10-10-2013, 01:02 PM | #1 |
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RD2: Dominate vs. Blue Bayou - {Dominate wins}
The Long Anticipated... NC II . . . . . Round 2 Rules: 10 lines minimum/16 max in this 3-way battle (If u & ur oppenent(s) agree to more that's fine) No swaying No biting No recycling No other dumb shit that will get u DQd Voting on 5 battles is mandatory, or u will be docked 2 for every one u miss. Links MUST be posted in the voting links thread at the top of the forum. Battles due Wednesday October 16th at 11:59 pm PST Extensions allowed up to 48 hrs, & to ONLY be agreed to between both participants. Any other questions or concerns PM myself or Sn00p. @Aero @Dominate |
10-17-2013, 08:47 PM | #2 |
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sorry only time for 10
this faggots never dreamt of rap fame or gettin bread from the flows but he still wants Aerplay. & his weekends are spent gettin head from the GOAT face it mangg.. u'll never be an Ace of Spades took a job teachin retards math just so you could make the grade watch this vet get choked. swept in votes cuz im the truest winner loss'll be so Briskett's gettin served up Sunday night during a Jewish Dinner you're wack dude. bars are lame & every verse is ass ur styles PG. so when it comes to reading verses ur always the first to pass lol & you bein Aussie. but i wont diss as i write up the facts cuz in a way im Ozzy too. everytime i visit ur girl i get Head right off the Bat |
10-18-2013, 04:06 AM | #3 |
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This pindick miiiiight bring a girl home, but lemme put these facts in order
Soon as she see Bipolar mood changes so fast you'd think she had that disorder You a washed up faggot Blue... How often u got top offenses? That's Bound to A Curfew enough times to rival the discipline ur mom dispenses She loves bondage & choking. Her fav sex game shows she truly a hoe It's Holding Her Breath and getting tied up... But it ain't a Balloon that she's blown Faggot you can't afford steak. Please just spare me the rubbish Your Porterhouse is what you'd come home to after a day of carrying luggage Sucha insignificant faggot. Ur gunnin's not somethin we notice If I got beef it's nothing to sneeze at... U just rustle feathers right under our noses
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10-18-2013, 09:28 AM | #4 |
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Blue- Seen the Aer/Air concept way too much. Make the grade was pretty simple. Brisket was a dope concept but felt like you could've connected it more. PG was eh...ok. Head off the bat was dope, very nice closer. Obviously this was rushed. Wasn't the Blue I'm used to reading but wow @ the closer.
Dom- Bipolar was dope. Curfew was pretty cool. Balloon was dope, connected everything nicely. Porterhouse was ok but didn't have much sting to it. Wasn't feeling the closer. I see what you tried to do with the rustle feathers connection but I wasn't crazy about it. Even with Blue not dropping to his normal standard, this was a pretty dope battle. I do think Dom took it soundly, tho. Concepts were a bit more thought out. Dom. |
10-18-2013, 05:31 PM | #5 |
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watch this vet get choked. swept in votes cuz im the truest winner
loss'll be so Briskett's gettin served up Sunday night during a Jewish Dinner lol & you bein Aussie. but i wont diss as i write up the facts cuz in a way im Ozzy too. everytime i visit ur girl i get Head right off the Bat vs This pindick miiiiight bring a girl home, but lemme put these facts in order Soon as she see Bipolar mood changes so fast you'd think she had that disorder You a washed up faggot Blue... How often u got top offenses? That's Bound to A Curfew enough times to rival the discipline ur mom dispenses OG Bayou had the head off the bat line, that was nice. Briskett didn't have sting but I liked it too. I thought he had a couple misses though...didn't like PG or make the grade much at all. Dom started off with haymakers. Bipolar was dope, line of the battle. I generally don't like the wording "<-like you have that ____". But it was well done here. And the second bar was nice.. funny. Cooled off a little towards the end, wasn't feelin the closer. Thought each could've brought a little more than this but still a solid battle, relatively close. V/ Dom kennedy |
10-19-2013, 04:21 AM | #6 |
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this faggots never dreamt of rap fame or gettin bread from the flows
but he still wants Aerplay. & his weekends are spent gettin head from the GOAT Didn't like the set up, dissing him for not wanting fame or $ for rapping? The aerplay punch was pretty nice but cuda been worded harder and cud of rhymed face it mangg.. u'll never be an Ace of Spades took a job teachin retards math just so you could make the grade Ok kinda basic watch this vet get choked. swept in votes cuz im the truest winner loss'll be so Briskett's gettin served up Sunday night during a Jewish Dinner Nice I like this shit you're wack dude. bars are lame & every verse is ass ur styles PG. so when it comes to reading verses ur always the first to pass Played but worded nice lol & you bein Aussie. but i wont diss as i write up the facts cuz in a way im Ozzy too. everytime i visit ur girl i get Head right off the Bat Really played. Plus eminem used this concept too in dispicable freestyle so I've seen it done atleast 2-3 times before This pindick miiiiight bring a girl home, but lemme put these facts in order Soon as she see Bipolar mood changes so fast you'd think she had that disorder Lmao at bipolar I don't think I've ever heard anyone say pole her referring to fucking. Pretty nice line for a weird phrase You a washed up faggot Blue... How often u got top offenses? That's Bound to A Curfew enough times to rival the discipline ur mom dispenses This was actually pretty tight. She loves bondage & choking. Her fav sex game shows she truly a hoe It's Holding Her Breath and getting tied up... But it ain't a Balloon that she's blown Not feeling. Worded poorly too Faggot you can't afford steak. Please just spare me the rubbish Your Porterhouse is what you'd come home to after a day of carrying luggage Don't get the wordplay wats a por ter house besides a steak? Sucha insignificant faggot. Ur gunnin's not somethin we notice If I got beef it's nothing to sneeze at... U just rustle feathers right under our noses Not feeling this either kinda weak Not a real hard battle, but a couple nice lines. I got blues brisket vs doms bipolar n bound to a curfew. Vote dom |
10-20-2013, 12:00 AM | #7 |
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this faggots never dreamt of rap fame or gettin bread from the flows
but he still wants Aerplay. & his weekends are spent gettin head from the GOAT watch this vet get choked. swept in votes cuz im the truest winner loss'll be so Briskett's gettin served up Sunday night during a Jewish Dinner lol & you bein Aussie. but i wont diss as i write up the facts cuz in a way im Ozzy too. everytime i visit ur girl i get Head right off the Bat vs This pindick miiiiight bring a girl home, but lemme put these facts in order Soon as she see Bipolar mood changes so fast you'd think she had that disorder You a washed up faggot Blue... How often u got top offenses? That's Bound to A Curfew enough times to rival the discipline ur mom dispenses Faggot you can't afford steak. Please just spare me the rubbish Your Porterhouse is what you'd come home to after a day of carrying luggage the battle could honestly go either way but it really comes down to stronger misses which was Dom in my eyes .. feel like Blue rushed some things weren't worded right ..the Head Right off the bat line was dope.... the Bipolar was a the winner though... Vote- Dom |
10-21-2013, 11:04 AM | #8 |
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this faggots never dreamt of rap fame or gettin bread from the flows
but he still wants Aerplay. & his weekends are spent gettin head from the GOAT watch this vet get choked. swept in votes cuz im the truest winner loss'll be so Briskett's gettin served up Sunday night during a Jewish Dinner lol & you bein Aussie. but i wont diss as i write up the facts cuz in a way im Ozzy too. everytime i visit ur girl i get Head right off the Bat vs. This pindick miiiiight bring a girl home, but lemme put these facts in order Soon as she see Bipolar mood changes so fast you'd think she had that disorder You a washed up faggot Blue... How often u got top offenses? That's Bound to A Curfew enough times to rival the discipline ur mom dispenses Faggot you can't afford steak. Please just spare me the rubbish Your Porterhouse is what you'd come home to after a day of carrying luggage Close as hell. So many wordplays, it was definitely fun to read. I actually thought Dom was fresher (which is saying a lot because both were pretty fresh), but when I think about the lines I was feeling, Dom's were ones that I would have a more difficult time coming up with in comparison to Blues. That's what the difference is to me. V/ Dominate
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10-21-2013, 03:15 PM | #9 |
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this faggots never dreamt of rap fame or gettin bread from the flows
but he still wants Aerplay. & his weekends are spent gettin head from the GOAT watch this vet get choked. swept in votes cuz im the truest winner loss'll be so Briskett's gettin served up Sunday night during a Jewish Dinner vs This pindick miiiiight bring a girl home, but lemme put these facts in order Soon as she see Bipolar mood changes so fast you'd think she had that disorder You a washed up faggot Blue... How often u got top offenses? That's Bound to A Curfew enough times to rival the discipline ur mom dispenses She loves bondage & choking. Her fav sex game shows she truly a hoe It's Holding Her Breath and getting tied up... But it ain't a Balloon that she's blown Disappointing battle. Aer/air played, but not sure about Aerplay. Seems cool. Make the grade is ok, I guess. Not really feeling, tbh. Seems lazy. Briskett's is good. Your best line yet. Didn't like PG. Good concept and connection, but not executed well. Ozzy/head off the bat is really played. Pretty sure Villan (and maybe you?) did this back in longbar. Maybe ~kaos~. It was a common connection. Bipolar was a dope opener. A curfew was also good. Balloon iss cool. Porterhouse is decent. Closer was ok, I guess. Overall not really a close battle like everyone said. Blue didn't try and rushed/half assed here. Briskett's was his only good line. Others were played, not good or executed poorly. Dom had a couple nice ones and LOTB. He was also more consistent and more original. Better concepts, etc. He obviously dropped just enough to win. What a let down. Props to both. /v dominate |
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