2007

e11even · 04-02-2014, 06:25 AM

...found this in a jumbled clutter of emails...

Happiness is an apparition- Light is lost ta darkness
Stark hardness in the concrete- the notion of positive growth is nonsense
Eggs and grits on plates, ties made, n' happy faces
Sad souls n' bad phrases make clad that bad fragrance
Stinch reminiscent of that wench in the alleyways
Pinched out of ur dream's extensions the memoirs of happy days
Taxed by life til ur lax decays- wax in braids ain't as slick as these cats today
U git robbed by ur companions, life leaves ur ass enslaved
Leeches beseech u til they assume ur stacks n' estates
I'm saxin' premonitions heard in word n' rhythm
Verbs incurred I'm dribblin'- dispersin' thoughts that hurt the worst of villains
Truth suspended in a harness of harshness is what our time necessitates
The world is dark in this age, and as we let it be, we vegetate

...

I stand in field of ur vision- a facade, an enactment
A tactful accident never realized by the hapless
I'm a walking mistake never assumed so- but so bruised and broke
Misused and choked- life in my veins resumes in strokes
Or maybe the appropriate appropriation wud be I'm a chameleon
Pics are worth thousands but my thought is worth millions
So I've never indulged but in stints to be me
Words in lyrical curves are absurd but not worthless to me
They are my extension- my only lifeline if u will
So I'm prone ta own stills of how I honed and owned skills
Of impersonatin' the lost and bewildered- knowing all along the inevitable
That I wud ultimately be incredible, but forgetable
That fitted hides scars and truths of a man thats uncouth
An old youth that can't reach his own line from the phone booth
Only shreds of thread still belong of wat has long since been gone
The only remnants are malignant and are apparent in song
I am ur reflection- I bounce light off darkess to see u better
I mock ur existance thru mimicry- ur soul is my sweater

Geno · 04-03-2014, 05:40 PM

up

e11even · 04-03-2014, 06:09 PM

thanks?

Exis · 04-08-2014, 02:42 AM

I am ur reflection- I bounce light off darkess to see u better

^^Dope.

One thing I love about your pieces is that filler is pretty much non existent, each bar is drippin' with meaningful content which really makes readin' your shit a pleasurable experience.I liked the second part more so than the first but they are both nice with it, just felt the second had more stuff I dug or sumthin'...as a whole it's a tight verse though man.

Sorry for not hittin' this up earlier, stay dope nigga.

e11even · 04-08-2014, 03:18 PM

Werd. Thx bro!

04-02-2014, 06:25 AM	#1
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247256	2007 ...found this in a jumbled clutter of emails... Happiness is an apparition- Light is lost ta darkness Stark hardness in the concrete- the notion of positive growth is nonsense Eggs and grits on plates, ties made, n' happy faces Sad souls n' bad phrases make clad that bad fragrance Stinch reminiscent of that wench in the alleyways Pinched out of ur dream's extensions the memoirs of happy days Taxed by life til ur lax decays- wax in braids ain't as slick as these cats today U git robbed by ur companions, life leaves ur ass enslaved Leeches beseech u til they assume ur stacks n' estates I'm saxin' premonitions heard in word n' rhythm Verbs incurred I'm dribblin'- dispersin' thoughts that hurt the worst of villains Truth suspended in a harness of harshness is what our time necessitates The world is dark in this age, and as we let it be, we vegetate ... I stand in field of ur vision- a facade, an enactment A tactful accident never realized by the hapless I'm a walking mistake never assumed so- but so bruised and broke Misused and choked- life in my veins resumes in strokes Or maybe the appropriate appropriation wud be I'm a chameleon Pics are worth thousands but my thought is worth millions So I've never indulged but in stints to be me Words in lyrical curves are absurd but not worthless to me They are my extension- my only lifeline if u will So I'm prone ta own stills of how I honed and owned skills Of impersonatin' the lost and bewildered- knowing all along the inevitable That I wud ultimately be incredible, but forgetable That fitted hides scars and truths of a man thats uncouth An old youth that can't reach his own line from the phone booth Only shreds of thread still belong of wat has long since been gone The only remnants are malignant and are apparent in song I am ur reflection- I bounce light off darkess to see u better I mock ur existance thru mimicry- ur soul is my sweater __________________ Ahem.

04-03-2014, 05:40 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	up __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

04-03-2014, 06:09 PM	#3
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247256	thanks? __________________ Ahem.

04-08-2014, 03:18 PM	#5
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247256	Werd. Thx bro! __________________ Ahem.

04-08-2014, 02:42 AM	#4
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	I am ur reflection- I bounce light off darkess to see u better ^^Dope. One thing I love about your pieces is that filler is pretty much non existent, each bar is drippin' with meaningful content which really makes readin' your shit a pleasurable experience.I liked the second part more so than the first but they are both nice with it, just felt the second had more stuff I dug or sumthin'...as a whole it's a tight verse though man. Sorry for not hittin' this up earlier, stay dope nigga.