07-26-2014, 02:02 PM | #1 |
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K Huntsman vs Jilti [jilti WINS]
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07-26-2014, 03:16 PM | #2 |
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07-29-2014, 04:09 PM | #3 |
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07-30-2014, 12:57 PM | #4 |
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i bring fire & brimstone. Undertaker in his prime with a 666 code
this battle will bring out the Helen Hunt, only to show how much of a bitch he is tho if my headrest in ur girl, she'll shake & exorcise demons from the bed post but heck no! we can all bet that hoe Lucifer pussy burns Mormon than the devil its pitiful this dude'll never find the g-spot when he hits the cooch if a girl ever says "K,Ohh right there".. she's just pointing out what i did to u peep the skill set as heel get permanently scarred from spinning wheel kicks cuz this real BigFoot gonna Mark Hunts face worse than Antonio Silva did ur filler kid, face it. fan base went from imagination to can't trace it so if anyone listen to K-Rock, must have the radio set to that station Last edited by jilti; 07-30-2014 at 03:43 PM. |
07-30-2014, 03:10 PM | #5 |
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you beating me is a false legend, so don't bet ya soul n go to hell..
but if you see a dude jack n jil - chances are it's WAY more than a fairy tale yur wack ass fuck, every battle I read ya rep ain't gettin higher & them punches don't just fall short, they crash land w/ no chance of survivors ill stomp em out n call the crew, watch em fall through wit Tim's it's alarmin cuz when they reboot his chest - it'll take hospital a.e.ds right off the market ^ my clique is no joke either, we come prepared w/ loaded clips watchin his lard ass wife in bed is the only time he's seen a force rollin thick fuckin nerd, what's the math say on ya chances when I throw blows this battles a geometry master piece - the way I've got this square in a triangular choke hold Last edited by K Huntsman; 07-30-2014 at 03:12 PM. Reason: Missed a word |
07-31-2014, 12:48 AM | #6 |
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i bring fire & brimstone. Undertaker in his prime with a 666 code this battle will bring out the Helen Hunt, only to show how much of a bitch he is tho ^ I didn't really like the set up there but I liked that punch. if my headrest in ur girl, she'll shake & exorcise demons from the bed post but heck no! we can all bet that hoe Lucifer pussy burns Mormon than the devil ^ dope wordplay and way to stick it all together. its pitiful this dude'll never find the g-spot when he hits the cooch if a girl ever says "K,Ohh right there".. she's just pointing out what i did to u ^ looool nice. peep the skill set as heel get permanently scarred from spinning wheel kicks cuz this real BigFoot gonna Mark Hunts face worse than Antonio Silva did ^ doooope. ur filler kid, face it. fan base went from imagination to can't trace it so if anyone listen to K-Rock, must have the radio set to that station ^didn't like the closer, might be a line most people won't get it, got to appeal to a bigger than local audience. Plus it just wasn't that hard of a punch to begin with, not a strong way to end. Hunt: you beating me is a false legend, so don't bet ya soul n go to hell.. but if you see a dude jack n jil - chances are it's WAY more than a fairy tale ^ decent bar and cool nameplay. yur wack ass fuck, every battle I read ya rep ain't gettin higher & them punches don't just fall short, they crash land w/ no chance of survivors ^ decent once again no big WOW here ill stomp em out n call the crew, watch em fall through wit Tim's it's alarmin cuz when they reboot his chest - it'll take hospital a.e.ds right off the market ^ haha okay got a laugh. ^ my clique is no joke either, we come prepared w/ loaded clips watchin his lard ass wife in bed is the only time he's seen a force rollin thick ^ lol funny but not too hard hitting. fuckin nerd, what's the math say on ya chances when I throw blows this battles a geometry master piece - the way I've got this square in a triangular choke hold ^ not a great closer but an okay bar in all tbh. Jilti gets my vote, just had more hard hitting bars, the closer wasn't very likeable but the quality of the overall verse was better than Hunts, but you had an okay verse too fam just not enough to win this battle. Vote: Jilti |
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yur wack ass fuck, every battle I read ya rep ain't gettin higher & them punches don't just fall short, they crash land w/ no chance of survivors ill stomp em out n call the crew, watch em fall through wit Tim's it's alarmin cuz when they reboot his chest - it'll take hospital a.e.ds right off the market ^ my clique is no joke either, we come prepared w/ loaded clips watchin his lard ass wife in bed is the only time he's seen a force rollin thick fuckin nerd, what's the math say on ya chances when I throw blows this battles a geometry master piece - the way I've got this square in a triangular choke hold[/QUOT Quote:
I have Huntsman taking this. He went through a stretch where nearly every b ar was hitting on some level of effectiveness. Jil had a couple good bars and I can see the progression. v-Hunts |
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08-06-2014, 12:59 PM | #8 |
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08-06-2014, 02:22 PM | #9 |
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08-06-2014, 09:36 PM | #10 |
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Lucifer Vs Fall short Cool battle Those 3 I thought were the standouts but you guys both had other ones that were real close to being quoted too. Hope you guys continue to battle around the BA cool battle I got jil for just hitting a bit harder and being a bit more consistent Cool stuff
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08-15-2014, 08:06 AM | #12 |
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bring fire & brimstone. Undertaker in his prime with a 666 code
this battle will bring out the Helen Hunt, only to show how much of a bitch he is tho if my headrest in ur girl, she'll shake & exorcise demons from the bed post but heck no! we can all bet that hoe Lucifer pussy burns Mormon than the devil v you beating me is a false legend, so don't bet ya soul n go to hell.. but if you see a dude jack n jil - chances are it's WAY more than a fairy tale I got Jilti on this just down to consistency |
08-27-2014, 04:44 AM | #13 |
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08-27-2014, 02:59 PM | #14 |
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i bring fire & brimstone. Undertaker in his prime with a 666 code this battle will bring out the Helen Hunt, only to show how much of a bitch he is tho ^ Ew, that's a clever & dope opener. Feeling how well everything connects. Most people get too complex with their shit and sacrifice the punch, but you kept it all consistent. Had to look up who Helen Hunt was for the "Hell In Hunt" wordplay, but that's okay. A little bit of research never hurt anyone. if my headrest in ur girl, she'll shake & exorcise demons from the bed post but heck no! we can all bet that hoe Lucifer pussy burns Mormon than the devil ^ LMAO. Dope wordplay here as well. As creative as this was, I still feel like the wording could've slightly tweaked in some fashion to support the "Lucifer pussy Burns Mormon Than..." side of the flip. But, you did a good job with this. its pitiful this dude'll never find the g-spot when he hits the cooch if a girl ever says "K,Ohh right there".. she's just pointing out what i did to u ^ Lmfao. Very nice punch / wordplay / nameplay combo. peep the skill set as heel get permanently scarred from spinning wheel kicks cuz this real BigFoot gonna Mark Hunts face worse than Antonio Silva did ^ ILL. Not much else to say other than that. Everything is connected, consistent, and hits hard as fuck. Your wordplay is your strong-suit I see... ur filler kid, face it. fan base went from imagination to can't trace it so if anyone listen to K-Rock, must have the radio set to that station ^ Hahaha. Niceeee closer. K.Huntsman: you beating me is a false legend, so don't bet ya soul n go to hell.. but if you see a dude jack n jil - chances are it's WAY more than a fairy tale ^ Decent, decent. I've seen many Jack 'n Jil lines, but you pulled this off in a cool manner. No real complaints. yur wack ass fuck, every battle I read ya rep ain't gettin higher & them punches don't just fall short, they crash land w/ no chance of survivors ^ LMAO. Dirty shit. Feeling the imagery you created with that metaphor. Hard-hitting for sure. ill stomp em out n call the crew, watch em fall through wit Tim's it's alarmin cuz when they reboot his chest - it'll take hospital a.e.ds right off the market ^ Eh. This is okay. ^ my clique is no joke either, we come prepared w/ loaded clips watchin his lard ass wife in bed is the only time he's seen a force rollin thick ^ Nah... fuckin nerd, what's the math say on ya chances when I throw blows this battles a geometry master piece - the way I've got this square in a triangular choke hold ^ Pretty cool. Could've been executed more effectively with some re-wording, but it's decent. Vote: Jilti. His verse was just a continuous, rapid attack that didn't seem to fall off at any point. Seemed to hold far more impact, creativity, and enjoyment. |
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4-1 jilti wins tko.
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