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stokely carmichael of rap
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Construct a scripture n move like Bobby Fisher but simplistic
i picture images with photographic memory like i was autistic been in many dark places, i pray my soul don't go there again oppressed by unseen forces like christianity forced on native americans not a drug czar, but i be "pushin weight" like cartels pinky ring curling bar bells with the swagger of Rick Martel Vis be on his grizzly, glide swiftly, like chuckin a Frisbee walk though crowds givin shoulder checks like "Who Fuckin wit me" tunnel vision when i see foes, if its beef im at ya peep hole i get technically Foul...then throw hands up like a free-throw causin much damage i'm KMD, got raw words ready to slay emcees appetite for destruction bigger than Lavell Crawford in a KFC shoot blades straight. fake mobsters get blazed with the chopper my Arms'll throw a kid in the air like i was playing with a toddler whether God Body, or not, i'm still righteous in beast mode ya highness when i rhyme this, livin by the G-code with no cheat code..
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some pretty cool swag bars but you kinda butcher it using 'like' for every one of them tbh
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Thought there were some pretty fresh concepts here, nothing standoutish but a quick 16 jottin down some lines before they were forgotten. Drug czar line was respectable, got me with the playin with a toddler imagery, overall looks like a quick write you had fun with.
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Pretty cool keystyle, a little shy from you but it might be due to rust. You can't leave this hobby of yours behind for this long... there's bound to be dust on the spine of the book. What's God Body? I never really read about it before but Killah Priest references it constantly.
tunnel vision when i see foes, if its beef im at ya peep hole i get technically Foul...then throw hands up like a free-throw ^That was neat, y0. Keep doing you |
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stokely carmichael of rap
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this piece was different from my regular style, i know it wouldn't be what was expected from me, but i wanted to branch out on this one. I guess the simpler style doesn't fly on OM. thanks for peeping tho bro
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Read, enjoyed
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