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Old 12-25-2013, 03:15 AM   #1
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Default Padded Room Diaries: Entry One.

faced with the mark of the beast..
..im like a dog showwing his teeth...
you should Pay attention...you owe me..

dragon breath from a monsters mouth
he spit flames, just to get it off his brain,
clear his conscience out
im on the brink of INSANE
all they rhyme about
is the whips and chains, these guys are enslaved
i wanna open up the masses eyes
yet im stuck in solitude toying with a rubics cube
feeling bastardized
they keep feeding me from a bag of lies
thats why when i talk my shit,
Its non fiction especially when i recite these lines
and its mostly fiction in their verses
theyre writtens are delicious ill eat em. shit cursive
pay attention ive earned this.
my last book of rhymes some of the illest shit, i burned it
i am on a one man warpath, it gets worser
mixing insanity with an appetite for destruction n mass murder
i hate the way the world worka, murder me in my sleep
the publics dumb, our own leaders hearding us like some sheep, jeesh
[serving em like their fiends, pharmaceuticals
got oridinary civilians withdrawling n tryna shoot at you
so here i am in solitude
my wall filled with pinned up verses like a skitsophrenic
my minds beautiful
like russell crowe dropping mail off at an address unknown
Piecing these flows together its up to yall to try n follow the code

Yo..


I embody the ghost, of daVinci when I flow
mixed with a dash of basquiat, writtens etched in stone
moses descended Sinai with two tablets that i wrote
that he found amongst empty lean bottles n a blunt roach
its the second coming of the street prophet, you got it?
a modern day Galileo with the heart of Muhammad
Soon they'll hold think tanks to pick apart my doctrine
to find the complex coding of knowledge I've hidden inside it
to the average rap fan these are just bars..
but theyre penned by an idiot savant inspired by retards
wishing my slate could be cleaned off
call this shit venting i just sceipple a bunch of words to let steam off.
my mindstate like jesus christ when he was crowned
thorns poking in my mental trying to walk on water and drown
i am apart of a tight circle where no squares are allowed
perfect symetry between them an me .. its fuckin chemistry
mentally allegedly i am similar to a god
yall are intimidated thats why its negative critique as i riddle off these bars
but i read most the shit on here backwards as i slept
still aint find one hot bar theyre backing backwards off a ledge
as i got a weapon to em making em walk the plank in my head
im just day dreaming..hope yall dnt take offensive to what i said
everybody knows it aint hard to be a rapper on the web
but step foot into a cypher with the geek
its like being cellmates with a lifer, DONT SLEEP.
dont interrupt me with your yo yo yo when i speak
i am the Master of this Craft, only i give you permission to proceed
man im just relieving stress in my pad, dont mind me.
im just spilling whats inside of me, all into my diary
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Old 12-25-2013, 04:12 AM   #2
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Aggressive man. Nice. You record? Seems like it. Ill get around to reading the other 2, then leave some decent feed lol. This was cool though.
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Old 12-25-2013, 04:15 AM   #3
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actually i just got back into writing and shit. i been locked up past three years, came home, recorded a good 12 tracks and bought all original beats, someone claimed their laptop got stolen, there goes my work. kind of made me lose faith, but im back at it. got a couple self shot, low budget videos on facebook, but that was before i decided to create this 'CHARACTER' to market myself with .. i was speaking my reality in those, with a little pinch of trying to appease the pubic with ' tight bars ' and punch lines, but this here is all me, the real me.
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Old 12-25-2013, 04:22 AM   #4
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That's dope as fuck man. Keep striving
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Pretty dope. Worser is not a word though
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Old 12-25-2013, 04:50 PM   #6
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thanks for the criticism. neither is worka, yet thats what i DOES.. being a writer, an emcee, i bend the english language to work for me.
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