Nuts on your Chin

Battle Hymns · 06-23-2013, 01:16 AM

Random Bars:

I'm twisted off of blunts
when twistin niggas head off for stunts
for bein pussy, I'ma ravage cunts
see tha kids come around when tha gun's cocked
like puffy, I can't and won't stop,
thinkin your safe because your homes locked?
till I kick in tha door wit a dome shot
before you phone cops, in a low tone, shocked,
saying no no no, --pop--, when Im goin solo, ock
so you're holdin no spot, just foldin on tha spot
like futons when this fools bombed and he's on tha news
n' his mom has no clue showing tha live reaction
cuz I'm tha live reaction when taking action
i've taken factions and rape them till they're fractions
so don't ask what happen when I'm rappin and start attackin
cuz I blacked out wit tha gat out as soon as you act out

watch tha trajectory..cuz I dissect sets wit twin secs ta see
who will die by my ecstasy so don't stand next ta me, tha Ill mc
none of you can come close ta killin me, willingly committin atrocities
war is my canvas to display my animosity, straight savage wit tha pen
You... are average and like to pretend, while I ravage and ascend
cuz Ima maverick who offends.. it's a means to an end
and an end which will mean I'm taking away triple beam dreams

I'm slick wit words, splittin vocal chords wit swords,
running wit hords, who pray to tha lord as they slay herbs,
who exchanged words not knowing they're talking to death
and are about to take their last breath, when they step
into your direction and act on natures natural selection

Atomic · 06-23-2013, 01:22 AM

LMFAO..... please never enter one of my battles ever again

Battle Hymns · 06-23-2013, 01:23 AM

Set up a match and get that ass spanked

Atomic · 06-23-2013, 01:24 AM

are you openly gay or something?

Battle Hymns · 06-23-2013, 01:25 AM

I'm not... But what's wrong with being gay?

Are you a xenophobic, bible thumper, biyatch?

Advocate · 06-23-2013, 01:26 AM

Not bad, for the most part I really liked it. Thought the content wise pretty simple, at the same time, what made your first verse interestin was how you were able to form a sequence of events to make a statement. It had a good rhythm to it tho, if anything try to add some more punchlines, not too many tho. But have enough to make it stand out from just your average everyday rhyme. All in all, wasn't a bad drop. Keep writing, and nice work!

Geno · 06-23-2013, 10:54 AM

Need work puting rhymes together in a more tightly knit fashion. Not bad for an opener to the site. Glad your here,, keep reading/responding and writing and ull elevate quickly at this site. Guaranteed.

Battle Hymns · 06-23-2013, 07:14 PM

Thanks...

Any more people want to say anything or kat caught your tongue? : )

@ Advocate, I'll be hollering at you soon

Advocate · 06-23-2013, 07:25 PM

Aite then son, hold it down.

Battle Hymns · 06-24-2013, 07:33 PM

55 views and only 2 responses.. lmfao its easy to piss you guys off

Minds · 06-24-2013, 10:52 PM

If it truly was random off the top then not bad. Good flow for the most part some okay lines but definitely random ha!

06-23-2013, 01:16 AM	#1
Battle Hymns Loves Meth Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Some where in the city of CHI Posts: 243 Battle Record: 0-2 Accomplishments - Founding Father of Hip-Hop Rep Power: 37	Nuts on your Chin Random Bars: I'm twisted off of blunts when twistin niggas head off for stunts for bein pussy, I'ma ravage cunts see tha kids come around when tha gun's cocked like puffy, I can't and won't stop, thinkin your safe because your homes locked? till I kick in tha door wit a dome shot before you phone cops, in a low tone, shocked, saying no no no, --pop--, when Im goin solo, ock so you're holdin no spot, just foldin on tha spot like futons when this fools bombed and he's on tha news n' his mom has no clue showing tha live reaction cuz I'm tha live reaction when taking action i've taken factions and rape them till they're fractions so don't ask what happen when I'm rappin and start attackin cuz I blacked out wit tha gat out as soon as you act out watch tha trajectory..cuz I dissect sets wit twin secs ta see who will die by my ecstasy so don't stand next ta me, tha Ill mc none of you can come close ta killin me, willingly committin atrocities war is my canvas to display my animosity, straight savage wit tha pen You... are average and like to pretend, while I ravage and ascend cuz Ima maverick who offends.. it's a means to an end and an end which will mean I'm taking away triple beam dreams I'm slick wit words, splittin vocal chords wit swords, running wit hords, who pray to tha lord as they slay herbs, who exchanged words not knowing they're talking to death and are about to take their last breath, when they step into your direction and act on natures natural selection

06-23-2013, 10:54 AM	#7
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Need work puting rhymes together in a more tightly knit fashion. Not bad for an opener to the site. Glad your here,, keep reading/responding and writing and ull elevate quickly at this site. Guaranteed. __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

06-24-2013, 07:33 PM	#10
Battle Hymns Loves Meth Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Some where in the city of CHI Posts: 243 Battle Record: 0-2 Accomplishments - Founding Father of Hip-Hop Rep Power: 37	55 views and only 2 responses.. lmfao its easy to piss you guys off __________________ A(xiom), P(slam), Pursuer OV Knowledjh, Battle Hymnz, "shout out to the motherland with guns in hands"

06-23-2013, 01:22 AM	#2
Atomic official hypedaddy. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 951 Battle Record: 11-12 Champed - Sickeningly White Night VI - Longbar Heavyweight Belt (0x) - Shortbar Featherweight Belt (0x) Rep Power: 0	LMFAO..... please never enter one of my battles ever again

06-23-2013, 01:23 AM	#3
Battle Hymns Loves Meth Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Some where in the city of CHI Posts: 243 Battle Record: 0-2 Accomplishments - Founding Father of Hip-Hop Rep Power: 37	Set up a match and get that ass spanked

06-23-2013, 01:24 AM	#4
Atomic official hypedaddy. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 951 Battle Record: 11-12 Champed - Sickeningly White Night VI - Longbar Heavyweight Belt (0x) - Shortbar Featherweight Belt (0x) Rep Power: 0	are you openly gay or something?

06-23-2013, 01:25 AM	#5
Battle Hymns Loves Meth Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Some where in the city of CHI Posts: 243 Battle Record: 0-2 Accomplishments - Founding Father of Hip-Hop Rep Power: 37	I'm not... But what's wrong with being gay? Are you a xenophobic, bible thumper, biyatch?

06-23-2013, 01:26 AM	#6
Advocate Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Harlem, NY Posts: 57 Rep Power: 37	Not bad, for the most part I really liked it. Thought the content wise pretty simple, at the same time, what made your first verse interestin was how you were able to form a sequence of events to make a statement. It had a good rhythm to it tho, if anything try to add some more punchlines, not too many tho. But have enough to make it stand out from just your average everyday rhyme. All in all, wasn't a bad drop. Keep writing, and nice work!

06-23-2013, 07:14 PM	#8
Battle Hymns Loves Meth Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Some where in the city of CHI Posts: 243 Battle Record: 0-2 Accomplishments - Founding Father of Hip-Hop Rep Power: 37	Thanks... Any more people want to say anything or kat caught your tongue? : ) @ Advocate, I'll be hollering at you soon

06-23-2013, 07:25 PM	#9
Advocate Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Harlem, NY Posts: 57 Rep Power: 37	Aite then son, hold it down.

06-24-2013, 10:52 PM	#11
Minds Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Houston, TX Posts: 22 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 37	If it truly was random off the top then not bad. Good flow for the most part some okay lines but definitely random ha!