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Old 05-01-2013, 10:35 PM   #1
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The G.O.A.T. You've all Been Longing For.

Greetings to you, I've been reading shit completely amused
Knowing you want gen to speak his peace like a treaty was due
Ill wipe my feet on these crews, you'll never see how it feels
Praying genocide will drop and land on you to be on his heels
I only speak on the real, compete on the field while you sleep on the bench
The greatest of all time, while you fail to produce signs of equal or less
You majority of people are pests, feeble at best, can't even capture the throne
But we can wreck, just tell your health provider that your accident prone
Axe in your bones, my hatchets are thrown with careful precision
Bystanders'll be singing oh my god, like somekind of carol for xmas
swear you'll be finished, cause gen ain't playing games with you queers
You'll see me preying so hard, hark the herald fucking angel appears
Leaving blood stains on careers, the devils triangles' got me falling from god
My flow is motorboat, you'll catch four strokes like your arteries clogged
There ain't a part of me soft, I'm built hard and to high to be scaled
So if something falls off, its just the fucking climbers who failed
Only diamonds prevail, rest of you stoners are the wackest of guys
You reach my peak, ill throw you head first down like them jackets can fly
I've always capitalized on my strengths in a speech, iincredibly deep

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Old 05-01-2013, 11:14 PM   #2
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Pretty dope.. Haven't read anything from u in awhil man..seems like I hit a funk like me but this wasnt bad man I had some quotables in there...more swag like my piece u fed than anything...punches weren't bad just not concrete like I know ya can do...good shit tho man looking forward to reading more
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Old 05-02-2013, 12:20 PM   #3
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I think I fed this but I can't remember. Well compared to your other posts as of late and think this is not as good as those but this is still good. The others were just raw and this was just a flex to me. The strong point of this piece was your scheme and your multis.
The greatest of all time, while you fail to produce signs of equal or less
You majority of people are pests, feeble at best, can't even capture the throne
But we can wreck, just tell your health provider that your accident prone
^^Nice.
All in all this was a dope drop Geno as a flex but I want that raw emotional shit that you bring lol. Keep droppin man.
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Old 05-06-2013, 11:36 AM   #4
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damn... is there more!?!?

Cuz it was pretty dope. Love the flow and the multies. Some killer killer lines here that made me LOL, you a beast on that swag tip, Genocide. Like this right here
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