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Old 05-21-2013, 09:13 PM   #1
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Redoing the audio with a cleaner version...but here is the audio to this

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Bootleg a hundred men with melanin deficiency
Antagonistic prodigy sprouting from infancy
Depleting inner sanctum malice strained like plankton
Female game stop watch the mane pop, what you thankin'
Gratuity clanking with metal currency, hurrily
Blurring the evil acts with urgency
Burdening shoulders and image with the walk of shame
Weighing like boulders with absentmindedness of names
Didn't claim the calm of loving you, I'm vague
To the point where pointlessness becomes a plague
Evade closeness to stick with plans of account leeching
With amount reaching proportions that leave mouth seething
So breathing less when the transfer done is job one
My objection of affectionately robbing one....


Remains of the former someone used up
Skin confused between contusion and being bruised up
Same differences yet instance foretell violence
All I wanted is the cash ass and silence
Non compliance led to divvying the garbage bags
An homage to the Manson actions at large has
Looking at the eyeball with a gash and blank stare
Cantankerous laugh shows brashness and a stank care
Dry docks finding hiding spots to push downstream
Or to populated lots where these ears don't hear loud screams
Now I redeem at the ATM what bloody hands fiend
And warm water provides washing away convicting scene
Smiles gleam with this dream partially funded
Giving a high that light green would be blunted
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Old 05-22-2013, 12:10 AM   #2
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Or to populated lots where these ears don't hear loud screams
Now I redeem at the ATM what bloody hands fiend
And warm water provides washing away convicting scene


^^^^^^^
thought that little section was fire
actually I enjoyed the whole thing
the flow was on point and the vibe matched your style
nice work all around I think, I haven't read much from you
but you have garnered my interest...keep up the pennage
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