07-10-2014, 01:14 PM | #1 |
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Doug Funny vs jilti [Jilti WINS]
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07-13-2014, 01:57 PM | #2 |
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Cmon jilati,
Who the fuck, u getting shot soon as u finish my willoughby You relate to no one, at least you'll save time with how short the fuckin will'll be You got no potential. Ya style old, and its not getting newer Ninja turtle ass nigga.. ya Fuckin ceiling, is the top of the sewer You prolly be employee of the month if u wanna war You'll have time to help any customer around.. Imma fuckin leave u on the floor Carjack you... hit u w/ yo shit, ...now u on the roof while I'm on the road Screaming you don't wanna die; Ironic how yo ass died, on your own accord My fists light niggas up. So if u step wrong Imma use ya glass jaw, just to give me something to reflect on |
07-16-2014, 02:15 AM | #3 |
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this a quick key. now don't get excited, i didn't say Quickie potna'
but the way Jils mopping the floor with him'll look like a commercial for cleaning products ur not on my level. i got a BA in science, ur just gonna get buried there son cuz this aint a game, until they Dig Dug up after i put the pump to his chest area ya girl scares us. she's loose & fat, huge w/flab u have to tuck inward run squidward. cuz if Doug Fister, it'll get ate too (8-2) like that one pitcher Fun w/glitter. walks with a sway cuz hips dont lie of course so when this Bi Out,Pride Shows. that's a move UFC would co-sign for if Doug Funny my punches are tongue n cheek, til his gums bloody Clown this hungry bum like nothing while i take his McDonald's lunch money Last edited by jilti; 07-23-2014 at 02:42 PM. |
07-21-2014, 07:15 AM | #4 |
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07-23-2014, 08:39 PM | #5 |
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Not too big if a fan of this one. On one hand J had better concepts but the wording was poor. The dig dug line would have been hot if executed better. Doug just needs better lines period. Fresher ideas with more creativity. If J really did quick key that verse then I guess I understand but even still he gets the nod for a bit of a better verse.
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07-23-2014, 10:08 PM | #6 |
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To be honest I think was even battle both need a lil more work,
J had some good Concepts, wordplay need more work. DF- This was eh, your bars lacking, next time add more creativity, flows, Punchlines & Personals. Vote-J |
07-23-2014, 10:43 PM | #7 |
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Silver vote doesnt count. Not explained enough. back up vote with quotes, lotb something that proves you read both verses.
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07-24-2014, 12:00 AM | #8 |
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Sewer. Accord could of been dope but fumbled the wording.
Vs Opener n everything else was worded pretty good. Jil takes ths with wording in my opinion. Crispier n u could tell where he wantedto go with his concepts. Doug was all over the place with the wording imo. Good battle guys. V jil |
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07-28-2014, 10:31 AM | #10 |
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Dont know this battle wasnt yall best didnt feel like either of u put any effort in and like others said jil some of ur wordplay was forced and i felt like it took u a while to get any punches in i did enjoy ur last bar about tounge and cheek but i didnt like any of doug funnys so therefore my vote goes to jilti
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07-29-2014, 03:45 AM | #11 |
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3-1 jilti
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07-30-2014, 01:59 PM | #12 |
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My fists light niggas up. So if u step wrong
Imma use ya glass jaw, just to give me something to reflect on vs this a quick key. now don't get excited, i didn't say Quickie potna' but the way Jils mopping the floor with him'll look like a commercial for cleaning products ya girl scares us. she's loose & fat, huge w/flab u have to tuck inward run squidward. cuz if Doug Fister, it'll get ate too (8-2) like that one pitcher didnt really feel much of dougs verse. even the quoted bar was a played joint. gotta think of better concepts and flips. nothing stood as decent. jilti had a few fresh concepts that landed aight. have to be in the know on a few of em but the concepts were fresh to me. v. jilti |
08-06-2014, 12:22 AM | #13 |
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4-1 jilti
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08-06-2014, 09:25 PM | #14 |
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Voting jolti here
He had 5 of the best 6 concepts in this battle Both were wording thieir bars poorly Doug had some very played thoughts ... Also Don't show us the wordplay ... Well get the wordplay bro lol V/ jilti
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08-13-2014, 04:17 AM | #15 |
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jilti wins 5-1
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