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07-28-2013, 03:38 PM
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open question
Besides my battle with sik..im not sure wtf you guys are looking for or grading half most of the stuff i see wouldnt be said in a real battle or is this mostly about a witty line and flip? And im asking so real insight no homo bs..i can clearly see how this grows you as a writer but what works here? Again not complain or bitch a nigga just wanna learn the ropes
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07-28-2013, 03:41 PM
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HE / HIM / FRAC
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: PA
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Read thru some of the summer classic battles
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07-28-2013, 03:41 PM
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Post some bars.
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07-28-2013, 03:43 PM
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I'm not the best guy to help you in this regard, but post a few lines and im sure someone will give u some advice.
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