AOWL Week 8: Innovator (2-5) VS. Kuja (2-4)-- INNOVATOR WINS BY NS

King Ra. · 04-03-2013, 11:38 PM

16 lines minimum, 48 lines maximum. (if agreed upon by both participants, you may go beyond the limit at your own risk.)

Verses are due SATURDAY 4/6 at 11:59 PST.
Extensions are due SUNDAY 4/7 at 11:59 PST. (There is a 6 hour grace period following the end of the extension deadline. If you fail to post anything by the end of the grace period time, you will be given the no show loss.)

You must vote on at least 4 other battles and post links. For every absent link, you will be deducted ONE vote next week.
Voting ends TUESDAY 3/9 at 11:59 PST. (Unless otherwise it may be extended another day at the most.)

You MUST check in.

If you no-show, you will be removed from next week and have to sign back into the league.

TOPIC: "Choose life...But why would I want to do a thing like that? I chose not to choose life. I chose somethin' else. And the reasons? There are no reasons. Who needs reasons when you've got heroin?" Trainspotting, 1996.

Good luck to both participants. @Innovator @Mac

Inno · 04-04-2013, 12:00 AM

sup mac, you ever eat a girl out and she queefs?

Atheist · 04-06-2013, 03:58 AM

EXT please squire?

Inno · 04-06-2013, 09:39 AM

yep

Inno · 04-07-2013, 11:59 PM

The last train home

so I walk step less…
the fall up and down,
no walls with an impatience
that seeps deep into the tension
I can’t take it I’m anxious
waiting on a hit to induce life
full with envy to finally end this
the dose is pure dope
flowing the worse kind of wretched course blood,
thickening… the stench is almost pulp.
these thoughts speed my pace im indeed
seeking to be freed from it..
Honest I wish hadn’t taken on this
Journey but I’m here now worthy of critics,
no doubt... Time to stand out bathed in bliss.

I suppose

I deserve the pose that reserves me at this moment
…I loathe reverse, its back when I owned it.
when life was mine but I choked it provoked it
and broke each breath that left me stoic..
but I did this, I know it.
I leaped over to seek nothing sober
…im over the limit and the wagon along with me has gone over
with no razor I cut my cords from endeavors…
a calm hymn so grim my song borders
close to the end..
I feel faint falling deeper in the descent
the highest I have ever been
…to late to repent now as I cut myself again…
I remember to grab the pen

As i spin...

"dear sins you kept me company until my end,
and now i cant defend the blood against the dim..
its a grim culmination of upside down grins..
and now im left dangling in the wind fighting deaths whim"

My Mother Walks in..

"What have you done my son
your blood runs...
the cracks of the floor fast like a bullet from a gun...
Im stunned you have come to this slum
position you could not overcome"

"Listen..

I’m done the blood glistens
I’m sorry for the incisions
I’ve made to my body but i was in prison...
With addiction i was smitten
rigor mortis bitten
so I chased the needle
till my plight was written in pigment”

04-03-2013, 11:38 PM	#1
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	AOWL Week 8: Innovator (2-5) VS. Kuja (2-4)-- INNOVATOR WINS BY NS 16 lines minimum, 48 lines maximum. (if agreed upon by both participants, you may go beyond the limit at your own risk.) Verses are due SATURDAY 4/6 at 11:59 PST. Extensions are due SUNDAY 4/7 at 11:59 PST. (There is a 6 hour grace period following the end of the extension deadline. If you fail to post anything by the end of the grace period time, you will be given the no show loss.) You must vote on at least 4 other battles and post links. For every absent link, you will be deducted ONE vote next week. Voting ends TUESDAY 3/9 at 11:59 PST. (Unless otherwise it may be extended another day at the most.) You MUST check in. If you no-show, you will be removed from next week and have to sign back into the league. TOPIC: "Choose life...But why would I want to do a thing like that? I chose not to choose life. I chose somethin' else. And the reasons? There are no reasons. Who needs reasons when you've got heroin?" Trainspotting, 1996. Good luck to both participants. @Innovator @Mac

04-04-2013, 12:00 AM	#2
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	sup mac, you ever eat a girl out and she queefs?

04-06-2013, 03:58 AM	#3
Atheist Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 292 Battle Record: 4-10 Rep Power: 11910	EXT please squire?

04-06-2013, 09:39 AM	#4
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	yep

04-07-2013, 11:59 PM	#5
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	The last train home so I walk step less… the fall up and down, no walls with an impatience that seeps deep into the tension I can’t take it I’m anxious waiting on a hit to induce life full with envy to finally end this the dose is pure dope flowing the worse kind of wretched course blood, thickening… the stench is almost pulp. these thoughts speed my pace im indeed seeking to be freed from it.. Honest I wish hadn’t taken on this Journey but I’m here now worthy of critics, no doubt... Time to stand out bathed in bliss. I suppose I deserve the pose that reserves me at this moment …I loathe reverse, its back when I owned it. when life was mine but I choked it provoked it and broke each breath that left me stoic.. but I did this, I know it. I leaped over to seek nothing sober …im over the limit and the wagon along with me has gone over with no razor I cut my cords from endeavors… a calm hymn so grim my song borders close to the end.. I feel faint falling deeper in the descent the highest I have ever been …to late to repent now as I cut myself again… I remember to grab the pen As i spin... "dear sins you kept me company until my end, and now i cant defend the blood against the dim.. its a grim culmination of upside down grins.. and now im left dangling in the wind fighting deaths whim" My Mother Walks in.. "What have you done my son your blood runs... the cracks of the floor fast like a bullet from a gun... Im stunned you have come to this slum position you could not overcome" "Listen.. I’m done the blood glistens I’m sorry for the incisions I’ve made to my body but i was in prison... With addiction i was smitten rigor mortis bitten so I chased the needle till my plight was written in pigment”