ill nik-A (5-2) vs Jay (0-0)-ILL WINS

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NBL Season 7
Week 14

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@ill nik-A @Jay

[ill nik-A]

Welcome!
10

[Jay]

Thanks!
Coo

[Jay]

uppercuts will flip ill nik a, fam will watch a kin lli to rest
get buried in Knight…. Since he’s already knee deep in archives digging up his concepts
nothing you drops creative, rumor has it u steal plots like natives
if NC goes under, you’ll call up Jolie and offer her cash if she helps you raid it
lately you’ve been reckless, your fame’s deaded in seconds
fuk the fast lane.
You’d struggle getting out the blocks like when you got buried by Tettris
wit bars you’ll never be great, one day you’ll be like Jay
til then, one right will swell nik a lip soo big Beyonce might give em some play
he will never be champ again, cause he a shook hater
but u suck dick. So forget state farm. We know u just like a good Neighbor

[ill nik-A]

It’s the same lines over & over; we need something fresh for unity
right now we’re feeling ‘Jaded’… so killin u is a favor I’m doin for the text community
ur lines need help; I feel like a father telling u to check my wording, son
even if they call u Super, man… I’m the motherfuckin hologram u learning from
for success u’d bite rhymes or do anything to make ur life thrive
Sky’s the limit… so I’d imagine what u’d do to swap places with Mr. White’s wife
u’re not worth any fuss don't confuse my play
notice I'm bein ‘mellow’… cuz even with nik’s worst I’m sure I can shoot a Jay
dude is gay, told u I can teach ya facts, believe the stats
But fuck understanding ur punches... There's no Rosetta Stone for speaking wack

[Paradigm]

Originally Posted by Jay

uppercuts will flip ill nik a, fam will watch a kin lli to rest
get buried in Knight…. Since he’s already knee deep in archives digging up his concepts
You tried to get creative but came off jumbled and had no connection
nothing you drops creative, rumor has it u steal plots like natives
if NC goes under, you’ll call up Jolie and offer her cash if she helps you raid it
nah connection is weak
lately you’ve been reckless, your fame’s deaded in seconds
fuk the fast lane.
You’d struggle getting out the blocks like when you got buried by Tettris
this is coo you need more bars like this
wit bars you’ll never be great, one day you’ll be like Jay
til then, one right will swell nik a lip soo big Beyonce might give em some play
weak but at least he connection is there
he will never be champ again, cause he a shook hater
but u suck dick. So forget state farm. We know u just like a good Neighbor
i see the connection but came across weak

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

It’s the same lines over & over; we need something fresh for unity
right now we’re feeling ‘Jaded’… so killin u is a favor I’m doin for the text community
eh ok ending to feeling jaded couldve been better imo
ur lines need help; I feel like a father telling u to check my wording, son
even if they call u Super, man… I’m the motherfuckin hologram u learning from
Super, man has been done so many times but this is kinda a fresh flip
for success u’d bite rhymes or do anything to make ur life thrive
Sky’s the limit… so I’d imagine what u’d do to swap places with Mr. White’s wife
LOL dope
u’re not worth any fuss don't confuse my play
notice I'm bein ‘mellow’… cuz even with nik’s worst I’m sure I can shoot a Jay
lol nice
dude is gay, told u I can teach ya facts, believe the stats
But fuck understanding ur punches... There's no Rosetta Stone for speaking wack
this is cool but i think youve done this punch before or something similiar

Got Ill Nika taking this with lotb and better wording/concepts Jay had nothing that hit as hard as nikas. lol that ww concept is dope surprised there hasnt been more sky punches tbh

Vote - ill nik-A

RTF Please: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=57076

[KwaL!ty]

Jay had the Tetris line other then that not much to the verse.


Nik had sky's the limit, shoot a jay and Rosetta Stone



Pretty easy battle for Nik

[Bender]

lately you’ve been reckless, your fame’s deaded in seconds
fuk the fast lane.
You’d struggle getting out the blocks like when you got buried by Tettris

vs


ur lines need help; I feel like a father telling u to check my wording, son
even if they call u Super, man… I’m the motherfuckin hologram u learning from
for success u’d bite rhymes or do anything to make ur life thrive
Sky’s the limit… so I’d imagine what u’d do to swap places with Mr. White’s wife

dude is gay, told u I can teach ya facts, believe the stats
But fuck understanding ur punches... There's no Rosetta Stone for speaking wack

Nik came way harder in this, better concepts and punches. You can tell Nik didn't give his all but he didn't really need to. It is kind of a shame to be putting better battlers against guys who are obviously new to this but I gues it is a neccassary evil when there is so little battlers in the league.

Vote-Nika

[Lars]

I'm with Kwality here, liked the Tettris line a lot from Jay but not a whole lot more than that. He needed more of that standard, the consistency cost him, that line was illy though. Jay's got some potential. Nik took this pretty comfortably I thought, just a better overall verse with better concepts. Why is nik putting '' either side his wordplay now though? lol. It's weird and not needed for us to get it.

Burried by tettris

Vs

Shoot the jay & Rossetta stone was dope, lol.

V/Nik-A

[Greed]

Last 3

Vs

Last 3

V nik

I thought it was close ill give it to nik cause jaded wasn't bad so on consistancy he got it. Superman was straight

[Drift]

Jay your only solid connect was the tettris line. First line wasnt that bad either in terms of connection. Overall the verse read kinda choppy. Work on polishing everyything and you'll be better. Nik, shoot a jay and sky was dope. Was done nicely and rest was solid as well. Mvgt nik

[Tic]

Tetris

Vs

Shoot a jay, sky

Nik had the overall better verse. Jay had the Tetris line which was nice, but otherwise I wasn't feeling much. Word your lines like that and you will improve quickly. Vote Nik

[Tettris]

nothing

vs

u’re not worth any fuss don't confuse my play
notice I'm bein ‘mellow’… cuz even with nik’s worst I’m sure I can shoot a Jay
dude is gay, told u I can teach ya facts, believe the stats
But fuck understanding ur punches... There's no Rosetta Stone for speaking wack

pretty easy battle to pick here...Nik was just a bit more creative and coherent...good shit...

v/Nik

[RudeBoy]

Nothing

Vs

Mellow, closer

Jay didnt really have anything some attempts but no real punch, nik got this easily mellow n closer were coo

V/nika