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Old 07-11-2014, 09:34 AM   #1
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You reckon i call the shots, if i participate, we'll be packin sawn-offs and glocks, to facilitate my thoughts tat have gone orthodox, fuck the cops I've gone off the top,
just came off a session,
and i get the impression, tat deep down in your fuckin head you have a little question,
is the pressure much man what's your obsession,

Wat if we get caught man or make no progression, im only thinkin out the box man its just a suggestion, we should get a faster getaway car,

Man do you fuckin realise how pathetic you are, traffic congestion ain't holdin me back, neither are you mother fucker show me map,
i need you to grow up and go get the straps,
so we can blow up when we hold up for stacks upon stacks,
so i need your full cooperation to go through with this,
and id appreciate no hesitation when were doing this, so concentrate ill keep sayin till im blue in the face, when we shootin the place,
then escape,
out the entrance and we losing no pace so we, unrecognized,did i forget to mention tat i specialize, you think im pretending let me emphasize, the beginning is the ending of the exercise, if you memorize how i terrorize, im so organized i order guys to disorganize and traumatize every one in the building tats homicide if you cross the line, ill kill them,
So let me describe a picture in your head and illustrate, how much money ill provide tat we can emigrate, to the states or even hide up in your mates, tats a solid place im sure he can acommodate,
If you contemplate, the constant wait will compensate for us gettin caught and coffened or locked away, so get on your knees, to stop and pray, to lord above,
the most powerful genius, cleanz me from all my weakness and meanness.i wanna be the most cleanest extremist, and believe im a phoenix, it all seems tat its seamless, it can seem we'll achieve it, turn the silence to screaming, and the screaming to silence, then i wake up, after dreaming of stealing some diamonds,,
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Old 07-11-2014, 01:45 PM   #2
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ok, this was better than the crazy rhying paagraph. at least you were telling a story. it seemed childish though. you need more of a shock factor in your delivery amongst other things.

story is cool. the way you worded it sucked. but the gist was there

and yo.. you really need to drop some feedback on other peoples shit if your gonna be bombarding my OM with three verses back to back. cant be flooding it with your shit and not showing love to others
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