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..im like a dog showwing his teeth... you should Pay attention...you owe me.. dragon breath from a monsters mouth he spit flames, just to get it off his brain, clear his conscience out im on the brink of INSANE all they rhyme about is the whips and chains, these guys are enslaved i wanna open up the masses eyes yet im stuck in solitude toying with a rubics cube feeling bastardized they keep feeding me from a bag of lies thats why when i talk my shit, Its non fiction especially when i recite these lines and its mostly fiction in their verses theyre writtens are delicious ill eat em. shit cursive pay attention ive earned this. my last book of rhymes some of the illest shit, i burned it i am on a one man warpath, it gets worser mixing insanity with an appetite for destruction n mass murder i hate the way the world worka, murder me in my sleep the publics dumb, our own leaders hearding us like some sheep, jeesh [serving em like their fiends, pharmaceuticals got oridinary civilians withdrawling n tryna shoot at you so here i am in solitude my wall filled with pinned up verses like a skitsophrenic my minds beautiful like russell crowe dropping mail off at an address unknown Piecing these flows together its up to yall to try n follow the code Yo.. I embody the ghost, of daVinci when I flow mixed with a dash of basquiat, writtens etched in stone moses descended Sinai with two tablets that i wrote that he found amongst empty lean bottles n a blunt roach its the second coming of the street prophet, you got it? a modern day Galileo with the heart of Muhammad Soon they'll hold think tanks to pick apart my doctrine to find the complex coding of knowledge I've hidden inside it to the average rap fan these are just bars.. but theyre penned by an idiot savant inspired by retards wishing my slate could be cleaned off call this shit venting i just sceipple a bunch of words to let steam off. my mindstate like jesus christ when he was crowned thorns poking in my mental trying to walk on water and drown i am apart of a tight circle where no squares are allowed perfect symetry between them an me .. its fuckin chemistry mentally allegedly i am similar to a god yall are intimidated thats why its negative critique as i riddle off these bars but i read most the shit on here backwards as i slept still aint find one hot bar theyre backing backwards off a ledge as i got a weapon to em making em walk the plank in my head im just day dreaming..hope yall dnt take offensive to what i said everybody knows it aint hard to be a rapper on the web but step foot into a cypher with the geek its like being cellmates with a lifer, DONT SLEEP. dont interrupt me with your yo yo yo when i speak i am the Master of this Craft, only i give you permission to proceed man im just relieving stress in my pad, dont mind me. im just spilling whats inside of me, all into my diary |
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Aggressive man. Nice. You record? Seems like it. Ill get around to reading the other 2, then leave some decent feed lol. This was cool though.
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actually i just got back into writing and shit. i been locked up past three years, came home, recorded a good 12 tracks and bought all original beats, someone claimed their laptop got stolen, there goes my work. kind of made me lose faith, but im back at it. got a couple self shot, low budget videos on facebook, but that was before i decided to create this 'CHARACTER' to market myself with .. i was speaking my reality in those, with a little pinch of trying to appease the pubic with ' tight bars ' and punch lines, but this here is all me, the real me.
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That's dope as fuck man. Keep striving
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Pretty dope. Worser is not a word though
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thanks for the criticism. neither is worka, yet thats what i DOES.. being a writer, an emcee, i bend the english language to work for me.
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Padded Room Diaries: Entry One. Entry Two, Genius vs. Insanity Margin scribble Entry Three: Sporadic thoughts. Entry 4: Bars Attacks Rebel Yell Series: Rebel Yell |
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