Rapping like Everyone else to make them all Proud

[CopyPat]

I’m Mark Wahlberg in Rock Star, tanked. Got the pop chart ranks, drinking Carlsberg, eating Salisbury steak. I’m not sober in a cop car, thanks to getting caught stealing some lawn darts from when I knocked over a Wal-Mart prank. I’m a lawn dart beast, with a long hard D. Eatin ballpark franks with the all-star team. I'm a ballpark fiend with a tall dark penis, chillin with the Wal-Mart greeters and we all spark cheeba. Got the All-Spark gene from transformers in my jeans. Cause my balls start gleaming, mad boners when I see, a tall scrawny B actin horny in the streets. Then it’s cock on the v and its groaning in the sheets , target locked when I beam, the vag contortionist machine. And I make the stars scream when I bumble they bee’s, got the viber-wand from Cybertron - I shove in them deep. Activated stubby fingaz keep em at the optimal peak for my Optimus P, and calculated cunnilingus, it’s a logical thing. The international criminal, who’s into natural woman though. Catastrophe’s imminent when I blast in they little holes. Just flash me the symbol like batman, and I'll rap to the riddle as fast I can. The rat race runner with mad cash, tax payin government fat stacks. I got a bat-cave under my land mass, with champaign, and butler's to pass that. A class act. I can't wait to campaign publicly bash cats who half fake like Pancake Brotherly's black half. Flash back! Flash back! I'm a half-baked motherfuckin drug addict who's dumb, in a mad haze at a gas station, bout to throw a match at it for fun. The young Black Sabbath with guns, you punk assess get a pump action blast in the lung. I'm shooting you up, like forming habits for junk. The former champion's up, it's truly enough, cause I had to kick the habit so I booted a nun. Did I confuse anyone? Just google it, computer click the answers, I’m done.

[Neighbor]

Insane lol

You started off strong w/ the schemes at the beginning, probably better than anyone here.. & then just absolutely blitzed the fuck outta the rest of this shit

Seriously, the middle section from "Cybertron" up until the end was fucking crazy.. I'm a little speechless at how well you put this together as a random collection of schemes/thoughts while still keeping them relevant to one another

Great work, & I got you on a cypher when I actually get some time

[big baby]

Very good, read a bit like dull boy with the off witted apathetic tone in the beginning but still playful. But that's not a comparison. This was nice in its own right. I remember you sending me something but I don't think this was it? Unless you switched it up entirely. Very good, read smooth. Sometimes I think you get a little winded towards some of your schemes and try to wind some short ended schemes and end up using smaller words to compensate for the syllable outburst - which may hurt you in wording just a tad, and content a bit more, but it was all pretty top notch. Dope

[Dove Dozer]

Dope all the way through. Schemes were nuts

[Certain]

You are obsessed with your penis.

This section was my favorite for all the repetition:

I’m not sober in a cop car, thanks to getting caught stealing some lawn darts from when I knocked over a Wal-Mart prank. I’m a lawn dart beast, with a long hard D. Eatin ballpark franks with the all-star team. I'm a ballpark fiend with a tall dark penis, chillin with the Wal-Mart greeters and we all spark cheeba. Got the All-Spark gene from transformers in my jeans.

[CopyPat]

Thanks bros!!

@big baby, thx for the feed, i'll keep that in mind, and yeah its totally different than what i was showing you. but alot of these schemes ideas came from our cypher that night with @Fig, probly why it looks familiar. we both made open mics with ours but fig didn't.. he should.



@Certain lmao, u are right... i gotta stop writing about my gigantic member. way too many cock references... wtf eh, gross. sorry.

@Bags i tried to write this like urs that you tried to write like @Witty that tried to write like @dull boy

[Eŋg]

The young Black Sabbath with guns, you punk assess get a pump action blast in the lung.

^ that was raw. reminded me of someone i know/fuck with a lot.

[Wise Wiggles]

This was ridiculous broham. Everything about it was smooth and savage. The Transformers scheme was impressive to say the least! Seems like a lot of thought went into making all seem flush. It was well presented and in an orderly fashion. The Bruce Manner one was sick also. And the one Eng quoted was liquidity goodness. I've been reading all your shit bro I'm just usually busy or too high to form a complete thought in text form. Definitely raw as ever. Stay up playa.

[oats]

You=dope

[Bodey]

this was nuts. i really dont know how you did it, it's like you just kept writing and it got better and better. i'll come back with more feed later

[dead man]

The rat race runner with mad cash, tax payin government fat stacks. I got a bat-cave under my land mass, with champaign, and butler's to pass that. A class act. I can't wait to campaign publicly bash cats who half fake like Pancake Brotherly's black half.

HA

its true though. you find a frequency as you write and once you enter your zone it gets better and better. by the time you were carving out the ending this was an avalanche of flames. very fun to read. "logical thing" scheme was nuts as well. if anyone is going to inspire me to one day write a paragraphical verse like this its you. but i wouldn't hold my breath lol.

thanks man

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[Vulgar]

Hot.

[Nigma]

First couple lines I was NERVOUS for you but then you murked dat shizzzz. Loved the section Certain quoted and the whole transformers play was also very entertaining. Kick the habit line was solid lulworthy, good shit copy quality drop

[Illume]

Ridonkulous ... Brilliant raps always seem effortless.