Regular Battle Title Match: ill nik-A vs Phuck Yew - NIK WINS

[Sharp]

UTC I

Regular Battle


Due: TBD by participants

Length: 16 Lines

Standard Rules apply


Winner will be declared Regular Battle Champ and will defend the title in future battles

@ill nik-A @Phuck Yew

[KwaL!ty]

Your the champ line counts up to you ..



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Everyone else straight ..

[ill nik-A]

16
Welcome!
Due Monday or Tuesday... A bit busy this week

[KwaL!ty]

Agreed ..

@ill nik-A im ready when you are

[ill nik-A]

16 sent
@Phuck Yew

[KwaL!ty]

@ill nik-A we can post now if you want?

[ill nik-A]

Ok @Phuck Yew

[ill nik-A]

Sharp, I’m undefeated in the BA with a stellar run & I feel offended, son
Phuck Yew’s insulting… only cuz he’s in a champ match after losin’ to Lotto & Simon Severston
u are horrible & not getting the picture… guess this homo's dumb as bricks
u’re showing ur best angles but it’s like wack itself photo bombed that shit
u said I’m one of the best cuz I got elite flowing in every week’s showing
But flattery will get u nowhere.... unless u're under the tire & I keep going
got bitches that call me to smoke & bang while u struggle as u should to get laid
we both tend to wake & bake... difference is u deliver a cake to the hooker u paid
u don’t want me to give u a Cuban necktie cuz I’ve got it mastered great
u’ve also cut necks before… & do everything possible to avoid aftershave
bastard case, honestly u a son of a bitch & we’ve all seen that whore beg
but her blow jobs are no surprise… she has NSFW branded on her forehead
Just last week u said ya verses vs me & Kar were gonna prove u a beast
guess ur New Years resolution was see how many champ matches u could lose in a week
verses lack flow, originality, concepts, wording... they're a constant problem
u don't only show a series of mistakes... u provide the unlimited edition box set of them

The city is mine

[KwaL!ty]

in this battle ur gettin Shitted on w/ a knife to the twat!
ur biggest fantasies to be Bags Boxers after a Long Night & some Squats
you old Spic you'd better Brace .. like where ya knees at
cause its like im battling R!can's Dad & he's going through a tough relapse
how you flirt w/ Anthony, some might think that sons gay
if this fat fuck had to exercise his options it would be working out on his 401K
when it comes to a crazy past ur no Actor & what i might says true
cause Nik was around to Shake Hands w/ Walt disney & survived the Ice Age 2
these bars get personal, while ur known for having no passion
even if you rocked the Newest Apparel, it will still be considered Old Fashion
you & Bags are'nt only tag partners, you should all see those faggits
cuz Nik's got more Ant Facts then Google collab'ing on a show w/ National Geographics
he hit up my phone, i had to laugh when this menace called
how was he talking drugs, when the only Cane he's moved had a pair of Tennis balls
this is natural .. Dizaster must be ur son or this prick is weathered
cuz Ills face consist of more Black Heads then Karaoke & Aero taking pics together

[Texcellence]

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

u said I’m one of the best cuz I got elite flowing in every week’s showing
But flattery will get u nowhere.... unless u're under the tire & I keep going
got bitches that call me to smoke & bang while u struggle as u should to get laid
we both tend to wake & bake... difference is u deliver a cake to the hooker u paid
u don’t want me to give u a Cuban necktie cuz I’ve got it mastered great
u’ve also cut necks before… & do everything possible to avoid aftershave

Just last week u said ya verses vs me & Kar were gonna prove u a beast
guess ur New Years resolution was see how many champ matches u could lose in a week
verses lack flow, originality, concepts, wording... they're a constant problem
u don't only show a series of mistakes... u provide the unlimited edition box set of them

Vote: ill nik-A

Phuck, I've got to be honest and say it really seems like you rushed your verse. Did you really rhyme twat and squat?! ha, but really there were a few potentials in there but nothing that stood out to me. I liked the concept of the Walt Disney line and feel it could have been executed so much better (and maybe a bit more factual - Disney didn't make Ice Age 2). Overall I found this a bit one sided in my opinion and for the quoted lines I gave my vote to Nik.

Good luck both..

[PancakeBrah]

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

Sharp, I’m undefeated in the BA with a stellar run & I feel offended, son
Phuck Yew’s insulting… only cuz he’s in a champ match after losin’ to Lotto & Simon Severston
weak opener

u are horrible & not getting the picture… guess this homo's dumb as bricks
u’re showing ur best angles but it’s like wack itself photo bombed that shit
lol. good.

u said I’m one of the best cuz I got elite flowing in every week’s showing
But flattery will get u nowhere.... unless u're under the tire & I keep going
forced. good idea. but flattery isn't a word both ways you used it. and if you keep going, and he's flat, he's still going nowhere. know what i mean? decent concept, but i don't think it landed well. wordplay is off.

got bitches that call me to smoke & bang while u struggle as u should to get laid
we both tend to wake & bake... difference is u deliver a cake to the hooker u paid
nah

u don’t want me to give u a Cuban necktie cuz I’ve got it mastered great
u’ve also cut necks before… & do everything possible to avoid aftershave
decent bar. not hard hitting, though.

bastard case, honestly u a son of a bitch & we’ve all seen that whore beg
but her blow jobs are no surprise… she has NSFW branded on her forehead
nah

Just last week u said ya verses vs me & Kar were gonna prove u a beast
guess ur New Years resolution was see how many champ matches u could lose in a week
lol

verses lack flow, originality, concepts, wording... they're a constant problem
u don't only show a series of mistakes... u provide the unlimited edition box set of them
decent/good ender

The city is mine

I've seen a lot better from you, seems like you played down to your competition in this one. I don't think you'd drop a verse like this against Neighbor/Orc/Hush/Bags/etc. Had some highlights, though.

Originally Posted by Phuck Yew

in this battle ur gettin Shitted on w/ a knife to the twat!
ur biggest fantasies to be Bags Boxers after a Long Night & some Squats
no. he wants to be the shit in bags boxers? set up didnt help the bar. if you want to make a bags/nik bar hit it has to be better than this.

you old Spic you'd better Brace .. like where ya knees at
cause its like im battling R!can's Dad & he's going through a tough relapse
like how you tied in the previous bar with the set up for this. punch was weak, though.

how you flirt w/ Anthony, some might think that sons gay
if this fat fuck had to exercise his options it would be working out on his 401K
bad wording. you already said exercise. saying working out on his 401k is too on the nose. if anything, it should be 'working out his 401k' but even that isn't good.

when it comes to a crazy past ur no Actor & what i might says true
cause Nik was around to Shake Hands w/ Walt disney & survived the Ice Age 2
lol. good

these bars get personal, while ur known for having no passion
even if you rocked the Newest Apparel, it will still be considered Old Fashion
ok.

you & Bags are'nt only tag partners, you should all see those faggits
cuz Nik's got more Ant Facts then Google collab'ing on a show w/ National Geographics
...no. like, no where near good. google collabing with national geographic sucks. what does that even mean. plus even if google were to "collab" with national geographic 'ant's wouldn't be the top priority. it may seem like im nitpicking but im not. the wordplay is really weak. plus, this is the third bags/nik friendship punch of your verse. not a one of them has been good or original. who is this against, bag and niks? c'mon. nik has a bunch of personal shit if you want to go that route. relying on this one trope so much is a sign of a lack of creativity.

he hit up my phone, i had to laugh when this menace called
how was he talking drugs, when the only Cane he's moved had a pair of Tennis balls
ok

this is natural .. Dizaster must be ur son or this prick is weathered
cuz Ills face consist of more Black Heads then Karaoke & Aero taking pics together
wording was off. i thought this could've been dope but i think i may have interpreted different than you. if it's the second interpretation of this that i have, it was really weak.

One good bar, couple decent bars, and some big misses and over reliance on one idea.

nik played down to the level of his competition and won.

v/nik

[Certain]

ill nik-A: There's a good chance this is the worst battle verse I have seen from you. When you opened with that blunt diss, I thought you were setting up a series of punches about how he shouldn't be here. The New Year's resolution line had failed promise but wasn't delivered correctly. The blow jobs line was terrible. Flattery was another good concept squandered on poor execution. Your saving grace is that you know the fundamentals. But nohing about this verse suggested you are a battler of repute.

Phuck Yew: Your wording needs real work. But your concepts do, too. The last line was basically a compliment. The ant line was a mess in every regard. Canes aren't walkers. Ice Age was not made by Disney. The old fashion line was your best execution, but the concept was played. This verse was not good, like this battle[

Vote: ill-Nika.

[Cakedout]

Phone expo: Really didn't enjoy this battle.. Felt like ya'll was doing to much.
Any who, one wording had out shined the other. Wasn't feeling the loser punches
at all. Overall I wasn't feeling this battle but a winner has to be chosen so I decided
to go with Ill-Nik-a due to better wording and concepts.

[Ryan 12]

u said I’m one of the best cuz I got elite flowing in every week’s showing
But flattery will get u nowhere.... unless u're under the tire & I keep going
^seriously? played as fuck
bastard case, honestly u a son of a bitch & we’ve all seen that whore beg
but her blow jobs are no surprise… she has NSFW branded on her forehead
lmao
Just last week u said ya verses vs me & Kar were gonna prove u a beast
guess ur New Years resolution was see how many champ matches u could lose in a week
verses lack flow, originality, concepts, wording... they're a constant problem
u don't only show a series of mistakes... u provide the unlimited edition box set of them
meh

vs


how you flirt w/ Anthony, some might think that sons gay
if this fat fuck had to exercise his options it would be working out on his 401K
this is natural .. Dizaster must be ur son or this prick is weathered
cuz Ills face consist of more Black Heads then Karaoke & Aero taking pics together


ok battle. some played shit, but nik had the harder hitting punches. phuck ur last bar was cool but worded weird

nik got more quotes and was more consistent




vote - ill nik-A

[Certain]

@Sharp Nine, shouldn't this count as a 5-0 shutout?

[Sharp]

On it