Plastic Parts

ill nik-A · 04-26-2013, 05:20 PM

Timing defines the grind I’m finding amongst the days
refining the climb that minds apply & carry beyond our ways
the strong will aid with pay & stay atop the business end
different men make decisions when mistakes become wisdom’s friend
my position stands to better myself in endeavors that help
putting me in a spot that plots with a shot to forever excel
I won’t surrender & fail with stale trails of failure behind me
walk the talk & place no fault while enjoying tailored reclined seats
paper reminds he who seeks shall find the answers to hard work
with a part worth more than whores, remorse & a heart hurt…
…by words, lies, cries designed to confuse amused takers
doing a huge favor to introduce later & force u to choose traitors
I won’t lose haters! I got a good sense for mistrust’s big lusts
I smell hell in detail & prevail when I stop the insult’s impulse
Putting a finish to these snakes influx to deter the image I made
Limit the vivid imagination to mimic infatuation while critics get laid
victims ashamed as the cat’s vision’s to blame… it’s the truth that hurts
only vampires approve those flirts so I don’t dispute their work
I abuse their worth when I value mine checkmating their mind games
Knowing pleasure isn’t a treasure chest blessed only to find pain
Enjoy your timeframe while age is engaged on the road took
Cold crooks sold looks then we turn the faded page on an old book

Mr. J · 04-29-2013, 01:52 PM

Sounds poetic more than anything, quite a dope piece though
I think your multi's help you shine, but it feels a bit outlandish after awhile
maybe it's just be and short syllable multi's weird me out in long lined verses
regardless the topic was dope, not quite what I expected from the title
nice drop regardless breh

Geno · 04-29-2013, 08:56 PM

this is a grown mans verse here

Flow was liquid, could be ripped to any beat for real
Content was very wise, like on some nas type shit with a longer winded flow to it
Had a rack of standouts bars and phrases in it that make a nigga stop and think like -ya, he's got a fucking point right there

Ggood to see you gracing the om nika, I hope you get busy in the write nights when they kick off this week, should be dope

ill nik-A · 05-08-2013, 07:10 PM

Anything else?

Split · 05-08-2013, 07:13 PM

Feed someone

EDIT: closed until any other piece is fed.

C Raw · 05-08-2013, 07:38 PM

flow and rhymes were niceeeee, smooth as hell.
loved the content as well. keep posting in here dude, shit was dope imo.

04-26-2013, 05:20 PM	#1
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,407 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164516	Plastic Parts Timing defines the grind I’m finding amongst the days refining the climb that minds apply & carry beyond our ways the strong will aid with pay & stay atop the business end different men make decisions when mistakes become wisdom’s friend my position stands to better myself in endeavors that help putting me in a spot that plots with a shot to forever excel I won’t surrender & fail with stale trails of failure behind me walk the talk & place no fault while enjoying tailored reclined seats paper reminds he who seeks shall find the answers to hard work with a part worth more than whores, remorse & a heart hurt… …by words, lies, cries designed to confuse amused takers doing a huge favor to introduce later & force u to choose traitors I won’t lose haters! I got a good sense for mistrust’s big lusts I smell hell in detail & prevail when I stop the insult’s impulse Putting a finish to these snakes influx to deter the image I made Limit the vivid imagination to mimic infatuation while critics get laid victims ashamed as the cat’s vision’s to blame… it’s the truth that hurts only vampires approve those flirts so I don’t dispute their work I abuse their worth when I value mine checkmating their mind games Knowing pleasure isn’t a treasure chest blessed only to find pain Enjoy your timeframe while age is engaged on the road took Cold crooks sold looks then we turn the faded page on an old book __________________ Grumpy old man.

04-29-2013, 08:56 PM	#3
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	this is a grown mans verse here Flow was liquid, could be ripped to any beat for real Content was very wise, like on some nas type shit with a longer winded flow to it Had a rack of standouts bars and phrases in it that make a nigga stop and think like -ya, he's got a fucking point right there Ggood to see you gracing the om nika, I hope you get busy in the write nights when they kick off this week, should be dope __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

05-08-2013, 07:10 PM	#4
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,407 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164516	Anything else? __________________ Grumpy old man.

05-08-2013, 07:13 PM	#5
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,904 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899395	Feed someone EDIT: closed until any other piece is fed. __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com Last edited by Split; 05-09-2013 at 08:59 PM.

05-08-2013, 07:38 PM	#6
C Raw Facts Only Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 119 Rep Power: 0	flow and rhymes were niceeeee, smooth as hell. loved the content as well. keep posting in here dude, shit was dope imo. __________________ RareBoyz

04-29-2013, 01:52 PM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,025 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	Sounds poetic more than anything, quite a dope piece though I think your multi's help you shine, but it feels a bit outlandish after awhile maybe it's just be and short syllable multi's weird me out in long lined verses regardless the topic was dope, not quite what I expected from the title nice drop regardless breh