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Old 07-29-2013, 02:12 PM   #1
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Cover the truth with lies to the two by two in lines
The herd hear the cries of the kids in savannah skies
But the times urge us to scourge the Earth and murder and lie
Before we look to see the curse that we cast outside our curtains or die.

It's all in the books. And in the looks of the populace.
What's popular has toppled us while the gaze of the eye is watchin us,
So we conform to the norms, til greed makes us deformed,
And our children copy us ,till the letter. Nobody's stoppin us,
always laudin us to be 'more!! and Better!!'.

But humans never existed for the poisonous kisses,
It isn't our mission to annihilate the wisdom. Listen.
And now we need more than a truce to bring us the fruit to move the times
Cause they try to turn us to gloop with their nukes and this crude-refined
The chemicals of apocalypse. though filtered and fine
Still toxic. When will we learn. Drink petrol. we'll die.
The tears in our eyes are forever running, it's poignant
I hear the kids stomachs, starvin, They can't eat money or coinage.
I'm annoyed at this pointless poise. Game's and toys
Pain and still the bastards censor the rage in this voice.
Takin choice, breakin free will with the pace of force,
Humans putrid and moist, and when it rains, fuck don't it pour.

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Old 07-29-2013, 06:21 PM   #2
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I like the conspiracy theory vibe of this, but needs a little more focus. I'd write more, but I ust did and got disconnected from the site so blame the site. This was cool in some places, but should focus on a view points instead of random thoughts put together i think.
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