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06-15-2013, 10:06 PM
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White Earl
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It Simply Went Where it Went.
When gen write its like grenades strapped to my chest
Its self destruction on the pages, kamikaze the text Trying to blow up, j cole bout to join illuminati he says Fuck the bull shit, if I had the opportunity id prolly accept Success is my hobby, my vent, the way I let loose with a pen Perfection means i never have to make up excuses again I'm just not used to it yet, I used to invent the wildest words Obsurd, But my eyes weren't open like a child's at birth My style has certainly come a long way since them days Watched the dopest writers fall off when trends changed Used to know love until its brains were blown over the road Survived my heart being ripped out nd stil roll with the blows Made many mistakes that I openly chosed, even overly dosed How I'm here to tell the fucking story now, nobody knows A lot of good fuckin people must of showed me the ropes And taught me how to walk away, but couldn't go with me tho This road is my own, and I don't see an end to it yet If you believe in such a thing, then your destinies death I prolly got a few centuries left, and more lessons to learn And I ain't ever take what wasn't given, unless it was earned This wasn't a conceptual verse, it simply went where it went Sometimes I go to write something and it never gets read My leverage is depth, my flex is just a measure of weight I bring the controversial truth to you, whatever it takes
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06-15-2013, 10:14 PM
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bravo.
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06-15-2013, 11:41 PM
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......indeed.....
bravo
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06-16-2013, 03:47 AM
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pretty dope...i enjoyed the first half and the end more then the middle tbh...
the flow was fluid as fuck tho...some lines stood out ie:'taught me how to walk away, but couldnt go with me tho' but ntohing was like OMG...but i dont think that was the intention of this...i mean u said that urself and the title says it as well...just a conceptual verse...so for what it is, this was a smooth, effortless enjoyable read to me... well done. |
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06-16-2013, 04:09 AM
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dope man. this came off as real genuine and honest, no contrivances whatsoever. I loved the "prolly accept" line and the whole "over the road" scheme. nice shit
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06-17-2013, 01:35 PM
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Mic Check
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nice geno. really really polished style here. can see u dropping verses like this on some real audio tracks, would like to hear that actually. content was on some realness.. something i think ur known for, flow and vocab was there.. although not crazy over the top scheming wize it was still above average, made it read extremely smooth and easy. well done sir. this is a very solid open mic verse, shit like this probly gets overlooked/underrated because you made it look easy. props. keep em commin. record some real shit!
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06-18-2013, 01:26 PM
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this was live, im pretty much in agreement with rawn on tha note that nothing was standout ill, but it was consistent with no miss-steps...actually
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butchyea apart from that you put it best with tha name of this shit, was a cool read. #1 |
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06-18-2013, 11:18 PM
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Razor-thin derision
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Hot.
A lot of good fuckin people must of showed me the ropes And taught me how to walk away, but couldn't go with me tho This road is my own, and I don't see an end to it yet If you believe in such a thing, then your destinies death I prolly got a few centuries left, and more lessons to learn And I ain't ever take what wasn't given, unless it was earned This wasn't a conceptual verse, it simply went where it went Sometimes I go to write something and it never gets read My leverage is depth, my flex is just a measure of weight I bring the controversial truth to you, whatever it takes ^Some dirty scriptures. Keep doing you |
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05-16-2014, 02:37 PM
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White Earl
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yoooooooo, god emcee bitches
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05-16-2014, 06:11 PM
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you fuckin suck @ rap. i dont even need to read ur shit to tell its going to be a cess pool of emptyness and cry baby bull shit. thanks for upping all these, in case somebody comes across OM and is unsure bout killing themselves, this will sway them towards suicide. better hope bags dosent read it or you could be an accesory to murder, eat a dick
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