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Old 06-30-2014, 10:12 PM   #1
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10 lines cool? My verse is all done. Ready when u are.

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Old 07-02-2014, 09:53 AM   #2
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Old 07-02-2014, 12:33 PM   #3
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I’m ‘burying’ this thug today... he can’t match the blood I gave,
No fucking way… he accepted?! Doug literally just ‘Doug’ his grave !
Honestly mental, like a body shot from rocky u probably tremble,
He SUCKS ! … Couldn’t put “Funny On” watching Comedy Central !
I smack nerds with rap words that hurt these stupid bastards,
Yo G… U ‘OD’ on my dope lines, cause your ass is 'BACKWARDS' !
Wrote this pattern on SATURN, an alien that’s wreckin’ ya crew,
I’ma kill u “DOG” … until my every single line is directed at “U” ! DOUG
Only take a second or two … to find out who’s the rap GOAT,
And we all know it’s “NOT FUNNY” ……...........……….. like a bad joke ! (haha)
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Old 07-02-2014, 09:42 PM   #4
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It's only one doctor who can save rouke if I goes off on him
Basically you'll need to be 'round House when i give u one across yo chin
Idk if its rook roak rock or if I should just call u hoe ass bitch
but who cares about ya name, its only the coroners job to know that shit
My handspeed is all profound and shit
I'll confuse you with a bat in my hand, then help u wrap ya brains around the shit
And I heard u getting cabbage
Dog I don't really carrot just gives me another reason to beet & pound u in.
And your style is just funny to folks
You got mad quotes IN it... But u ain't gone have none in the votes

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Old 07-03-2014, 10:41 AM   #5
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Old 07-03-2014, 10:58 AM   #6
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I’m ‘burying’ this thug today... he can’t match the blood I gave,
No fucking way… he accepted?! Doug literally just ‘Doug’ his grave !

Eh... Creative flip on his name, not really an effective punch, IMO.

Honestly mental, like a body shot from rocky u probably tremble,
He SUCKS ! … Couldn’t put “Funny On” watching Comedy Central !

This was wack... Not to mention Comedy Central concepts were used in like 2004.

I smack nerds with rap words that hurt these stupid bastards,
Yo G… U ‘OD’ on my dope lines, cause your ass is 'BACKWARDS' !

Another creative flip on his names, but again. Not really an effective punch.

Wrote this pattern on SATURN, an alien that’s wreckin’ ya crew,
I’ma kill u “DOG” … until my every single line is directed at “U” ! DOUG

Same as the above & opener but came out more statement'ish then insult'ish.

Only take a second or two … to find out who’s the rap GOAT,
And we all know it’s “NOT FUNNY” ……...........……….. like a bad joke ! (haha)

Didn't like this...
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It's only one doctor who can save rouke if I goes off on him
Basically you'll need to be 'round House when i give u one across yo chin

Cool.

Idk if its rook roak rock or if I should just call u hoe ass bitch
but who cares about ya name, its only the coroners job to know that shit

Eh... could have been better.

My handspeed is all profound and shit
I'll confuse you with a bat in my hand, then help u wrap ya brains around the shit

Played concept w/ barely a fresh twist/reference.

And I heard u getting cabbage
Dog I don't really carrot just gives me another reason to beet & pound u in.

Creative wordplay but doesn't work both ways.

And your style is just funny to folks
You got mad quotes IN it... But u ain't gone have none in the votes

Seen these concepts done many times, but seems its a direct personal considerin all the quotations he used in his verse. This will probably be considered feeding and a DQ'able offense.
OVERALL: Feelin' the creativity in the verses but nothing really stood out as effective or damaging in regards to punches. I think Doug had that one round house play, which I felt was cool but IMO, was one of his better bars and Rouke or w/e your name is had the Backwards flip but wasn't really damaging, possibly a Jab at best. If I had to go punch for punch, I'd have to say this is a coin toss. Can probably go either way depending on personal preference, but I'd have to say, I enjoyed Doug's verse as he had more of a battle verse as where the othwer guy was just trying to pick at his name and come up with creative statements that weren't really effective, IMO. So with that being said...

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V- Doug funny

Clearly onesided

Rouke - no quotables imo

Funny - carrot beet line woo
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I’m ‘burying’ this thug today... he can’t match the blood I gave,
No fucking way… he accepted?! Doug literally just ‘Doug’ his grave !
Ok nameplay just no real impact behind it...
Honestly mental, like a body shot from rocky u probably tremble,
He SUCKS ! … Couldn’t put “Funny On” watching Comedy Central !
Not feeling, Weak.
I smack nerds with rap words that hurt these stupid bastards,
Yo G… U ‘OD’ on my dope lines, cause your ass is 'BACKWARDS' !
Cool nameplay concept. executed ok
Wrote this pattern on SATURN, an alien that’s wreckin’ ya crew,
I’ma kill u “DOG” … until my every single line is directed at
Creative concept just connection is off and came off weak
Only take a second or two … to find out who’s the rap GOAT,
And we all know it’s “NOT FUNNY” ……...........……….. like a bad joke ! (haha)
lol wtf no
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It's only one doctor who can save rouke if I goes off on him
Basically you'll need to be 'round House when i give u one across yo chin
Doctor/Round House. Cool, sold hit.
Idk if its rook roak rock or if I should just call u hoe ass bitch
but who cares about ya name, its only the coroners job to know that shit
nah weak
My handspeed is all profound and shit
I'll confuse you with a bat in my hand, then help u wrap ya brains around the shit
not feeling
And I heard u getting cabbage
Dog I don't really carrot just gives me another reason to beet & pound u in.
Nah wp is weak and played
And your style is just funny to folks
You got mad quotes IN it... But u ain't gone have none in the votes
LOL solid coo
Vote - Doug Funny

Explanation: Rouke had some creative concepts that kind of remind of a old longbar style, but most of his concepts got lost and had no sting behind him. Doug had a 1-2 solid hits and better overall verse.
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Lol wow this site is really terrible or this is amens alias. That carrot beet line I already heard plenty of times before and could be directed at anyone. All my lines were directed at him but that counts fir nothing around here I guess. And why are u deleting my post? Amens vote shouldn't count since I dissed him in the past so his vote is biased
Can you stop. You are now swaying and that is not tolerated if I see votes that aren't explained or any hate votes I will not count. Stop it.
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Nigga you ain't heard that carrot line before you a lie!
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Yo G… U ‘OD’ on my dope lines, cause your ass is 'BACKWARDS' !
Wrote this pattern on SATURN, an alien that’s wreckin’ ya crew,
I’ma kill u “DOG” … until my every single line is directed at “U” ! DOUG

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I'll confuse you with a bat in my hand, then help u wrap ya brains around the shit
And I heard u getting cabbage
Dog I don't really carrot just gives me another reason to beet & pound u in.



wasnt really feeling the nameflips. thought they were creative but lacked real hitting power. didnt have that "oh shit, that was dope" factor. actually thought the carrot/beet angle was pretty slick and it flowed nicely, which is always a good thing IMO. close battle. liked it, just felt doug edged it.

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Rouke that was weak you need more work
Vote- DF he a better verse compare to Roke
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Doug Funny wins via KO

Doug Funny: 5pts KO -2 for veto'd voting links. 3pts. If you aren't going to explain your votes dont battle here.

Rouke: 0pts for loss +2 for voting links.
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