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Old 05-16-2013, 12:36 AM   #1
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Check the flow - sick. You know this, who wrote this
Im focused but wont quit, never sugar coat shit
This is... reality rap, see how he will act
With the wall at his back slappin cowardly jacks
And how its a fact that you thought ill sink and id quit
The truth's, i dont give a fuck what you think of my shit
Everything'll get flipped, step in the ring and get kicked
And when i do spit, you best be equipped to get ripped
Im spittin this quick, this aint quite right for your health.
Facing me is like survival for life in itself
You motherfuckers wanna hate me, you dont like that im felt?
But you fools will never make me put my mic on the shelf
Im dangerous, under pressure. Veins'll bust
My brain is fucked, listen up the pain's too much
Im droppin it hot, ya whole fuckin block'll get shot
Such a murderous flow, youd think that the faucet was locked..
You cautious to drop, nervous that youll stop and youll flop
I mean you even sayin how much you got nauseas and got
Scared he's got sweaty palms, no this aint them petty songs
Yes i think youre done like dinner and ive got spaghetti on,
Now you pukin it up, lightweight, stupid as fuck
I could lose myself and prove that you suck..
So please stand aside and lets make some room for my nuts
Because i only never battled cause you losers would duck..



Fuck with this...
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Old 05-16-2013, 12:41 AM   #2
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cool shit, first thought on the title was this



so in my head I double-timed it over the main riff, came out pretty awesome. Nothing I can really comment on since I dont really know this sort of stuff other than it came out pretty cool (was looking to see if you flipped whole bars like you said so I picked up on some dope inner shit) and I caught that 8 mile stuff lol.
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