09-24-2014, 10:03 PM | #1 |
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Packed Graves vs. Jilti [Packed Graves Wins]
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09-24-2014, 11:59 PM | #2 |
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09-26-2014, 10:16 AM | #3 |
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his fat girl gets passed around NFL practices like towels, so now Packer Backup
while some random man has his hands on the Pigskin, and another after that one |
09-26-2014, 09:39 PM | #4 |
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in this match your fucked, it's a tomb for this late great scrub
cuz on this date you'll see Tease giving up with out help from a date rape drug |
09-26-2014, 10:01 PM | #5 |
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Jilti...like the nameflip...setup...his fat girl/pigskin was dope...had a lot goin on in two lines...football/girl diss/nameplays all tied together....packer backup /after that one wasnt that smooth being spread apart so much..
Pg..ti's/tease...nameplay was dope...set up matched aight...fucked/tease/date rape... Didnt catch late great scrub...unless thats juz a rhyming filler....the tease goin wit date rape doesnt fit great...they wouldnt be teasin...this was pretty close... Feelin the creativity tho...so Vote...guilty..... Jilti |
09-26-2014, 10:18 PM | #6 |
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How is jilti's name pronounced neway
Jill tie Or jill tee Orrrr
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09-28-2014, 06:35 AM | #7 |
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Have to go with PG here. The "Packer Backup" np was clever as shit, but the positioning of it felt choppy. You could have inserted it somewhere else and it would have made a much better fit (pause everything after "You could have" roflzzz wtf). PG used a date rape drug line that was extremely effective on Jilti (pause all this shit too lmao). In the end rofl fuck I'm done.
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09-29-2014, 10:26 AM | #9 |
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Jilti had a played concept imo.. Im sure everyone here has probably seen/used a pigskin line at one point. PG had an ok nameplay but his wording could have been harder.
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09-29-2014, 12:55 PM | #10 |
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The way Jilti executed the bar was kind of lazy to me. I think he had a cool concept with Pigskin / Packer / Football, but the execution wasn't up to par. Packed had a cool concept as well and executed his better.
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09-29-2014, 12:59 PM | #11 |
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i think the nfl concept has to be executed flawlessly
to have an impact. the wording here was off. fat girl packer backup/pigskin was a weak build up and punch packed on the other hand, had a solid nameplay. but it wouldve hit harder if he said, "tease giving IT up" but other than that, it was clean amd we have an upset vote: packed
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09-29-2014, 01:32 PM | #12 |
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Jil was iight but packed hit harder
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09-29-2014, 05:25 PM | #13 |
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I felt j could have approached the name play differently. The bar was out together weird where pg's was smooth and everything tied together.
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09-30-2014, 01:05 AM | #14 |
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Tough call. I feel Jilti had a cool line and it did tie into nameplay which is a plus but so did packed graves. So I think due completely to the execution Graves took this one by a hair.
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09-30-2014, 03:23 PM | #15 |
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Jilti's punch was alight for the soft jab... Graves shit flowed well and it hit harder to me, I actually liked it
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