Camp Bell vs. Sharp Nine {Sharp Nine wins}

[Sn00p]

Semi-Finals Rules

Due Dates:
Verses are due Monday,
March 18th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
Voting ends Thursday 11:59 PM PST.
(Battles that lack votes may close later.)
(One sided battles may get closed early.)
(Extensions can be no longer than 36 hours
and have to be granted by your opponent.)

Line Limit:
Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 20 lines
(The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.)

General Rules:
1st person can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
MUST match the 1st person's line amount.

@Camp Bell @Sharp Nine

[Sharp]

Sup bud, feel free to call it.

faggotsaysnikesign?

[Camp Bell]

lol chizeck.

10-12 beeotch!

[Camp Bell]

i got 12 son.

[Sharp]

cool, im bout done and planning on dropping today

[Camp Bell]

i've come to attack, i hope you invest in some armor
or we'll see sharp pee as his muscles relax, after i stab him to death with this marker
you think you lucky for using god of war assistance?
you just another victim of a killer, whale...in other words, i never had to pay orca visit
i let the gun blaze, stay reaching for heat to bang fores!
if shots coming from nine iron, its just tiger competing on the green during PGA tours
this what i came for? a matchup with this slapstick actor
ya reenactment scene as a wack verse, this episode of SNL, is not a laughing matter
i read the mag then smoked this herb cuz my joints blunt
fuck ya dime&nick pitch, Sn00p must get high to type predictions, if you're his choice bud
you've been destroyed son, im on my job once a line start
you could start biting dull writtens to get ya point off, still wouldnt be on ya grind sharp

[Sharp]

I hold weight with chicks. They always ring this man's cell
But you don't get a single call... 'slike you ain't worth a Graham, Bell
Battling a guy who Jo E. Murder beat? This round's a treat, dude
You should consider getting a Ghostwriter... cuz even that clown can beat you
Guy's trash, no problem for me to shake this whore
If anyone feels Camp fire they just got ambitious making s'mores
Hes spent all week workin in his forum, can tell this gays scared
fuck putting ur nose to the grindstone... I'll stick his whole face there
how bout you drop less than 14 for once? prolly give your verse stability
cuz its clear you're just pushing the limit with both your lines and mental ability
ppl love me rising the ranks, but you get all scoffs, son
think anyone hopes Bell tower? Nah, they just wish you'd fall off one

[Flow]

Now nearly everyones out of this I can see you all struggling for feedback but let me oblige while i have a few mins spare

Originally Posted by Camp Bell

i've come to attack, i hope you invest in some armor
or we'll see sharp pee as his muscles relax, after i stab him to death with this marker
Your going for a sharpie pen marker which i got, but it aint really working for me - nice attempt i tried thinking of how to tie a sharpie in an you at least came close
you think you lucky for using god of war assistance?
you just another victim of a killer, whale...in other words, i never had to pay orca visit
nice
i let the gun blaze, stay reaching for heat to bang fores!
if shots coming from nine iron, its just tiger competing on the green during PGA tours
ok
this what i came for? a matchup with this slapstick actor
ya reenactment scene as a wack verse, this episode of SNL, is not a laughing matter
ok
i read the mag then smoked this herb cuz my joints blunt
fuck ya dime&nick pitch, Sn00p must get high to type predictions, if you're his choice bud
Hmmm I think you could of reworded this and tweeked this for some nice wordplay but in the current state its just an ok for me
you've been destroyed son, im on my job once a line start
you could start biting dull writtens to get ya point off, still wouldnt be on ya grind sharpmeh not for me

Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

I hold weight with chicks. They always ring this man's cell
But you don't get a single call... 'slike you ain't worth a Graham, Bell
ok
Battling a guy who Jo E. Murder beat? This round's a treat, dude
You should consider getting a Ghostwriter... cuz even that clown can beat you
lol
Guy's trash, no problem for me to shake this whore
If anyone feels Camp fire they just got ambitious making s'mores
lol nice
Hes spent all week workin in his forum, can tell this gays scared
fuck putting ur nose to the grindstone... I'll stick his whole face there
lol tut tut
how bout you drop less than 14 for once? prolly give your verse stability
cuz its clear you're just pushing the limit with both your lines and mental ability
not the best ive seen from you
ppl love me rising the ranks, but you get all scoffs, son
think anyone hopes Bell tower? Nah, they just wish you'd fall off one
ok

Vote Sharp

[Malachi]

i've come to attack, i hope you invest in some armor
or we'll see sharp pee as his muscles relax, after i stab him to death with this marker
I guess i saw where this was going but it didnt hit well
you think you lucky for using god of war assistance?
you just another victim of a killer, whale...in other words, i never had to pay orca visit
this is coo
i let the gun blaze, stay reaching for heat to bang fores!
if shots coming from nine iron, its just tiger competing on the green during PGA tours
aight
this what i came for? a matchup with this slapstick actor
ya reenactment scene as a wack verse, this episode of SNL, is not a laughing matter
eh
i read the mag then smoked this herb cuz my joints blunt
fuck ya dime&nick pitch, Sn00p must get high to type predictions, if you're his choice bud
coo i guess
you've been destroyed son, im on my job once a line start
you could start biting dull writtens to get ya point off, still wouldnt be on ya grind sharp
nah didnt really punch

VS

I hold weight with chicks. They always ring this man's cell
But you don't get a single call... 'slike you ain't worth a Graham, Bell
decent, probably couldve been worded better
Battling a guy who Jo E. Murder beat? This round's a treat, dude
You should consider getting a Ghostwriter... cuz even that clown can beat you
haha nice
Guy's trash, no problem for me to shake this whore
If anyone feels Camp fire they just got ambitious making s'mores
this coo
Hes spent all week workin in his forum, can tell this gays scared
fuck putting ur nose to the grindstone... I'll stick his whole face there
nicee
how bout you drop less than 14 for once? prolly give your verse stability
cuz its clear you're just pushing the limit with both your lines and mental ability
this eh didnt seem hard of a punch
ppl love me rising the ranks, but you get all scoffs, son
think anyone hopes Bell tower? Nah, they just wish you'd fall off one
lol good closer

V/ Sharp 9 cause he had morre good/funny lines

[~RustyGunZ~]

i let the gun blaze, stay reaching for heat to bang fores!
if shots coming from nine iron, its just tiger competing on the green during PGA tours
you've been destroyed son, im on my job once a line start
you could start biting dull writtens to get ya point off, still wouldnt be on ya grind sharp

sharpie could've been used correct, it was not. corny tbh. killer whale umm like wail on him? or is his alias whale? idk it wasn't great though. gunplay is kinda lame and iron/golf is a bit used, but okay nameplay for a newbie tourney. like give S an L? is so played if not then just weak. anything involving snoop and being high is a played concept. u at least tried somethin decent with the closer so i'll give it to u it wasn't good though.

vs

I hold weight with chicks. They always ring this man's cell
But you don't get a single call... 'slike you ain't worth a Graham, Bell
Guy's trash, no problem for me to shake this whore
If anyone feels Camp fire they just got ambitious making s'mores
how bout you drop less than 14 for once? prolly give your verse stability
cuz its clear you're just pushing the limit with both your lines and mental ability
ppl love me rising the ranks, but you get all scoffs, son
think anyone hopes Bell tower? Nah, they just wish you'd fall off one

graham bell was fire. nah @ ghostwriter. camp fire was cool the wording wasn't terrific but still got there. seen grindstone bars done much better. pushing the limit i've seen but the wording was good so i'll give it to ya. i've seen a few tower/fall off lines but this was okay, u could've connected more with it being more than a normal tower but it was alright

v/Sharp easy, his misses were better, less played shit better wording

[RPK]

i let the gun blaze, stay reaching for heat to bang fores!
if shots coming from nine iron, its just tiger competing on the green during PGA tours
you've been destroyed son, im on my job once a line start
you could start biting dull writtens to get ya point off, still wouldnt be on ya grind sharp

vs.

I hold weight with chicks. They always ring this man's cell
But you don't get a single call... 'slike you ain't worth a Graham, Bell
ppl love me rising the ranks, but you get all scoffs, son
think anyone hopes Bell tower? Nah, they just wish you'd fall off one

Pretty good battle. I thought both had some good ideas. I think S9's nonquotes hit a little better than Camps. I have to give it to Sharp.
V/S9

[Lotto Smirk]

i let the gun blaze, stay reaching for heat to bang fores!
if shots coming from nine iron, its just tiger competing on the green during PGA tours
i read the mag then smoked this herb cuz my joints blunt
fuck ya dime&nick pitch, Sn00p must get high to type predictions, if you're his choice bud

vs

I hold weight with chicks. They always ring this man's cell
But you don't get a single call... 'slike you ain't worth a Graham, Bell
ppl love me rising the ranks, but you get all scoffs, son
think anyone hopes Bell tower? Nah, they just wish you'd fall off one
Guy's trash, no problem for me to shake this whore
If anyone feels Camp fire they just got ambitious making s'mores

This was a close battle camp the pga line was coo liked the predictions line, sharpie line could of been worded better to hit stronger but overall nice verse. Sharp ya just came with it the graham bell line was dope, thought the bell tower line was coo overall sharps verse was just harder hitting felt he wanted this more

Vote- Sharp