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Old 05-03-2013, 04:12 PM   #1
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Buddha..
Fuck a president, I'm heaven sent, It's evident that I'm Czar of the people,
Once lethargic and peaceful now I'm bizarre and evil,
Armed and lethal to start upheavels that rock the foundations
That rip apart the steeples that sit atop the nations,
I begged God for patience but he blocked relations
So I'm positive I'm Satan amidst the masses
Pissed and savage, A born leader with horned features
That can go tick for tack with you bitch ass faggots,
I'm equipped with ***hes of hollow tips, an addict
On a trip of madness to corrupt the youth,
Screaming fuck the rules, you punk ass fools
Don't get a bloodbath, Shit I'm fillin up some pools

Geno..
Buckets and cups of ooze on the surface of floors, perfectly poured
Merciless force, im swingin blades like a trapeze, circus of swords
The servants of war ain't surrendering shit, we're better equipped
To rip your eyes out, and restore your contacts like a memory chip
I'm on a ketameanz binge, seringe, with methanphetamine hits
A trip, that changes my perception of the world into a seventies twist
Isometrically gripped, the pounds per square inch in my hands amaze
My fingerprints were chemically stripped so the fuckers can't be traced
Erased, its like I never existed in this world in the first place, a legend
Or maybe I'm stuck on an acid trip, wasted, nd can't escape the venom
Suffering from this case of vengeance, sentenced, and ill never be free
That's why I'm splitting heads with lead, on a john f kennedy spree
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Old 05-05-2013, 05:31 AM   #2
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Holy shit. This shit was dope. Dope ass scheming. Content heavy and has some damn style.
i ain't even gon say how you could improve...i wouldn't know what to say lol.

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Fuck a president, I'm heaven sent, It's evident that I'm Czar of the people, Once lethargic and peaceful now I'm bizarre and evil, Armed and lethal to start upheavels that rock the foundations

^^ wrd. You got skills.

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Buckets and cups of ooze on the surface of floors, perfectly poured Merciless force, im swingin blades like a trapeze, circus of sword
Unno how you even came up with that shit man.

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Old 05-06-2013, 11:40 AM   #3
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Wow the GENO closer was great, that is better than most lines in these so called battles i be checking out, holy shit. Great flow from both, really liked Zen's structure, really stayed on point with the topic and brought it in at the end in a way only Zen can do, had that signature style that worked really well with Genocide's verse.

Love how both began with an image that then extends into what you're all about.

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Old 05-09-2013, 02:51 PM   #4
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Old 05-09-2013, 06:46 PM   #5
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Old 05-09-2013, 08:04 PM   #6
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GENO, your first 6 lines were epic. that shit was so nice to read. mad respect for that, this needs to be recorded. same with Budda, solid verse, good flows real nice good rhymes, multi's .... this would make a sick song. thats all I keep thinking. keep this shit up for real. respect to both MC's.

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Old 05-12-2013, 09:50 PM   #7
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Oooh this was a mean collab

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So I'm positive I'm Satan amidst the masses
Pissed and savage, A born leader with horned features
That can go tick for tack with you bitch ass faggots,
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Merciless force, im swingin blades like a trapeze, circus of swords
The servants of war ain't surrendering shit, we're better equipped
To rip your eyes out, and restore your contacts like a memory chip
Dope shit from the both of you. Zen, I especially appreciated your structure. Geno, you had some tight imagery running throughout.
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Old 05-13-2013, 10:36 PM   #8
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This was a nice collab fella's I ain't even going to lie
I've seen some collab's and this is just raw to a rawer form
it might be that hellfire that Geno came with at the end
Buddha came raw with it as well, I felt y'all dropped the appropriate length for the piece
gave it a sick vibe...nice drop fella's
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Superb collab here. Flow was sick on both verses forreal. Multies throughout. An absolute pleasure to read. Props you two for a sick joint.
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you too work verk good together, with buddah having a nack for multi after multi and geno always bringing raw uncut gritty emotion this immediately became one of my favorite recent reads.

Fuck a president, I'm heaven sent, It's evident that I'm Czar of the people,
Once lethargic and peaceful now I'm bizarre and evil,
Armed and lethal to start upheavels that rock the foundations
That rip apart the steeples that sit atop the nations,
I begged God for patience but he blocked relations

this was very very nice bro, the lethargic and peaceful now bizarre and evil rhyme made me smile, don't see those words too much lol. also really enjoyed the following few lines.

To rip your eyes out, and restore your contacts like a memory chip
I'm on a ketameanz binge, seringe, with methanphetamine hits
A trip, that changes my perception of the world into a seventies twist
Isometrically gripped, the pounds per square inch in my hands amaze

that was fucking dirty, sometime when i read your shit i wonder where your minds at haha. but seriously though you just always come straight at the face as hard as you can. dope shit man.

thanks for the read guys
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Old 07-03-2013, 08:05 PM   #11
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Buddha - I thought this was alright, tbh. No real standouts, just a well rounded verse. Would've liked to see more creative concepts thrown around or maybe wordplay.

Genocide - Whole verse was a quotable. Pleasing visuals, accurate rhyme schemes and you formed it all with patience.

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^Niceness.

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Old 05-16-2014, 02:37 PM   #12
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Old 05-16-2014, 05:30 PM   #13
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Damn, this is a year old now? Strange reading something I wrote that long ago...Weird.

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