Boston · 01-28-2013, 08:26 PM

@Vicodin

Your not a thug but when we tell you ur ass don't listen
If I was to pop Vicodin it wouldn't be me addicted to that prescription
Just lay down n play dead u don't want a sharp right to the back of the head
When Joe whip that ass it'll be more Strikta then that nigga was in ur callout thread
I'm fucking his bitch and I know he thinks that isn't cool
She be like Joe don't u Everest while ur poor and black enrolled in that school
1 minute in the ring trust me u won't fucking last
Every time u talk we CBS and fucking with Joe will have ur face on that news broadcast
I'm straight hitting u with these shots it's more then u can handle
Once I catch him with the K have em thinking he watching the telemundo channel

Links:

http://artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?1384-Camp-Bell-(1-0)-vs-Jo-E-Murder-(0-0)-OPEN-FOR-VOTES

http://artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?1642-2triple0-vs-flo-real-OPEN-FOR-VOTES

http://artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?513-bleak-(0-0)-vs-He whose name shall not be spoken-(0-0)-He whose name shall not be spoken-WINS

Joe Boston · 01-29-2013, 11:29 PM

@Vicodin gonna drop my dude??

Vicodin · 01-30-2013, 09:19 PM

forgot about this, I'll drop within the hour

Vicodin · 01-30-2013, 10:12 PM

this clown's joys? crack, round toys, ass...
yall about to see a JBL, while this faggot slams men in a cowboy hat
JUST noticed u dropped.. what did u even bring kid?
ur lines are kinda coo' Joe, except older that Stephen King flick
bitches? ur tryin, but every chick is defiant
if u ever Cayman a pussy, it had to be at least the width of the Islands
this is murder, but even ur own fam ain't bothered B
if I got ur mom's panties in a Nott, I timed how fast she took em off for me
n let's be honest.. prepare urself, softy
we'd only talk about Boston Bruin fire if more ppl cared about hockey

Joe Boston · 01-30-2013, 11:15 PM

Good drop @Vicodin yo@Sik there's a vote on the poll must of hit by mistake on my phone can u fix it my bad. Uppin for votes yall

bleak · 02-01-2013, 07:15 PM

ALL THE WORDPLAYS!!!

Joe- something about your wording is off to me. Each bar by itself was nice, but when the flow chops up it makes it hard to read. That being said, your punches still hit hard while feeding off the WP's. Even while it was a difficult read, the punches still had the sting that is required in a verse. Some of the WP's were corny, btw. e.g. the CBS and the Everest. The only line I didn't like was the latter of the two. I didn't love the rest, but still a decent drop.

Vicodin- I could give you the same feedback, as far as the wordplays being corny. I don't feel like your concepts saved the lack of intensity, go for the throat and your verses will come together. You could have taken this easily with a few tweaks here and there, but as it stands-

v/Joe

Geno · 02-02-2013, 12:51 PM

Good battle.

Joe had some pretty cool flips. The strikta line was cool. The last bar was a total miss to me thouggh.

Vicodin. You had the coo joe line and the rest seemed off to me. Gotta bbring more material like that for the win here but didnt

I got..
V -joe b

Sharp · 02-02-2013, 01:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Joe Boston

Just lay down n play dead u don't want a sharp right to the back of the head
When Joe whip that ass it'll be more Strikta then that nigga was in ur callout thread
I'm fucking his bitch and I know he thinks that isn't cool
She be like Joe don't u Everest while ur poor and black enrolled in that school

Opener was almost

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vicodin

this clown's joys? crack, round toys, ass...
yall about to see a JBL, while this faggot slams men in a cowboy hat
JUST noticed u dropped.. what did u even bring kid?
ur lines are kinda coo' Joe, except older that Stephen King flick
n let's be honest.. prepare urself, softy
we'd only talk about Boston Bruin fire if more ppl cared about hockey

I do feel like there were a few awkardly worded spots in both verses, but all in all, pretty good drops from both. Felt like it was pretty close, but I have to edge it to Vicodin here. Lot of wordplay and nameflips here, and I felt like his were stronger overall. Feel like both are pretty much going to be powerhouses once their wording's a little more polished.

V/ Vicodin

Joe Boston · 02-02-2013, 09:01 PM

Good looks on the feed everyone uppin

Defiant · 02-07-2013, 03:18 AM

2-1 TO JOE

UPPING

RPK · 02-07-2013, 06:47 PM

Your not a thug but when we tell you ur ass don't listen
If I was to pop Vicodin it wouldn't be me addicted to that prescription
Okay concept, but wording is off
Just lay down n play dead u don't want a sharp right to the back of the head
When Joe whip that ass it'll be more Strikta then that nigga was in ur callout thread
Okay, but again, wording issues
I'm fucking his bitch and I know he thinks that isn't cool
She be like Joe don't u Everest while ur poor and black enrolled in that school
Meh
1 minute in the ring trust me u won't fucking last
Every time u talk we CBS and fucking with Joe will have ur face on that news broadcast
Ok
I'm straight hitting u with these shots it's more then u can handle
Once I catch him with the K have em thinking he watching the telemundo channel
k que is a played concept

vs.

this clown's joys? crack, round toys, ass...
yall about to see a JBL, while this faggot slams men in a cowboy hat
Okay
JUST noticed u dropped.. what did u even bring kid?
ur lines are kinda coo' Joe, except older that Stephen King flick
Okay, but you used two nps in a row which hurts its impact
bitches? ur tryin, but every chick is defiant
if u ever Cayman a pussy, it had to be at least the width of the Islands
Forced wp hurts this punch
this is murder, but even ur own fam ain't bothered B
if I got ur mom's panties in a Nott, I timed how fast she took em off for me
Meh...
n let's be honest.. prepare urself, softy
we'd only talk about Boston Bruin fire if more ppl cared about hockey
Okay

This was a decent battle. Joe has certainly elevated since I last saw him on RB. Both of you have decent concepts, but have wording issues. Overall I have to give it to joe because he had better hits and came slightly more consistently.

V/Joeboston

SiK · 02-07-2013, 07:56 PM

Joe had some solid lines....nothing spectacular to me tho....the Vicodin was ok...broadcast was cool

Vicod I wasnt really feeling anything from tbh....The JBL was a decent concept but the way you worded it made it miss bad to me

pretty one sided here with nothing that wow'd me

V/Joe Boston

Utmost · 02-08-2013, 03:01 AM

Joe
*CBS

Vicodin
*JBL

Pretty close to be honest. Both had some wording issues here, i would say Joe came with fresher material. Ive seen the wp Vicodin came with, done a bit cleaner

v/Joe

Dominate · 02-08-2013, 07:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Joe Boston

@Vicodin

Your not a thug but when we tell you ur ass don't listen
If I was to pop Vicodin it wouldn't be me addicted to that prescription
OK. Bit obvious of a nameplay.
Just lay down n play dead u don't want a sharp right to the back of the head
When Joe whip that ass it'll be more Strikta then that nigga was in ur callout thread
Ehhh nah. Idk if you can have a stricter ass whipping
I'm fucking his bitch and I know he thinks that isn't cool
She be like Joe don't u Everest while ur poor and black enrolled in that school
Cool. Idk of that school but I like the wp and I'm surprised I haven't seen it before
1 minute in the ring trust me u won't fucking last
Every time u talk we CBS and fucking with Joe will have ur face on that news broadcast
Naw. See BS/CBS is super played. This isn't quite the same but it's still a really tired concept
I'm straight hitting u with these shots it's more then u can handle
Once I catch him with the K have em thinking he watching the telemundo channel
K/que... Okayish. Actually haven't seen that wp before but the punch was soso

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Dominate · 02-08-2013, 07:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vicodin

this clown's joys? crack, round toys, ass...
yall about to see a JBL, while this faggot slams men in a cowboy hat
OK. Letter nameplays are rarely good these days. This wasn't but, but nothing wow
JUST noticed u dropped.. what did u even bring kid?
ur lines are kinda coo' Joe, except older that Stephen King flick
Cool, good nameplay
bitches? ur tryin, but every chick is defiant
if u ever Cayman a pussy, it had to be at least the width of the Islands
Good. Dug the set up, and the wp and flip were nice. Bar of the battle.
this is murder, but even ur own fam ain't bothered B
if I got ur mom's panties in a Nott, I timed how fast she took em off for me
Cool. Creative.
n let's be honest.. prepare urself, softy
we'd only talk about Boston Bruin fire if more ppl cared about hockey
I don't care about hockey so I have no idea what Boston bruin is lol. But I get the brewin flip and assume bruin links with hockey. Guess it's cool

I got Vicodin taking this with better creativity and a bit better execution

Hollywood · 02-08-2013, 11:32 AM

opener, CBS

vs.

Cujo, Cayman, panties in a nott

V/Vicodin

Dope girl · 02-08-2013, 12:48 PM

This battle a good battle, Joe had some solid bars.
I'm going with Vic for more creative.

View Poll Results: Who do you expect to win this battle?
Vicodin	4	44.44%
Joe Boston	5	55.56%
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01-28-2013, 07:00 PM	#1
Vicodin Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 35	Vicodin (0-0) vs. Joe Boston (0-0) JOE WINS 10 lines due w/e first to 5 votes wins

02-02-2013, 12:51 PM	#10
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Good battle. Joe had some pretty cool flips. The strikta line was cool. The last bar was a total miss to me thouggh. Vicodin. You had the coo joe line and the rest seemed off to me. Gotta bbring more material like that for the win here but didnt I got.. V -joe b __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

02-07-2013, 06:47 PM	#14
RPK Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 227 Battle Record: 7-4 Rep Power: 35	Your not a thug but when we tell you ur ass don't listen If I was to pop Vicodin it wouldn't be me addicted to that prescription Okay concept, but wording is off Just lay down n play dead u don't want a sharp right to the back of the head When Joe whip that ass it'll be more Strikta then that nigga was in ur callout thread Okay, but again, wording issues I'm fucking his bitch and I know he thinks that isn't cool She be like Joe don't u Everest while ur poor and black enrolled in that school Meh 1 minute in the ring trust me u won't fucking last Every time u talk we CBS and fucking with Joe will have ur face on that news broadcast Ok I'm straight hitting u with these shots it's more then u can handle Once I catch him with the K have em thinking he watching the telemundo channel k que is a played concept vs. this clown's joys? crack, round toys, ass... yall about to see a JBL, while this faggot slams men in a cowboy hat Okay JUST noticed u dropped.. what did u even bring kid? ur lines are kinda coo' Joe, except older that Stephen King flick Okay, but you used two nps in a row which hurts its impact bitches? ur tryin, but every chick is defiant if u ever Cayman a pussy, it had to be at least the width of the Islands Forced wp hurts this punch this is murder, but even ur own fam ain't bothered B if I got ur mom's panties in a Nott, I timed how fast she took em off for me Meh... n let's be honest.. prepare urself, softy we'd only talk about Boston Bruin fire if more ppl cared about hockey Okay This was a decent battle. Joe has certainly elevated since I last saw him on RB. Both of you have decent concepts, but have wording issues. Overall I have to give it to joe because he had better hits and came slightly more consistently. V/Joeboston __________________

01-28-2013, 07:29 PM	#2
Joe Boston Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 929 Battle Record: 8-11 Rep Power: 11092528	Check gl @Vicodin

01-28-2013, 07:32 PM	#3
Vicodin Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 35	u2, check

01-28-2013, 08:26 PM	#4
Joe Boston Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 929 Battle Record: 8-11 Rep Power: 11092528	@Vicodin Your not a thug but when we tell you ur ass don't listen If I was to pop Vicodin it wouldn't be me addicted to that prescription Just lay down n play dead u don't want a sharp right to the back of the head When Joe whip that ass it'll be more Strikta then that nigga was in ur callout thread I'm fucking his bitch and I know he thinks that isn't cool She be like Joe don't u Everest while ur poor and black enrolled in that school 1 minute in the ring trust me u won't fucking last Every time u talk we CBS and fucking with Joe will have ur face on that news broadcast I'm straight hitting u with these shots it's more then u can handle Once I catch him with the K have em thinking he watching the telemundo channel Links: http://artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?1384-Camp-Bell-(1-0)-vs-Jo-E-Murder-(0-0)-OPEN-FOR-VOTES http://artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?1642-2triple0-vs-flo-real-OPEN-FOR-VOTES http://artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?513-bleak-(0-0)-vs-He whose name shall not be spoken-(0-0)-He whose name shall not be spoken-WINS

01-29-2013, 11:29 PM	#5
Joe Boston Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 929 Battle Record: 8-11 Rep Power: 11092528	@Vicodin gonna drop my dude??

01-30-2013, 09:19 PM	#6
Vicodin Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 35	forgot about this, I'll drop within the hour

01-30-2013, 10:12 PM	#7
Vicodin Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 35	this clown's joys? crack, round toys, ass... yall about to see a JBL, while this faggot slams men in a cowboy hat JUST noticed u dropped.. what did u even bring kid? ur lines are kinda coo' Joe, except older that Stephen King flick bitches? ur tryin, but every chick is defiant if u ever Cayman a pussy, it had to be at least the width of the Islands this is murder, but even ur own fam ain't bothered B if I got ur mom's panties in a Nott, I timed how fast she took em off for me n let's be honest.. prepare urself, softy we'd only talk about Boston Bruin fire if more ppl cared about hockey

01-30-2013, 11:15 PM	#8
Joe Boston Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 929 Battle Record: 8-11 Rep Power: 11092528	Good drop @Vicodin yo@Sik there's a vote on the poll must of hit by mistake on my phone can u fix it my bad. Uppin for votes yall

02-02-2013, 09:01 PM	#12
Joe Boston Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 929 Battle Record: 8-11 Rep Power: 11092528	Good looks on the feed everyone uppin

02-07-2013, 03:18 AM	#13
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442244	2-1 TO JOE UPPING

02-07-2013, 07:56 PM	#15
SiK Sergeant Slaughter Join Date: Mar 1986 Posts: 1,913 Battle Record: 13-4 Rep Power: 3648785	Joe had some solid lines....nothing spectacular to me tho....the Vicodin was ok...broadcast was cool Vicod I wasnt really feeling anything from tbh....The JBL was a decent concept but the way you worded it made it miss bad to me pretty one sided here with nothing that wow'd me V/Joe Boston

02-08-2013, 03:01 AM	#16
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320633	Joe CBS Vicodin JBL Pretty close to be honest. Both had some wording issues here, i would say Joe came with fresher material. Ive seen the wp Vicodin came with, done a bit cleaner v/Joe

02-08-2013, 11:32 AM	#19
Hollywood Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 131 Battle Record: 6-3 Rep Power: 0	opener, CBS vs. Cujo, Cayman, panties in a nott V/Vicodin

02-08-2013, 12:48 PM	#20
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,706 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	This battle a good battle, Joe had some solid bars. I'm going with Vic for more creative.