Round One: Windu Tuako vs. Piiz [Piiz wins (NS)]

Adonis · 07-25-2014, 01:38 AM

Verses will be due Friday at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK. There are no Extensions. No Exceptions.

Verses must be a minimum of 10 Lines and maximum of 48 Lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by both competitors.

Votes will be due Sundays at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK .

View Other Rules Here

Goodluck

@Windu Tuako @Piiz

Topic:

Piiz · 07-28-2014, 01:40 PM

Check

Window Taco · 07-28-2014, 08:46 PM

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Piiz · 07-29-2014, 10:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Windu Tuako

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how many lines?

EDIT: I'd be down for like 20ish cause i have a busy week. can make time to write more if you want.

Window Taco · 07-29-2014, 10:44 PM

Let's do 20.

Piiz · 07-30-2014, 03:11 AM

Cunt Full of Karma

He’s sayin Honey, do this.. It’s like a melon was calling
I’m Ellen Molly. Eleven. Sobbing, and I’m melancholy
I need rescue, often he would suggest to see all’ve it
Caressed my top till the left was falling. Erect or not,
My hellish felon father oggles my developing body

In my mind he’s a goner. You’re not aligning with Gods word
So I’ll kill the world around you, but survivors aren’t honored
Papa, you’ll rise into conscious with eyes in the darkness
All who died in the trauma, rise from their coffins, dying to haunt ya
This alliance of monsters will bite at your carcass like violent vultures
I’m in the spot rewinding thoughts in my mind to drop it. Lay it all at ease
It takes a lot from me. And you’ll suffer like the pain ‘n pride you lost in me
I CURSE YOU! Worthless, “pious” dope. My life? Miss-shaped anomaly.
I’ll murder you while SMILIN! No one heard the burst of cries because
The words are stuck inside my throat likes knives in tracheotomies

Smiled at the thought of birth like shes a sure gift
Now hes opting in to fondle both my premature tits
The solitude that follows was a scene of pure bliss
With a hollowed soul, my pot of golds your seed matured, It’s
obscene for sure but WITHIN ME is the gleam of YOUR KID

King Ra. · 08-02-2014, 03:14 AM

Piiz wins by no show.

07-25-2014, 01:38 AM	#1
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	Round One: Windu Tuako vs. Piiz [Piiz wins (NS)] Verses will be due Friday at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK. There are no Extensions. No Exceptions. Verses must be a minimum of 10 Lines and maximum of 48 Lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by both competitors. Votes will be due Sundays at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK . View Other Rules Here Goodluck @Windu Tuako @Piiz Topic: __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

07-28-2014, 08:46 PM	#3
Window Taco can I help u? Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 236 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 888971	Check __________________ aka windu tuako

07-29-2014, 10:44 PM	#5
Window Taco can I help u? Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 236 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 888971	Let's do 20. __________________ aka windu tuako

08-02-2014, 03:14 AM	#7
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	Piiz wins by no show. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

07-28-2014, 01:40 PM	#2
Piiz Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 22 Rep Power: 0	Check

07-30-2014, 03:11 AM	#6
Piiz Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 22 Rep Power: 0	Cunt Full of Karma He’s sayin Honey, do this.. It’s like a melon was calling I’m Ellen Molly. Eleven. Sobbing, and I’m melancholy I need rescue, often he would suggest to see all’ve it Caressed my top till the left was falling. Erect or not, My hellish felon father oggles my developing body In my mind he’s a goner. You’re not aligning with Gods word So I’ll kill the world around you, but survivors aren’t honored Papa, you’ll rise into conscious with eyes in the darkness All who died in the trauma, rise from their coffins, dying to haunt ya This alliance of monsters will bite at your carcass like violent vultures I’m in the spot rewinding thoughts in my mind to drop it. Lay it all at ease It takes a lot from me. And you’ll suffer like the pain ‘n pride you lost in me I CURSE YOU! Worthless, “pious” dope. My life? Miss-shaped anomaly. I’ll murder you while SMILIN! No one heard the burst of cries because The words are stuck inside my throat likes knives in tracheotomies Smiled at the thought of birth like shes a sure gift Now hes opting in to fondle both my premature tits The solitude that follows was a scene of pure bliss With a hollowed soul, my pot of golds your seed matured, It’s obscene for sure but WITHIN ME is the gleam of YOUR KID