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Y'all fuckin with a dude without a conscious
If you wanna start shit then we moshin no non sense Spark fifths till ya heart hit it's my target like Capitol one what's in your wallet I'm in incredible mode damaging foes & anybody steppin on toes will make the weapon explode ahhh! Girls think I'm more than fly bars'll leave ya mortified All ya dudes know that I rap like its do or die But who am I to crucify your stupid mind with crucial lines an leave you stupified every time that I spit a rhyme Hard earned raps spitting at you conscious cats to lay you flat My compositions leave you in a calm position so kick it back Xanax Bars will leave you stuck in between the cracks of the void.. ..couch potatoes my raps are fatal more than fables that'll leave you destroyed Back the of tour; bus there's more of us with toys to buss.. .. But we don't like gunplay it's elementary Are you kitten me right meow I'm in the fourth degree Of free masonry it's clear to see there's more to me than whatchu meet
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OP confirmed for nimbly pimbly
nah this was alright, good flow in a bunch of parts (conscious cats line) but your schemes could use more variety. pretty nice, esp. since you said you just started writing. keep keyin
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Hit 'em with the feedback.
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This was actually thoughts I had jot down in my notebook. But thanks fam
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