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Old 01-25-2014, 02:32 PM   #1
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Y'all fuckin with a dude without a conscious
If you wanna start shit then we moshin no non sense
Spark fifths till ya heart hit it's my target
like Capitol one what's in your wallet

I'm in incredible mode damaging foes
& anybody steppin on toes will make the weapon explode ahhh!

Girls think I'm more than fly bars'll leave ya mortified
All ya dudes know that I rap like its do or die
But who am I to crucify your stupid mind with crucial lines
an leave you stupified every time that I spit a rhyme

Hard earned raps spitting at you conscious cats to lay you flat
My compositions leave you in a calm position so kick it back

Xanax Bars will leave you stuck in between the cracks of the void..
..couch potatoes my raps are fatal more than fables that'll leave you destroyed
Back the of tour; bus there's more of us with toys to buss..
.. But we don't like gunplay it's elementary
Are you kitten me right meow I'm in the fourth degree
Of free masonry it's clear to see there's more to me than whatchu meet
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Old 01-25-2014, 02:42 PM   #2
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nah this was alright, good flow in a bunch of parts (conscious cats line) but your schemes could use more variety. pretty nice, esp. since you said you just started writing. keep keyin
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Old 01-25-2014, 02:44 PM   #3
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Old 01-25-2014, 02:46 PM   #4
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Old 01-25-2014, 02:47 PM   #5
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nah this was alright, good flow in a bunch of parts (conscious cats line) but your schemes could use more variety. pretty nice, esp. since you said you just started writing. keep keyin
This was actually thoughts I had jot down in my notebook. But thanks fam
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