Building and Destroying.

[Aesthetic]

Lay havoc with perpetual beauty.
Give birth like soldiers reporting for duty.
Reclusive I am with a tongue for the seventh seal.
resemblance of a vampire death is my meal.
Im the rat in the alley, starving for a fight.
Im the food behind a cat, attacking a mouse.
Without me; a frame without a house.
Gasoline I drink and fires I douse.
Covered in flame like a monk and a protest.
I protest, for this incest is nothing more then insects pushing evil intents and defects as royalty...
Life and death, Isn't that complex.
Aztecs written in stone, sacred codex.
Perplexed for they ancient philosophy Binds the cortex.
Astrology neglects physical concepts.
Advanced yet they're Reprisal has no index.
Were on the boundary of what I speak of,
Life and death.
Adam and Eve the beginning and last breathes.
I see life, a jungle taking steps.
A pyramid, 1 stone at a time.
BUT HOW THE FUCK CAN MILES AND LOGS RHYME?
Held by a bind which finds me in the presence of deaths kind.
Life is benevolent but shes also a bitch.
Scratched my iris and raised life to a lich.
Im a weed, continue the cycle.
Neanderthols, the evolutions rival.
Humans killin monkey's the beginning of the spiral.
Make it viral,
Life aint trees and green grass.
It's suicidal.

Wish I could have polished just a bit more but im satisfied nonetheless.

[IamBenT]

hmm..

didn't get the first image. How are soldiers prepping giving birth? explain

never rhymed anything with "fight"

I like the double use for "protest", that was cool.

interesting ending, im sure you mean to tie this up with your edit.

Just some thoughts.

[Aesthetic]

Originally Posted by IamBenT

hmm..

didn't get the first image. How are soldiers prepping giving birth? explain

never rhymed anything with "fight"

I like the double use for "protest", that was cool.

interesting ending, im sure you mean to tie this up with your edit.

Just some thoughts.

Soldiers line up to die, so that life can begin and continue.

Im just gonna throw this out their since you missed the soldier part; soon I will making a rhyme that I will ask to be broken down to see if the artists at Netcees understand the literal transitions I go for. I am a very deep, intricate and even abstract at time and some of my best pieces have been overlooked because of it. Lol im not tooting my horn im just saying sometimes my shit aint respected to the degree I think it deserves, im sure everyone feels that way though.

For a petty instance.

Im the rat in the alley, starving for a fight.
(Abstract)
Im the food behind a cat, attacking a mouse.
(The rat becomes the mouse. (Abstract with the change.))

I almost hate bringing it up lol
Thanks for the questions and tips though my dude I hope you enjoy the finished copy. I got mad shit to do today so It's gonna be a while.

[Zen]

I think we all get it to be honest. You calling us stupid!? lol But really this was decent in terms of schemes but if you wanna make something truly abstract, then go balls deep and make the shit really abstract you know what I mean? Like check one of Split's drops thats a perfect example because usually noone knows what the fuck he's talking about but it leaves a lasting impression on you. This on the other hand is laid out perfectly to say exactly what you wanna while not being abstract you're just giving allusions. Theres a difference. I hope you're not offended by this I'm just trying to give some constructive critism man but keep droppin. And go drop feed on other posts before upping your verse again.

[Aesthetic]

Originally Posted by Zenland

I think we all get it to be honest. You calling us stupid!? lol But really this was decent in terms of schemes but if you wanna make something truly abstract, then go balls deep and make the shit really abstract you know what I mean? Like check one of Split's drops thats a perfect example because usually noone knows what the fuck he's talking about but it leaves a lasting impression on you. This on the other hand is laid out perfectly to say exactly what you wanna while not being abstract you're just giving allusions. Theres a difference. I hope you're not offended by this I'm just trying to give some constructive critism man but keep droppin. And go drop feed on other posts before upping your verse again.

you fucking fagot; we got beef.

Thanks boss preciate the help, now I know! Im not that insecure about my work lol that's why im here; I jsut love trolling on some bags type niggas.

[Aesthetic]

Bump wit the ediiit

[UnoQuattroThres]

I see the abstractness, the images are twisted and jaded, that's a good thing. The overall direction was good but like Zen said, you had a good start to go deeper into it. This was a great drop that had the elements of being ill...

[Mr. J]

This was pretty nice, I was feeling the ending more than the beginning
not quite sure where you edited it at but I knew of some spots I enjoyed well

Astrology neglects physical concepts.
Advanced yet they're Reprisal has no index.
Were on the boundary of what I speak of,
Life and death.
Adam and Eve the beginning and last breathes.
I see life, a jungle taking steps

^^^^
this was nice
so was the pyramid thing
other than that I felt this was done nicely
felt like you were just edging it out here and there
so I can't give it it's proper due..due to editing
but I enjoyed this keep it up

[Dope girl]

you had some nice lines..... ending went pretty well.