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voidformula · 01-30-2013, 11:43 PM

Fill it up, just keep dropping shit. I've been writing nonstop for the last hour or so, so instead of making a bunch of posts, I'm just gonna keep dropping shit in here. Everyone else is welcome to join me. I'm sure we could come up with collabs and shit too.

Oh and I'm not putting this in the cypher because I don't wanna have me posting a bunch of times by myself. Figured it's better to just keep it all in one topic.

Been jamming to a lot of Rob the Viking instrumentals getting a bit gruesome on them;

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Ghoulish thoughts arouse when I cruise the block and spot two gowns
An elder and her stepchild I lower the volume so my bass don't pound
All I can imagine is how her face goes wild
Gripping the thought of rape and swords found
Nearby the scene where dates get torn down
Dragged into the bush and screams are for rounds
That pierce the dreams of living in normal towns without crack fiends
But I envision a depiction of schemes
Slitting her wrist watching her slip in between
And take my unwashed dick into her virgin spleen
Something obscene not imagined by most
When the rations of potion relaxes her corpse
I'll fashion a force and inflict a torch
So she's branded my queen and tainted by the seeds I endorse
No remorse for that slut my nightly routine

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Fuck that cunt collapse her asshole smash so hard I crush it like a Lhasa Apso
I ain't trashing capsules to rape this bitch I want that for the ratchet crowd hoes
Wait till she's drunk and can barely stand go ahead and take her hand say I'm calling a cab home
Till she hops in and sees I'm not a friend but contradicting trash moulded in the shape of a man
If she didn't realize by then she's sinking like a ship going in way over her head
By the time my dick is harder than anvil it'll be a standstill in my basement with her legs spread
I manhandle every fighting attempt to escape by shackling her legs plastic bags over her face
Breathing reciprocates and slowly deteriorates until she's collapsed on the floor ceasing to shake
Not a movement in sight my prediction was right petite bodies put up very minimal fight
And if I play my hand another anonymous name added to my list of fortunate games

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Sneak up to your casket grab the duct tape and fashion your ass a mask, kid
We some facists
Can't relax when I splice your ribs with slashes
Dull blades contact spreading aids like magic

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What's your method of mayhem ill tell you what mine is
I sit down open up my binder of violence
Start vibin' to a record of silence
And when the time hits release the vocals on a track like nine inch
I'm no Manson but I speak like his prime
Precise ransom notes secrete warnings to resign
A handsome face I'd hate to bring heat with the nine
And place your teeth in a state of decline

Someone wanna collab on a subject or something? I need a friend to write with :(

More shit;

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Release my endorphins they're all ignoring everyone has trouble not only those endorsing
Habitual drug use and those infused with violence on the streets or daddy's dishing out child abuse
I'm just kind of amused cause at the time they relied on my views and now it's all skewed
To remind what not to do but if I could renew I'd never let loose and never lose their trust
Or play games to look cool
I've gotta shake the extra weight that's been pressing me down
I know one day it'll be my last stay on this crazy place revolving around
And if there ever comes a time again when I'm wanting to stop breathing aloud
I hope I'll have a loving family and a baby boy to pass off the crown
Or at least hold me down so I can see another day and remain a citizen, how
Can one be so stressed over chemical imbalances inside our heads
Everyone's challenged with obstacles that test
Some leap the hurdle other fall into the depths

Split · 01-31-2013, 06:32 AM

I will collab with you. I'll hit you with a PM. Your other drop showed you were self-conscious of your own writing.. A very good first step. Be conscious of where your end rhymes and inner rhymes interact. If you break up individual lines into comma'd sections, it gives you more control over flow and emphasis on certain words.

The "what's your method of mayhem, I'll tel you what mine is" was a really cool line. Word choice was nice. Keep keyin, keep up, stick around, all that.

Camp Bell · 01-31-2013, 04:06 PM

im down for a collab also...hit me with topic and shit

01-31-2013, 06:32 AM	#2
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,904 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899395	I will collab with you. I'll hit you with a PM. Your other drop showed you were self-conscious of your own writing.. A very good first step. Be conscious of where your end rhymes and inner rhymes interact. If you break up individual lines into comma'd sections, it gives you more control over flow and emphasis on certain words. The "what's your method of mayhem, I'll tel you what mine is" was a really cool line. Word choice was nice. Keep keyin, keep up, stick around, all that. __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

01-31-2013, 04:06 PM	#3
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	im down for a collab also...hit me with topic and shit __________________ get high. write rhymes.